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11/15/23, 8:20 PM
Another great chapter our Johnny has found his place.
11/15/23, 5:58 PM
The next chapter sounds like its going top be a very interesting read. To see the roles reversed between drones and everyone else. Are the drones allowed some sort semblance of personality to take fuller advantage of this? And is Master Jake going to place suggestions into anyone to make them into more of the advanced drones? Definitely going to be interesting.
11/15/23, 4:16 PM
I love that you're continuing this story, which is one of my faves! I'm just not sure about telling it from Rocco's perspective. Part of what made the story so effective is the way we get inside the transforming subject's mind as he becomes Stepfordized.
Oct 29, 2023
11/15/23, 2:12 AM
Insanely hot. Just one question: are they really father & son? I wasn’t sure from the way it started.

11/15/23, 4:15 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) They begin as step-dad/step-son, but as the bond grows, they become father and son.
Oct 29, 2023
11/15/23, 1:49 AM
This is great. I love the progression and writing style. Hopeful for another chapter.

11/15/23, 4:14 PM
@[JVill](/user/show/10030603) Thanks for the vote of confidence! I think I know exactly where I want to take this. It involves his son's friend.
Oct 29, 2023
EntrancedGay92
11/5/23, 7:36 PM
Beautiful and intimate, a perfect father/son relationship.

11/15/23, 4:13 PM
@[EntrancedGay92](/user/show/171924) Thank you! The style is kind of a departure for me, but I really enjoyed writing it.
11/12/23, 6:32 AM
Great premise! I love the idea of a gym where the buddies help each other out like that. Always love cumming out resistance too. Nice touch! Thanks for posting your story!

Anonymous
11/15/23, 12:55 PM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Thanks. I love the the idea of climax as an event horizon, a point of no return.
11/15/23, 8:43 AM
Very hot! I totally enjoy how Aladin mind get twisted. Loved it! More Aladdin & Jafar please! Would love to see how Alladdin gets little by little more trained and enslaved by every meeting with Jafar.
Anonymous
11/15/23, 8:17 AM
Another Great Chapter! Also i just noticed that aside from Chad and Cody, Dexter hasn’t fucked any of his other slaves yet? any specific reason for that? Also, really curious to see the angle of renting/whoring out Dexter is going to do to Coach Jenkins and am really curious to see what is going on between Brad and Jimmy with Dexter’s parents…..
Jun 7, 2008
Anonymous
11/15/23, 5:23 AM
More, more, more !!!
11/15/23, 4:19 AM
my god. my heart. i- oh this was such a blessing to experience. thank you for sharing your gift and your craft with us.
11/15/23, 4:12 AM
A delightful hypnosis story combined with a porn spy film. Looking forward to Part 2.
11/15/23, 3:17 AM
Not enough guys write gainer fiction. Awesome job
11/15/23, 2:01 AM
Still just as amazing all these years later, as when I first read it.
Anonymous
11/15/23, 12:56 AM
More, more,more !
Simon
11/15/23, 12:50 AM
I lovvvvveeee this story, cant wait to read more honestly
Martin
11/14/23, 8:32 PM
Es ist erst mal sehr mutig die Story auf Deutsch zu schreiben, das limitiert die Leserschaft automatisch. *Dear English speaker, you can always use your browser's auto translate feature, it works really well!* Ich bin jedenfalls sehr gespannt wohin Eure Story führt. Und ich würde natürlich auch wirklich gerne wissen, wie viel davon erfunden ist und wie viel aus Euren eigenen Erfahrungen kommt! Ihr könnt ja auch gern Bilder beifügen - wieso nicht von Euch selbst (beim Puppy Play kann man sein Gesicht ja besonders gut unerkannt bleiben)

11/15/23, 12:34 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Auf deutsch zu schreiben ist einfach sicherer. Nicht dass wir kein Englisch können, aber damit es sich gut lesen lässt, da ist die Muttersprache einfach sicherer. Behalte in nächster Zeit einfach deinen Posteingang im Auge, denn die Geschichte geht weiter. Das eigentliche erste Kapitel ist fast fertig, und die folgenden 2 haben wir auch schon grob in den Köpfen.
11/15/23, 12:02 AM
For anyone interested, I did generate some AI images of the cast. I typically tend to leave more minimalist descriptions, so you can imagine them however you want, but if you want to see what is in my head, see the links below: [Jayson, Sam, Dr Altman, Randy](https://imgur.com/a/PC79I6u) [Liam, Romeo, Xavier, Des](https://imgur.com/a/kmr2cVe)
Okccadman
11/14/23, 9:36 PM
Love this! It would be a hot movie.
11/14/23, 7:06 PM
Please continue...
11/11/23, 2:29 PM
If that was revenge I think Katie blew it. Dallas seems pretty okay now. 😍

11/14/23, 6:25 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) He is more than okay. He has a boyfriend and a great ass. What else is there to want>
11/10/23, 4:57 PM
Would have been near to find out that Tyler was somehow in on it. And was video taping the whole thing to send to the witch girl.

11/14/23, 6:25 PM
@[pepefuente](/user/show/1677522) If I wrote a non-erotica sequel it would be revealed that it was a 100% Tyler and that he has wanted Dallas for months and paid Katie to provide the spell. Dallas and he end up happy. Dallas goes back to the gym but can't build muscle. He mostly focuses on cardio and squats lol. It's a little dark and real cute.
11/14/23, 6:19 PM
Liebe Leser, Arcturus und ich möchten jeden Leser bitten, die Bewertung der Story auszufüllen. Uns ist Euer Feedback wirklich wichtig, denn wir schrieben diese Geschichte nicht (nur) für uns. Diese Geschichte ist für uns beide eine Experiment, das viel Arbeit aber auch viele kinky Momente beinhaltet. Wenn Euch die Geschichte gefällt, wenn wir Fragen oder Anregungen zum Schreibstil habt... egal was: Nutzt die Kommentare. LG Vince (Sub) & Arcturus (KeyHolder)
Nov 22, 2006
mic
11/14/23, 5:57 PM
fucking hot ideas cool story, please more
11/13/23, 2:51 PM
Haven't given up on this, no worries! Life is just slightly overwhelming with limited time to just sit and write. Work, obligations, the need to relax, and getting sick this week have slowed my progression, but I'll be back to writing soon!

11/13/23, 3:47 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Nothing is important than health, take care of yourself :)

11/13/23, 5:23 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Take care of yourself first and get well soon! While we're all eager for more of your hot writing, but I fully understand that you have your own priorities too. So no rush at all. I'd rather you get back in good shape first so you have a fresher mind to give us the best of your wild ideas! :wink:

11/14/23, 5:14 PM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Take care, as much as I can't wait to see what set of humiliations is in store for Luke and Bryan, your health should come first!
11/14/23, 5:02 PM
Damn hot story guy go on whit it 😈🔥😍
mic
11/14/23, 4:53 PM
wow so hot, love the ideas, please more, hope they film him, sell his ass, take his money from his wallet,and have a lot of young new guys who want to learn to be cleaners
11/14/23, 3:15 PM
My favorite combination: mind control and corruption. Perfect. Thank you.
Sep 28, 2023
sho
9/28/23, 11:06 AM
Nice, a singaporean story. Want to chat on Discord about some kinky Singaporean scenarios? sho9860

11/14/23, 2:16 PM
@[sho](/user/show/10023118) Same here! My discord is helloiz
KP
11/14/23, 10:54 AM
Enjoying this and the premise. Hope to see more!