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Anonymous
9/18/20, 11:20 AM
This is hot. I keep hoping for Marky to get further humiliated and not getting disappointed. I think it would be great if he is forced to wear a diaper to work with a shirt that barely covers his waist, so when he bends down everyone can see his diaper.
9/18/20, 11:15 AM
Yes! These boys are so damned cute I can't stand it!
9/18/20, 11:12 AM
stoked to see these two return! they're really cute and i've enjoyed this series a ton so far.
9/18/20, 11:11 AM
@J damn, that's high praise! i just write the stuff i like to see myself so i'm glad you dig it too!! thank you so much for the kind words.
J
9/18/20, 10:06 AM
I really enjoyed this story, probably one of my favorites on this sight. You've earned a spot in my bookmarks. A lot of people don't really write hypno well in a way that I enjoy it but you seem to have it down pat with all the parts I like!
Anonymous
9/18/20, 10:00 AM
This is fantastic! I can't wait to see where you go with this! You write so well and there's a great flow to it, please keep writing :)
Anonymous
9/18/20, 9:56 AM
I loved this! So many things were just perfect - I love chastity and I'm so glad that people seem to be including it more and more. Yes, the ending was on the extreme side of things; most of us have had brushes with narcissists and psychopaths in our lives, and we're the worse for it. But I think with stories on this site, we're all aware enough to separate the fantasy from reality. I understand some other commenters saying how it caught them off guard. If anything I wanted more - it wasn't rushed or anything but I think it could definitely be continued if you wanted that, or a spin off. Your writing is fantastic and I hope you keep going :)
9/18/20, 9:38 AM
very fun start. excited to see where it leads
Jonanator
9/18/20, 9:10 AM
quite a good story. can't wait for the next chapter
Anonymous
9/18/20, 9:01 AM
Amazing!
9/18/20, 8:08 AM
loving this
9/18/20, 7:41 AM
Very nice story. I look forward to the next chapter.
9/18/20, 7:37 AM
Thanks for sharing your wonderful imagination with us. i thought it was a great idea and quite unique in my reading experience here. i thought the plot was clear and well written, and the description of the plant quite detailed. My favorite part of this kind of story is my feeling the process of seduction. Needless to say then, i like stories that creates a strong feeling of that shift in power and control from the Dominant to the submissive. This feeling can be expanded by creating a more elaborate context, including getting to know the character(s) a little more personally. It follows that if i like a story, i prefer it to be longer rather than shorter. i want to live in that world a little longer. That said, you created a world where i wanted to stay a little longer! Thanks!
Aug 21, 2020
MakeMeAPigToo
9/18/20, 6:08 AM
Loved this!!! I've cum many times from reading this !! Oink! 🐷
9/18/20, 5:01 AM
Hilarious and surprisingly hot at the same time!
9/18/20, 4:28 AM
Very very nice, keep up the good work!
9/18/20, 3:48 AM
Awesome story! I love the format in which the story was told by different characters around the world. Very creative.
9/18/20, 3:06 AM
@ulver91 basically my objection to him thinking he has a pussy is not so much the word itself (which can be hot if applied in a fun way) but the idea of basically making him think he is 'female' or have him turn into a 'sissy'. I like his masculine nature. Even if he is a beta he is still a man. So my hope is that while he might become subby, needy, loving giving blowjobs and getting fucked, he is still a man. Basically, I really hope Dan does not in anyway feminize Bob. That and I hope there is no dumbling down. Let them keep whatever level of intelligence they had. Just twist it, shape it, so its focused on serving Dan and being a good beta boy for him.
9/18/20, 2:56 AM
Great beginning! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
9/18/20, 2:50 AM
seriously, you write an intersting story. but in my opinion i think Dan should make Bob feels like a submissive girl trap in an man's body, so Bob would feel like he start to dress and act like a girl secretly in front of dan. big fan of your stories, man. keep up the good work.
9/18/20, 2:14 AM
I live to serve the Virus.
9/17/20, 11:51 PM
Love this! Can't wait for more!
Anonymous
9/17/20, 11:02 PM
@PupScout, I don't think Mr Grant was made into a gorgeous muscular hairy guy. I think just the new guy's perspective was changed to see him from a "short, stocky man with a large gut" into " dense, powerful build holds a strong, large, round belly covered in sexy black hairs," despite Mr Grant being the same person Great first chapter, Camo Brute! Looking forward to the next chapter
9/17/20, 11:01 PM
Got a good hard on with that one. Thanks
9/17/20, 10:40 PM
When he got called into the office after stroking his dick, I thought, "I wish the author had made Mr Grant a gorgeous muscular hairy guy." And viola! Now to the mystery of what's going on. I look forward to it.
Anonymous
9/17/20, 9:54 PM
What happened to the earlier parts of this story?
9/17/20, 9:16 PM
@Haru Kane, Thanks again for your comments, seeing people like you interested in what I'm writing push my lazy ass to keep it going. As I said in another comment, sadly I can't please everybody. In one point, one of my personal kinks will be a turn off for somebody, it's inevitable. But for a reason there's three Summer family members :) pd: I'm trying not to say if Bob will be thinking of his ass as a pussy or not. Not because it's a big spoiler and secret, but because I don't want to say something in the comments that later wouldn't work with the story. So i'm trying to be as ambiguous as possible.
9/17/20, 8:55 PM
While Bob enjoying the act of being fucked is great I hope he doesn't have him think its a pussy. Let him just think its open to being played with, make him really enjoy it. Also the three becoming a beta family for Dan the alpha is great. Love the idea. My big hope is that the change in dynamics that happen in the home doesn't spread outward into the 'real'. That the three don't suddenly become whores or they loose their jobs or whatnot because of a need to be fucked. Let them go subby and needy and wanton and playful at home but stay all dominant and aggressive when out in the world. I also like the potential for them wanting to aid their alpha in getting some others into their little pack - because obviously an alpha like Dan needs more good subby boys. Maybe some jock friends of the two sons or something. hehe
9/17/20, 8:49 PM
Thanks again guys for your comments! @SilentNobody, @BobbyBlobfish. I didn't think that the blackmail was going to be a topic of discussion, lol. As I mentioned before, it was not really something that was planned in the original idea, but the story took me there, so I decided to explore the idea. So I don't think will be much relevant in the distant future... or it will be a central point for the boys corruption? I don't know, let's wait for the next chapters. @tyler.br, Dan has a lot of options to made Bob open to be fucked. He could program him something like "My ass is for fucking" or "Being fuck give me so much pleasure", but "My asshole it's a pussy" has a lot of layers. Like you said, in Bob's mind pussies are for fucking, but also sluts have pussies, so will he began to see himself as a slut?. :) @Limbo, In which ways do you think Dan's should train Bob's ass? Toys, fingers, dick? There's a world of possibilities ;) @MuscleRider, Nice suggestions! Also I love the idea of messing with power dynamics. Breaking the idea that the big muscular guy needs to be in charge. :)
9/17/20, 8:35 PM
OMG this is seriously amazing in every way. Such a great story. I was actually sad when it ended. Its so good.