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6/8/20, 6:57 PM
Ok so this story is not written by myself people. I don't get if you people can differentiate between a fiction and a real deal or not. It is written by slave Kyle who is not a professional writer. the purpose was to show you subs how he was dominated. So if you still can't understand well then its not my problem. And for those who wants to be a slave send me an email don't comment here as I usually don't read them.
Btm
6/8/20, 5:30 PM
i loved this so much!
6/8/20, 5:20 PM
I was a big fan of mindless mike too, keep it comin~
6/8/20, 5:12 PM
I agree with JockMatt that the paragraphs need work, remember to start a new one when a new character starts talking and when you change subject/topic. I also agree with Thom and Gymini29 that Trevor needs to have some changes of his own. I think the most interesting place this story could now go is outside the box. So far all the changes have been typical of this type of story and tame, bigger pecs and cocks (if anything they sound far too big for plausibility, 2.5 inch nipples?!) and you could do some more unusual changes. Also why not add drama by having the changes cause problems. Constant sex is great but a story can be more than hot sex and guys getting horny at their own muscles. Just something for you to think about, keep it up!
6/8/20, 4:09 PM
@robbotg99x4you and @Martin -- thanks so much for your comments! It's definitely good to know that the Machine is having its desired effect on you ;). It's really encouraging to hear from you!
6/8/20, 3:03 PM
I remember reading this on Tumblr and was disappointed when you never finished this story. Please continue!
6/8/20, 2:56 PM
Maybe the next installment can include Ron's hairy older brother walking in on his Nephew while he's doing an 'at home' work out in super light shorts and becomes infatuated with the boypussy he keeps catching glimpses of?
Jun 7, 2020
6/8/20, 2:45 PM
incredible job. thank you so much
6/8/20, 1:57 PM
I love this story! Dave is an adorable puppy boy, and I hope Nate fully embraces his new role. Yes, please keep giving us alternate points of view!
6/8/20, 1:43 PM
Yes ... more, please!
Berlinbeefysub
6/8/20, 1:13 PM
loved it! wish i were on the place of the kid. hope there's more to come!
6/8/20, 11:59 AM
I very much respect Wesley Bracken as a writer, but I am sorry to see this site being turned into some kind of advertisement hording for Patreon or similar. If this does not stop, I forsee most entries on here being tempting clips to get us to shell out money rather than consisting of real stories. Sigh...
6/8/20, 10:10 AM
Blufman has a great style. I never get tired of re-reading his stories. The writing is brutal, just like his characters. His descriptive powers about places, people, things makes him a powerful observer of the underbelly of society.
6/8/20, 10:03 AM
Love this story. Hope there will be more chapters on this. More freeze milk please! :D
6/8/20, 9:38 AM
huh...I kinda want a werewolf boyfriend now. Gives a new meaning to 'fluff' I really enjoy the wholesome relationships you create while stilling mind control, great chapter
6/8/20, 9:06 AM
Very hot story! I kind of like how the Great Zantini is mostly content to be a voyeur.
Anonymous
6/8/20, 8:24 AM
Great story!
Anonymous
6/8/20, 8:16 AM
Looking forward to more!
6/8/20, 8:09 AM
More please.
6/8/20, 7:19 AM
Good start. I love a good superhero/hypnosis story. Please post chapter 2 soon.
Zac
6/8/20, 6:48 AM
One of my all time faves. Love the gradual subtle hypnosis and arousal and the climax at the end.
6/8/20, 6:47 AM
Amazing!
Martin
6/8/20, 6:46 AM
I had bookmarked this story for way too long... Just got around to read it, and fuck, is this hot! Now I've got a rock hard boner and probably can't help but to continue to read. I wished I could experience something like this for real.
Jun 7, 2020
6/8/20, 6:04 AM
I love it! Amazing!
6/8/20, 5:37 AM
Very promising start! I'm anxious to see where you go with it!
Willie Cici
6/8/20, 2:59 AM
Can't get enough of your writing!! Good job!!!!
Anonymous
6/8/20, 2:57 AM
Great story!! Loved it!!!
6/8/20, 1:03 AM
excellent !
6/8/20, 12:07 AM
I suspect that English isn't your first language, so I'm taking this theory into consideration and have decided that this is deceptively simple and, actually, quite layered, luring the reader in as much as the writer. Now, I'm tempted to contact Master Primus, myself. Overall, an emgaging ride.
Betasskin
6/8/20, 12:04 AM
Church of the Latter-Day Skins. Heh. Top class, cheers Malc.