Recent Comments

11/13/23, 3:37 AM
Really enjoy clothing induced transformations like this, thank you for commissioning it, and Ethan for writing it. "Rice queen" may not be very "PC", but damn if terms like that don't help get me going.

11/13/23, 3:38 AM
@[hauntedskin](/user/show/13488) Thank you for enjoying it! I know the story's subject matter is very niche and sort of taboo, but sometimes you just gotta go for it.
Anonymous
11/13/23, 2:05 AM
Miss this story
11/13/23, 1:38 AM
Oh lord this was such a hot story! I've read it and enjoyed it multiple times. So hot!
11/12/23, 11:05 PM
Please continue this beautiful story.
11/12/23, 10:02 PM
I loved that story a lot! And I really liked the element of the wishes being Devin's rather than Jacob's. Great job!
11/12/23, 8:40 PM
This deserves many more chapters.
Anonymous
11/3/23, 7:37 AM
New Chapter this weekend?

11/5/23, 2:42 PM
@Anonymous Next weekend.

Anonymous
11/11/23, 9:22 AM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Today or Sunday? :)

11/11/23, 2:08 PM
@Anonymous I've added the next chapter. Just wait for the admins to approve it.

Anonymous
11/12/23, 7:57 PM
@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Do you think there's a problem about the chapter? some others has been added today and nothing about your chapter, I hope this is just delayed by the admins for approbation
11/11/23, 6:08 PM
I really like this story! I liked the professional way they interact.Then now that they work together, who knows what happens...

11/12/23, 5:28 PM
@[AndVer](/user/show/10033155) Thank u so much! <3 Keep following for more stories!
11/12/23, 2:48 PM
Pregnant pause??

Anonymous
11/12/23, 3:36 PM
@[Lavender Lad](/user/show/10019272) Yep. It means a pause with significant meaning.
11/12/23, 3:05 PM
I don't know who's telling you that, but I love long stories :-)
10/14/19, 5:43 PM
I'm actually not happy with the destruction of both the main character and a life just to have another character take control. But what can I do, I'm not great a writing reality change stories.

Anonymous
11/12/23, 2:34 PM
@[ChronoSeth](/user/show/427248) I agree. I also feel bad for Stan who got estranged long ago for no reason
11/12/23, 2:23 PM
Excellent start. You definitely have my attention. Looking forward to seeing more.
11/12/23, 9:05 AM
this story is fucking amazing; edging to it over and over. please write more
Ben
11/12/23, 8:29 AM
Love how your stories are both hot and funny at parts ❤️ 🔥
Chasm
11/12/23, 6:35 AM
Thanks so much for the update. I’m patient of course just wanting to know how the story ends. And then can’t wait for what you write next. Maybe in a different alternate story (after you’re done with this one) Travis takes a different set of pills and turns into a black stud like Jamal and Kingston with a BBC? Could be interesting 😏
11/12/23, 6:14 AM
Glad to see you back. I love your kind of story. Please update soon ❤️
11/12/23, 4:48 AM
Holy hell. That was so hot.
Anonymous
11/12/23, 4:15 AM
Every Saturday I've been hoping a new chapter comes out -- obviously you're providing people with awesome free content so no rush, but hoping more comes out soon. :pray:
11/12/23, 2:20 AM
My tip is to not use too many tags that are going to be used in future chapters. The tags set up expectations and finishing can make the chapter feel lacking.

11/12/23, 3:15 AM
@[Allan Weiss](/user/show/472888) Yeah, I realized that after. I guess I did that so you'd know what was coming, but I see that. I'll check that over next time.
11/12/23, 3:03 AM
Very fun. I wonder who’s gonna give in first.
11/12/23, 2:46 AM
I gotta say, you really sold me with the mindlessly repeating commands part. I really love your style and would love to see you continue
11/12/23, 2:40 AM
God I love the orgy. Hot af. I kinda miss Diego tbh.
11/12/23, 2:25 AM
This was super sweet and really lovely. A creative ending and a romantic story as well. Heart's desire and getting out of your own way. Thank you for writing and posting this. Beautiful.
11/12/23, 1:57 AM
Loving where this is going, hope he can feast on their feet as well~
11/12/23, 1:35 AM
I'd love to read a continuation of this story. I like the concept.

11/12/23, 1:44 AM
@[randy7869](/user/show/980242) Oh the next part is already written. People just keep telling me that my stories are too long and that they would like 4,000 to 6,000 word chapters. I thought I was going to be posting about that much, and it turned out that the scene broke at around the 9,000 word mark. So there's another roughly 6,000 words coming next weekend after you all have had the chance to read this one.
11/11/23, 9:50 PM
Cute and wholesome is not a term I usually use for stories on this site, but it feels like it fits the bill here. What a fun lore dump. Loved it!

11/12/23, 1:33 AM
@[Redan](/user/show/129598) Thanks! I hope you're looking forward to part two, which will be dropping next weekend.
TW
11/11/23, 10:22 PM
The plot continues to thicken! Looking forward to the next chapter - and hopefully more of Tri-Hard too ;)

11/11/23, 11:44 PM
@TW Thanks! And don't worry; **Tri-Hard** will be back soon, once he has prepared for his expanded army!
11/11/23, 11:30 PM
Another edit! This chapter really starts to bring things together on the Coin side of the narrative. The way the doctor locked the door suggests it's not unusual for new pets to try to do a runner or be apprehensive. There's a palpable disconnect between Rhys's excitement and normalcy in the process for his registering a new pet who he's excited to have, and Jasper's lack of options and going down that rabbit hole as a best-case for the situation. The world's eager pet culture and how it doesn't shy away from sexuality really fascinates me. That a doctor's visit could be so intimate, to the point of mapping bodies to make customised toys to fit. It's a natural implementation of their advanced technology and their hyper-sexual desires. Teasing a new pet mid-appointment. I enjoyed the calming of our dear Jasper to let him take in some of the 'culture' of it. Very sexy scene in the doctor's office. I really love the way you combine sex and sexiness with character development. Especially the little moments where Jasper and Rhys connect some more. Whether or not that's also a side effect of Aris's conditioning. Allowing Jasper a break and supporting him is really sweet. Looking forward to the re-post of chapter 4 in the (near?) future.
Nov 11, 2023
11/11/23, 9:11 PM
Very enjoyable

Wakeup
11/11/23, 9:43 PM
@[Masters toy](/user/show/10022805) Glad to hear it! 😌

11/11/23, 11:23 PM
@Wakeup Keep it going see where it brings u I have a rubber boot fetishism maybe change two guys into rubber wellington boots walking in muck
11/11/23, 11:17 PM
I love this story so much