Sexys hombre fornidos poco a poco cayendo a sus pies es genial <3

This was a good series. The last part wasn't bad, but to me it failed where the others excelled: We're almost entirely out of Tommy's head and his feelings aren't described at all.

> Sorry to see him lose Rugby boy to a Scenter I'm fairly confident Vernon is the Implanter? We've seen the Vance and Vinnie in action with the Wiz and Willis, Vance used his scent and pheromones to enthrall the Wiz, Vinnie used his pollen to make Willis suggestible and prime him for a plant. I could have that mixed up in my head, though. In the discussion thread on the forums, Absman confirmed that we haven't seen Vernon in action, and we haven't gotten to see anybody get bonded with a symbiont via sex. A scenario which I hope we get a very detailed description of.

What? An unexpected ending? XD I don't like doing expected things. Glad you enjoyed the ending that did happen.

Very nice, and great writing.

> I was a bit disappointed when I read the summation thinking it’s going to be boring sub plots, but that was hardly the case. Hot hot hot. > Hahaha. That was just me being cheeky. Everyone's been clamoring for the New Great One's reveal, and I didn't want to give any hints away about what would happen.

Snake's fate sealed with a blown kiss. Great paradox. Sorry to see him lose Rugby boy to a Scenter, but they are both still in love so all is well. I really enjoyed watching the two dominant men go down, and all from their own cum. Also glad to see Tully finally seeing the fate of Murdock as a mindless "drone." I was a bit disappointed when I read the summation thinking it's going to be boring sub plots, but that was hardly the case. Hot hot hot.

First of all, an author always puts a huge amount of his energy, soul and fantasy into a story. So even if you don't like it, you should be kind to it and its author. Having said that, this story didn't get any actual harsh comments. M. Greene just pointed out that you've tagged the story incorrectly with 2nd story while it's first person. You've written a lot of stories on GSS, and as far as I can see, most of them have been received quite positively, it also seems that you do have some some fans here. So I don't get your reaction. That this story did get so few comments might be caused by its length. Most people come here to fap, and a story with 16000 words usually turns people away (it did me), so I'd recommend splitting it up into several chapter and keeping us wankers happy with each chapter :) This website is about fun and kink, nothing more. No point in getting agitated about what's written here! Martin (site owner)

Gracias por el apoyo, no tengo demasiada experiencia en esto por lo que como ya puedes notar tengo problemas con la otrografica. Espero por medio de la parctica mejorar y corregir esos problemas.

Excellent Hot and Original

One of your best stories. I keep coming back to it. It's just so good

Well, after reading the comments from the past few of my publications, I have decided to make this story,Danny meets Greg my last, period! i am not an English major or a fiction writer. i just thought i would take a stab at it; yet my affords were in error. Fictional writing is not my forte. Oh, those of you who have not written, but have thought about it, a word of advice, DON'T! The somewhat harsh criticism, unconstructive, is not worth it. It is easy ti criticize. Also, i am going to be remove myself from this website, too! Good bye!

Nicely done tale. Thanks for posting it.

It's a bit of a selective kink, but I've always liked seeing big, well-endowed, muscular and hairy men (Stereotypical virile alpha types, basically.), turned into dumb, submissive fuck-beasts, always horny, and ready to breed or be bred. If I was to get even more specific, I like when those men are sweaty and musky, and have a muscle-gut or beer-gut, while muscular everywhere else. So suffice to say, reading this story hit all my buttons, especially since both of the "animals" in the story were my type. The parts where they describe the barkeep's outfit (Nice reference to Aladdin's monkey by the way.), along with his ape-like behaviour, and degeneration from a person with a seemingly paternalistic personality, to a dumb, horny gorilla-like one, was extremely hot; Just imagining a jovial daddy-type bar-keeper/innkeeper, turned into an obedient, big-dicked chimp, just did it for me. And Sygg was a perfect addition, not only as a sexual counterpart to Brallin in the story, but as a character overall. He was a stoic, no-nonsense guy, a experience mercenary sell-sword who wasn't fighting bandits out of some noble purpose, but for money. But he was also cautious and experienced enough to know how dangerous seemingly innocent people can be, and was on guard. But even as he was being slowly worn-down, he didn't lose his sarcastic attitude. Overall, I really enjoyed this story, as it hit all my kinks (The whole covered in sweat and musk, along with the rimming.), some of which I didn't even know I had (Who knew I had a thing for muscle-bear daddies brainwashed into believing they were horny monkey's?). One of my favorite parts was when the bandit leader ordered Brallin to "grind your organ for me. Show me how a proper ape dances.", and mafe Brallin jerk himself off as his butt was eaten out by Sygg, while marching/dancing in place. The blend of comedy and debasement apparent in the situation was really something else. I really look forward to seeing if the story will get continued, with Sygg and Brallin, or "Ass" and "Chimp", put into more dirty and twisted situations. I also hope Tom writes a prequel for the story, depicting the brainwashing of Brallin, since it would be especially hot to see the bard Edric making him into a horny "Chimp".

Although spanking isn't one of my fetishes, I loved the romance between Lock and Sawyer and enjoyed this story immensely. Thanks for writing.

