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6/14/20, 12:30 PM
This is very wholesome. I love wholesome cx
6/14/20, 12:09 PM
Oh, thats going to be a factor :)
Anonymous
6/14/20, 11:59 AM
I wonder how big Fareed's balls are going to get if Jai has been helping him out retroactively with his new equipment since they first met.
Anonymous
6/14/20, 9:16 AM
Hope the next part comes soon!
6/14/20, 6:00 AM
I can't wait to see how this story unravels. 😋
6/14/20, 5:52 AM
so hot! please keep continuing the story
6/14/20, 5:31 AM
Welcome back, Giftr is one of my all time favorite stories. I cannot wait to read more from you.
Anonymous
6/14/20, 4:10 AM
Great story!!! Loved it!!!
6/14/20, 3:42 AM
VERY good... I need to comment on your brilliant foreshadowing of what big bro is doing here. It was clear from the beginning he was hypnotizing his... brother... but what is really going on here?? Excellent writing.
6/14/20, 1:22 AM
I'm really sorry if this comes across as 'dick-ish' but I paid money for it and wish someone would've commented a warning before I had. This story is incredibly disappointing. Yes, it's hot, but it's basically a tease scene and then the final couple sentences are "Oh, and yea, they actually have a bunch of sex after this." .. I'm not even exaggerating, paraphrasing yes, but not exaggerating. I bought it hoping to actually read the "sex after this" part.
6/14/20, 1:18 AM
love the twist with Micheal would not mind acutally seeing what he does to Kent when he is in control of him. can not wait for the next part
6/14/20, 12:58 AM
This series shouldn't count as incest, it's misleading. I confess I don't really know that much about how the site functions, so it might not even be possible, but it needs to be changed to something like "#Incest only Voyeurism" or something.
Anonymous
6/13/20, 11:50 PM
I agree with Cadek, the cross-dressing is not my cup of tea, I'm hoping that its just a one-off thing. But the daddy stuff was on point, though, even though it was short and brief since Stacy's dad was sidelined for most of the story. I was actually hoping that Michael was another sexy silver daddy, but thats just my own preference. Anyway, I'm excited to see where everything goes and how its gonna end
6/13/20, 11:11 PM
Well, you made the distinctions between Pine and Leo very clear in this chapter and it is sad to see Alan come to his senses and then go back under to avoid the pain. Definitely want Pine to help Alan out, but I got a feeling that even Pine might not be able to fix the damage to Alan.
6/13/20, 10:29 PM
Wow, that was amazingly raunchy and so damn hot! All i can say is I can't wait to read more and to see just how dirty and raunchy you can get!!
6/13/20, 10:13 PM
Fuck, that's so hot!!! The slow build of those dreams teaching him how to suck cock ending in him finally getting it down his throat in reality!!! Soooo fucking good and I would love a part two where he can't stop himself from being fucked!
6/13/20, 8:11 PM
Piney's getting real good at controlling the coaches. I hope we get to see more of Geoff,too. He joined voluntarily,but he needs to be inducted,still
Jun 11, 2020
Anonymous
6/13/20, 8:09 PM
Oh wow. I've played with some GPT things before, but this tool...is going to give me many hours of fun exploration. Thank you. You are officially a porn pioneer, expanding brave new technologies into our kinkzone :p
6/13/20, 6:42 PM
I'm glad Ricky finally gets past all the guilt/self-doubt stuff, but I'd love to see more of the non-sexual side of this story again. The hero worship and naked admiration, the workouts, the desire to be as big as his big bro. The way Truck makes Ricky feel safe and protected, his desire for Truck's approval and the way he looks to him for guidance. His absolute trust. The things I wish I'd gotten from my big bros growing up, that had nothing to do with sex. Don't get me wrong, I'm fucking loving the sex parts! But you could really make this into my all time favorite story if you get back to paying attention to some of the seeds you planted in Chapter One.
6/13/20, 6:31 PM
That certain little bro is one lucky fucker! This story is the hottest thing I've read in a good long while! Craving more, big bro.
6/13/20, 6:18 PM
Hot. Love seeing Danny sink further and further into the erotic quicksand Andrew has prepared for him.
EJG
6/13/20, 5:51 PM
Daddy Pietro's not gonna be too happy his little sluts been playing around with all these Alphas
6/13/20, 5:40 PM
Phew, thanks! I literally haven't done any creative writing since 2002, and never erotica. But as an avid consumer of smutty fiction over the years, I guess I internalized a lot of the dos and don'ts :) TBH, I originally wanted to write something just based on the gotta get fucked/can't cum/ball growth thing, but needed something a little extra for it to make sense on this particular website. Your Truth or Dare idea seemed like a great entry point, and now I'm going to have to figure out how to flesh out the other characters and give them meaningful stuff to do while still centering it around Fareed and his experience.
6/13/20, 5:06 PM
Awesome and amazing, I loved that chapter, you have nothing to be worried about with your writing, that was great! I liked how you changed who was giving out the questions. Can't wait to see what you have to come.
Anonymous
6/13/20, 4:13 PM
This is getting hotter with every chapter. I'm loving this series.
Willie Cici
6/13/20, 4:11 PM
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6/13/20, 3:45 PM
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mbblover
6/13/20, 3:12 PM
READS REALLY REALLY PROMISING! I LOVE LOVE LOVE a great straight drop dead gorgeous musclebound superhero captured, conquered and converted by a "lesser" a "beta" quote villian story/storyline!... this 1st chapter reminds me of the great superhero stories of the great writer kyle cicero!.... i hope to read many many more chapters of this story, take your time i say and don't make it "campy" but make it how should i say realistic and serious mixed with dirty kinky pervy wickedness! love the whole power control role reversal aspect of this and other stories! thanks so far!..
jockboy111
6/13/20, 2:40 PM
100% agree with you on typos, i do have a lot of them and probably need someone to edit but i don't have anyone to edit. Also theres going to be some dumbing down so expect more typos
Anonymous
6/13/20, 2:10 PM
Suggest getting someone to edit the story. While you've got a distinctly different voice for each character, a college professor is not going to have so many typos.