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11/21/20, 3:32 AM
If you liked this, check out my [twitter!](https://twitter.com/AlokhTorgud) My boyfriend [(@AstrumEroticum)](https://twitter.com/AstrumEroticum) also often does artwork of our characters, and you can find smaller drabbles I've done in the past! As well as fics that don't fit within the purview of GSS here, haha
11/21/20, 2:55 AM
Very hot story. I look forward to Liam's transformation next.
11/21/20, 2:21 AM
I'm not angry but my dick sure does look the part.
11/21/20, 1:37 AM
And here Absman thought we were going to be angry at him...
11/21/20, 1:29 AM
Didn't have a chance to read this chapter until now. Wow. That was great. I'm still hard.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
11/21/20, 12:31 AM
Makes me want to becum an inflatable toy
11/21/20, 12:19 AM
will be watching out for the next chapter. yup
Jimmy M
11/21/20, 12:15 AM
Great story Willie, would love a continuation and hear about Plan C!
Lusty Stallion
11/21/20, 12:01 AM
Loved it. hoping to see Lucas and Adam get a change of perspectove. Particularly if Lucas becomes a bottom. And perhaps Andi gets some fun with Adam? Thanks dude
11/20/20, 11:59 PM
That was fantastic. You do the hottest transformations.
Anonymous
11/20/20, 11:45 PM
loved this very very hot cant wait for it to be continued. as an aside i think it would be incredibly hot to see one of them aware and struggling during the process however based on your first entry whatever you decide on will be hot.
Lusty Stallion
11/20/20, 11:41 PM
Thanks @fox 136 & @CleanCut for the encouragement. hope you enjoyed the other parts
Anonymous
11/20/20, 11:04 PM
Excellent!
11/20/20, 10:48 PM
Thank you for a very enjoyable read. Tyler's change was wonderful to read about and everything wrapped up smoothly. A very nice piece of writing.
11/20/20, 10:46 PM
were just Chris and Levi affected or Adam and Lucas were turned as well?
11/20/20, 10:22 PM
Humping the inflatable was strangely hot. Well done.
11/20/20, 9:56 PM
Really well-written mental regression, but I'm having trouble seeing where the story goes from here. From the summary, it sounds like Liam and then perhaps Eric are mentally regressed next, but given how upset they both are by Ben's transformation, I can't understand why they'd go along with Ken's experiment.
11/20/20, 9:54 PM
Love this, can't wait for the next chapter
11/20/20, 9:26 PM
> Standing up to Snake and revealing that he understood all the while and made him work to speak French. > That Rugby Boy was bi-lingual was in my head the whole time but I didn't know when I was gonna pull the trigger. I'm glad this moment happened for the reveal. > And then Devin comes in at the end; so how exactly with the Great One heal him and what will the Great One make him into? > Honestly, I have no idea -- I'm glad Devin got a reward tho.
11/20/20, 9:11 PM
Loved the whole series
11/20/20, 8:52 PM
Another little bit I love, that I neglected to comment on- the "*oui* to "we" line was such a great little touch, I loved the pun. So Devin, Joe, Snake, Rugby Boy, the Sheriff, and the Deputy alone in a room together... and the Super-Soldiers on their way to take out Bowden and maybe Murdock, and hopefully save Tony... one more week to find out how this all ends...
11/20/20, 7:59 PM
Wow, Rugby Boy comes to us as a full character now. Standing up to Snake and revealing that he understood all the while and made him work to speak French. And then Devin comes in at the end; so how exactly with the Great One heal him and what will the Great One make him into?
11/20/20, 7:59 PM
Amazing! And...Burt?
May 11, 2019
11/20/20, 7:49 PM
You finally made your fantasy a reality. I wish I could do the same. Great story or experience, your writing style hits all my buttons. Thank you!
11/20/20, 6:49 PM
Good to know. I just wanted some clarification on that. So that was the exercise of the Great One enhancing a Host without wiping his personality that you hinted we would see in Chapter 20. And funny to see that the Variants have been cowed into silence finally.
Nov 14, 2020
Anonymous
11/20/20, 6:42 PM
Damn, I came so hard to that, its insane
11/20/20, 6:33 PM
> is Lt. Johnson a Warrior-Guard now, or is he some sort of lesser morph? > Yes, he's been elevated to that level, but has not been given a mind-wipe. He's still him, with substantially more power. > Also, an absence that seems slightly concerning… where did the Variants go? > They were there the whole time, honest, kneeling quietly by Joe. They were too afraid to do their usual antics.
11/20/20, 6:15 PM
A couple more thoughts that occurred to me: is Lt. Johnson a Warrior-Guard now, or is he some sort of lesser morph? Also, interesting that Johnson can enthrall his own men. Or perhaps the positioning of the hands is simply a universal gesture that binds a Host and a symbiont to the will of the man who does it to him? Also, an absence that seems slightly concerning... *where did the Variants go?*
11/20/20, 5:18 PM
> I assumed you were calling back to Vive le Québec libre! > Oui.
11/20/20, 5:13 PM
> I agonized over this line. I was afraid it was too funny for the moment. I’m glad you saw it as I intended it. It didn't strike me as too funny. I assumed you were calling back to Vive le Québec libre!