Gosh. The ending to this story still gets me, every time... *cradles emotions delicately in palm of hand* Gorgeous.

I hope Papa Werebear initiates new knights.

chan chan chan cham... (con eco dramatico)!!!! no espere es final D: alguien descubrio el estado secreto de alan???? quien sera??? muy buen capitulo!!!! la espera valio la pena :3 aun tiene detallitos en cuanto a ortografía, te recomendaría darle una revision, no son cosas dificiles de corregir ^ ^ pero en general no hay problemas con el escrito ;D sigue asi!!! muero por saber que ocurrirá ahora :

Constant hard ons affect memories. You've caused us to have mini black outs.

>...often times ...forces will have special units ...who have special abilities that the enemy’s grunts don’t have. > Or, what if there were a band of Super Soldiers that were already part of the cast? Imagine...

The Variants remind me of how often times, in video games, enemy forces will have special units or mini-bosses who have special abilities that the enemy's grunts don't have. Gives me an idea for a Pollination spin-off that's more erotic action than erotic horror. I second the idea of a Super Variant who combines their powers. A Host like that could be the villain of his own story all on his own! Even if the Variants don't make it to Book III, maybe there are some wild-breed Variants wondering around in the world...

In book 3 let the new Variant symbiote emerge from the flower like an over bloated muscular cabbage patch kid. (my sister would have passed on that doll.) Can the great one manipulate the plant so that one love struck gym bunny after another can get sucked into the bloom. Or more than one bloom per testicular shaped root bulb. I understand the dilemma of the for arts sake. Right now you have us reaching for our cock and not our wallets. One step at a time gentle writer. HAIL GREAT ABSMAN

> This chapter was amazing. Each one some how improves upon the one before. > Thank you! Hopefully because I've been constructing it right! The hardest part about always being three chapters ahead of you guys was I was always, like, "but the payoff is gonna be so worth it -- give it time!" I'm doing that now! As much as I've been waiting for you all to get to this moment, there's more to cum! > My own twisted mind has thought about the three Variants creating a plant baby that’s gigantic bloom could engulf... (someone's) ...entire body. Maybe it wouldn’t create a new great one or greater one but a new hybrid with all three abilities. But that plant wouldn’t work in the amazing garden we are strolling or sashaying through. > No, but that's a seriously good idea for BOOK THREE -- if in fact the Variants make it that far. > and other times during this chapter the thought crossed my mind. “HAIL GREAT ABSMAN!” > Yeah, but would you buy my book? If only I could figure out a way to monetize this stuff... (Rather than the "You do WHAT for ARTSAKE?" I get now.)

Glad to hear Rubbersome is doing well and hopefully his life will calm down soon. I read his work over and over again. This chapter was amazing. Each one some how improves upon the one before. I had a feeling the Sheriff would not be able to maintain his hold over the deputy. The Sheriff was never capable of loving the deputy. That bond needed to be there before both of them were joined with a symbiote. Joe was a strong enough alpha and had a fatherly love for his son that he could resist. Tony's young lust out weighed his love for his father. I'm happy to see Vernon found Rugby Boy. My own twisted mind has thought about the three Variants creating a plant baby that's gigantic bloom could engulf Rugby Boy's entire body. Maybe it wouldn't create a new great one or greater one but a new hybrid with all three abilities. But that plant wouldn't work in the amazing garden we are strolling or sashaying through. Reading this section among others in this chapter did it for me. > Power. > > He was flexing and deep-breathing and thrusting and moaning – and he felt something slip down the slit of his cock. A wet vine, a flat-backed eel, a whisper-thin tentacle – it entered him. Something living slid inside – erotic and horrifying. He was so close. > > And this creature settled into his balls, swelling to full-size, weighing them down. He felt it trying to connect with him – rudimentary communication – emotional stimuli, images, as if it were discovering the pathway to language. > > I am. You. With I. Me. Us are. WE are. Together. > > The brink of orgasm. > > Join me. > > Ecstasy! > > Joyous, mind-numbing pleasure. Acceptance – rope after rope of cum – of godseed. > > We. Us. We are… > As I was about to cum this time and other times during this chapter the thought crossed my mind. "HAIL GREAT ABSMAN!"

> I think letting the characters retain their personality creates hope in the reader, even if it’s false hope, that the enslavement can somehow be reversed > Beyond that, there's a question of who to trust? If someone's a mindless drone, we pretty much know whose side they're on. If a character retains their personality, until they utter their allegiance, we don't know what they believe. It creates a layer of paranoia I like.

Plus I think letting the characters retain their personality creates hope in the reader, even if it's false hope, that the enslavement can somehow be reversed. Death of personality is usually only good for demonstrating the direness of the situation, or as the climax of a story. Once a character is a mindless drone, there's no opportunity for character growth, they are at best an obstacle for your protagonists to have to deal with at some point.

sorry it's title is actually "unintended wish: gaining confidence" it has very short snippets about the two gym shower scenes. Thank you for catching that, and the feedback 😄

still good story though

what part is the series is unitended wish: a boost of confidence from? (if not ur story than who?)

I like the High Fantasy Gone Wrong thing you've got going on. This is like a pie in the face for all those grand adventurers, their careers ended in utter embarrassment. Great!