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11/17/23, 10:11 PM
Too short! But a fun little nugget for sure. 🙂
Martin
11/17/23, 9:55 PM
What a unique and hot concept! I'm not too fond of superhero stories, but this one hits my buttons just right!
Nov 17, 2023
11/17/23, 9:38 PM
Great first story. There are a few grammar errors, but nothing that pulls from the story. Be proud of it! Will we get anymore men turned into champions? Will we get a champions' orgy?
11/17/23, 7:24 PM
I loved the descriptions of work gear coupled with hypno inhalants and visuals. The setup to get there was hot too, with men disappearing and a hypnotic bull milk drink in theory this story checks my biggest boxes. I think leaning into those strengths and the work camp setting would be a boon. That said, I couldn’t feel myself get into it and my guess is hypnothrill has the right of it. This could have used more character development to make both the betrayal and the decision to undo mistakes more impactful. The loss of individuality and conversion to drone is more sexually and narratively stimulating when a full person’s thoughts and feelings are subjugated or lost.
11/17/23, 6:41 PM
That was great, I liked the voice in his head saying, "More. More!"
mic
11/17/23, 6:00 PM
so cool ideas, please more, more second raw lockers, the fucker should have emptied his locker out, or he should get locked naked in his locker till next day, or other people should give him humiliating clothes and empty his locker
mic
11/17/23, 5:46 PM
so fucking hot, please more, sell his ass, use him a lot,take every second paycheck of him, let him live tied to bed after work in your basement and take everything
11/17/23, 5:28 PM
Wow how deliciously unexpected, you caught me off guard with that plot twist I cannot wait to see where this is going to lead. Well done sir you have me hook, line, and sinker....
Anonymous
11/17/23, 3:36 PM
Man I hope Liam struggles and resists
Kippers
11/14/23, 8:03 PM
I'm sure JT would please the bartender, but that's not a conquest. JT should let Billy's posse see what a trampy cunt he has when JT offers to stuff it. He's done with Billy's broken pussy, but the boys deserve to take turns, while he begs for JT. The bartender could film it. JT is definitely a character to follow, because if he follows, he picks every cherry hole! Good work!

11/17/23, 2:18 PM
@Kippers Thanks man. Appreciate the feedback.
Kippers
11/14/23, 6:34 PM
It's always so much better bagging a cunt that thinks it's all their idea. They tug my meat, lick my shaft, plunge their lips down into my pubes. It's only natural that they wanna feel me pumping them full of cock until I put out the fire with some hot volleys of cream. They actually get a sense of satisfaction that I gave them my load in their innermost recesses. Sometimes, they bring a plug so they can take my jizz with them.

11/17/23, 2:14 PM
@Kippers Thanks man. Glad you enjoyed it. More coming.
Anonymous
11/17/23, 12:28 PM
Is there no mind control in this?
mic
11/17/23, 8:35 AM
so nicely tricked, please more, lock him in chasity cage, take his paychecks, let him slurp up all cum
11/17/23, 8:32 AM
Oh wow thats a hot chapter. Cant wait to read how will he convert Xavier. I wonder what will be next after his entourage.
mic
11/17/23, 8:24 AM
love it, love chasity and tricking story, the team locked story is so hot, please more
11/17/23, 4:49 AM
Oh fuck yeah! This was so hot and sexy! Love the pov. Love the actions. Sooo good. I hope he wins and gets his three slutty subby needy butt play loving good boys.
11/17/23, 3:54 AM
An excellent chapter. Good to see Johnny is able to relax about being a slutty jock cumdump when he's with his team.
11/17/23, 3:29 AM
I actually like what you've done for the next leg; I want to see people bringing others under control and enjoying it like Rocco is. Plus I think it would be hitting the same note agian and might lose the impact over time.
KP
11/16/23, 6:25 PM
Catching up on reading... Enjoyed these. More??? Enjoy young men being turned into beasts!

11/17/23, 3:04 AM
@KP Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! More coming soon ;)
May 11, 2019
11/17/23, 12:38 AM
so much of this story is outstanding especially how well you describe the challenge Jese has in sorting out if his actions are his own
Anonymous
11/16/23, 11:45 PM
HappyTrance take as much time as you need. As others have said, we are certainly not entitled to any of your work and obviously there are many of us who appreciate your time and generosity with producing such a fantastic story. Admittedly I am just happy you are ok, as you have been quite interactive and when you said you were sick, I did have fears that we may never hear from you again. Nonetheless, glad you are doing well and still invested. Looking forward to any future chapters or stories that you choose to write. Thank you HappyTrance!
11/16/23, 7:27 PM
The description of the gentle and clingy type of werewolf just stole my heart. I would really like someone who would like to shower me with love, care and protection especially when he is a gentle giant werewolf. I really loved the puppy eyes part which just made my heart drop as the same cute face of a werewolf came before my eyes, a face for which I would really do anything (as you described). Loved the story man
11/3/23, 4:24 PM
Hey y'all. Just writing this in case anyone is rereading/checking for the next chapter! Like I said, I've had covid for a little over a week and haven't finished it. Sorry for the delay! Good news: I'm putting the finishing touches on it today and it's taken between 12-48 hours for it to be approved, so it should be up sometime this weekend! I hope y'all enjoy!

Anonymous
11/7/23, 9:15 PM
@[HappyTrance](/user/show/10003816) Hey, I havent seen any updates, is everything alright? Excited for the new Chapter!

Anonymous
11/16/23, 11:03 AM
@Anonymous This author is a liar. Don't believe what he says about deadlines

Anon123
11/16/23, 6:07 PM
@Anonymous Hey. I know you are a fan of this author's work. But this comment comes off as both entitled, and outstandingly shitty. Even if the author wasn't recovering from an illness, they are writing this story for free, for fun, on their own time, and with no actual obligation to continue it. Certainly no obligation to _you_. And if an author isn't able to meet a self-imposed and arbitrary deadline: please consider that their personal obligations (such as work, or health, or family) can naturally take priority over updating a story they're posting for free online. Yes, you're dissatisfied at having to wait longer than expected for updates. Taking it out on the author by being an _asshole_ is not going to encourage the author to actually continue this story. I invite you to consider what other people in your life you treat with this much entitlement and contempt when minorly inconvenienced, and to contemplate whether you are in fact the villain of your own life.

Martin
11/16/23, 7:07 PM
@Anon123 There's nothing more to add to what you've just written. Right on the spot. Thanks for writing this!
11/16/23, 5:18 PM
Hot!!
11/16/23, 4:38 PM
(I was prepared to hate Johnny Football because of how cocky (heh) he is, but with him becoming the submissive one, I fell in love with him. And having him get fucked wearing only a letter jacket...hooooo boy!)
11/16/23, 4:37 PM
I love how strangely wholesome your stories are in the stories you craft in this universe, how everyone loves what they become, and how delightfully erotic it all is!
11/16/23, 4:02 PM
This is kind off amazing as what I thought of the "Interactive Display" and "Supps" and the "White Sauce" actually was right... Quite hot and will become hotter I presume
11/16/23, 2:10 PM
That little power of his is so evil and that makes it so freaking hot. He could easily take over the world with that.
Anonymous
11/16/23, 1:19 PM
Super hot. Any chances for a continuation?