Recent Comments

6/22/20, 9:50 AM
I plan on continuing Luke's story with the next few chapters with other people grabbing the coin and making wishes or people passing off the coin to their friends. Might be a couple days for another chapter while I plan it out. I half assed the first couple chapters and I want to do better with each addition :)
6/22/20, 8:29 AM
Nice! I was looking forward to this all week. Looks like we're really setting up the hard, high school couple questions eh? I'm interested to see where this goes. For me though, I want to start seeing Nate actually figure out for himself whether he likes Dave or not. He's been spending so many chapters being wishy washy about it and I would wish that he could just make a decision already. But that's how I feel. Perhaps my favorite parts of the series is when Dave enters that tranced out state whenever he follows commands. I really like tranced out jocks with goofy faces. Anyway, great chapter and I'm glad you're having fun writing these. I don't think its filler at all, but more of a slower paced, set up chapter. Which are always needed
6/22/20, 8:18 AM
oh wow, that's some heavy praise! Glad you enjoyed it. I wasn't sure what you meant regarding links, but if you meant linking my story on another site, then sure, as long as it's credited properly. Thanks for the nice comment!
6/22/20, 8:17 AM
to bad we could not see the city after the last wish, can you add it in later?
6/22/20, 8:03 AM
Oh nice, I've been craving a fat Nerd TF story lately and this hit the spot. I find the idea of you turning into your own insult a neat concept. There's something about someone being turned into their idea of a stereotype that seems just fitting for a revenge story.
Lusty Stallion
6/22/20, 6:14 AM
Loved it. What a great story! I can't believe I missed this one - and from you. I love your stuff man. You're the reason I've started writing
6/22/20, 1:55 AM
Another great chapter. I agree with Ballbustingkid that Danny will lose a certain masculine sex appeal once he is shaved. But the humiliating scene of the shaving itself could be very erotic, and it grows back. Can't wait to see what the next chapter holds.
Lusty Stallion
6/21/20, 10:21 PM
Wow. i cant believe an AI wrote as much as you sat. That's imcredible. It had me going
6/21/20, 8:54 PM
fuckin' hot
SubLondon
6/21/20, 6:34 PM
Living this story.
Anonymous
6/21/20, 5:58 PM
Wish we'd see this continued
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
6/21/20, 4:53 PM
Very nice follow-up, anxious & curious to see how far things go. I'm not a dominant, still wish I could be a victim though one day.
6/21/20, 4:40 PM
Excellent story! i love to see an arrogant prick get his comeuppance. great use of body and status transformation, as well. the cock shrinking and weight gain were entirely appropriate ;)
Dam
6/21/20, 2:24 PM
I keep checking this, can't wait to see an update!
EJG
6/21/20, 2:14 PM
Ah Jockboy. You're like someone slow cooking a roast and letting the smell waft out the window making me salivate in anticipation for a next juicy morsel. Don't leave me famished,lol/!
6/21/20, 1:49 PM
I like the feel of reality, that it could actually happen. The writer is taking me on a journey that keeps me guessing. I like the straight to gay, its always a turn on when they see whats happening but actually seems natural. Looking forward to the next chapter. Good work.
Cracker
6/21/20, 1:28 PM
cum-ing today if they okay it..write me :)
Martin
6/21/20, 12:49 PM
Hot as always. I love the switched perspective. I know it's really hard to do to write a scene from the perspective of a mindless drone (been there, done that). But I think you could improve it a bit. It still sound like a guy pretending to be a mindless drone. There should not be any thought and any kind of self-awareness. Just function. Just pleasure to function.
Anonymous
6/21/20, 12:09 PM
dam this is hot can't wait for part 2 and 3 this is so hot
CF
6/21/20, 8:32 AM
cruel but **entirely** necessary haha enjoyed the unfolding of the whole story - thanks
Anonymous
6/21/20, 5:12 AM
Jo, I love the romance between Phil and Roger it’s so cute! I‘m excited to see more of it, while still keeping the mind control active. Roger has this sexy, muscular, daddy slave and he should have fun with his new toy. It would be hot if daddy slave became Roger’s personal foot stool, bowed whenever his young master stepped into his presence, cooked his meals, cleaned up after him etc. Another kinky idea could be having daddy slave suck his master’s cock and toes while he eats dinner. I want Phil to really SERVE his son/master.
6/21/20, 3:56 AM
Wow! *So so hot!* i love hypnosis as a tool for domination, and you used it perfectly! You obviously enjoy hypnosis yourself as your representation of the process is quite detailed and accurate, much more so than many other hypnosis stories. i so agree completely with all the previous wonderful comments -- only more so! It's now one of my favorite stories, and i am off to read other stories you have written to confirm your new status as one of my favorite authors! Do you mind if i post a link or two from another site which also includes erotic hypnosis? i don't write, so the least i can do is help you rightfully grow your readership (if you don't mind, of course, Sir).
6/21/20, 3:13 AM
There is a lot of good material here. Maybe it could be repackaged in a rewrite.
6/21/20, 2:14 AM
Maravilhoso , parabéns !
CLB
6/21/20, 1:34 AM
Thank you you are far too kind… but i'll take it! ;-)
MuscleSon69
6/20/20, 9:44 PM
I like how the story is progressing. Very life-like and hot & horny at the same time. Keep it up!
MuscleSon69
6/20/20, 9:38 PM
Great story, so HOT and keeps me hard! More, please!
Lusty Stallion
6/20/20, 9:22 PM
you've gotta keep goin'. these are immense
6/20/20, 6:36 PM
God, I love it when wishes go awry! Great story!