Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/12/20, 5:29 PM
After that Colt is surely the beta bitch.
8/12/20, 4:33 PM
Cool story :D
8/12/20, 4:18 PM
This is Ryan. He is a responsible being with reality warping powers. Please be more like Ryan. this psa was brought to you by: The [REDACTED] Association.
FantasyWithKinks
8/12/20, 4:08 PM
I'm pretty sure this somehow hit all of my kinks? I'm shocked and awed. Like, even the idea of someone who's naturally ace but still gets engaged with kinky stuff was relatable somehow? I especially like how there isn't necessarily any real consequence for anything Amir does. This story doesn't moralise about transformation powers. Everyone ends up happy at the end and it's all harmless sexy fun. The only possible critique I could offer--and I acknowledge this is already a fairly long story--is that there are points at which a little more character description would have been hot. Getting to know what Amir and Manny look like in detail (especially their ethnicities, knowing by implication neither of them are white), maybe a before/after snapshot of some of the people Amir transforms, and especially getting a look inside Manny's head when Amir does his lust energy whammy. But mostly, everything going on here is awesome.
8/12/20, 3:22 PM
Thanks guys! I think I’m getting a good handle on how to use the AI assistance we’ll without letting it overwhelm my writing.
8/12/20, 3:02 PM
Awesome story, looking forward to more.
8/12/20, 12:40 PM
this is an awesome story, would love to see more of it, and see Brad fuck someone with that huge cock too!
SuitsAndTies
8/12/20, 12:36 PM
Loooove the preppy servant theme, and it's nice to see you on here! I would love if you made a sequel, and maybe you could've included what sort of traditional values they ended up changing to agree with too, I'm a big fan of changes like that.
8/12/20, 12:00 PM
this honestly was awesome. the series gets better with every chapter.
8/12/20, 11:29 AM
This is my kind of story in every way! Beautifully done! Let's have more in this universe!