Recent Comments

12/3/20, 9:13 AM
i hope we get to read more of this one!
12/3/20, 8:08 AM
what a bad ending
12/3/20, 7:07 AM
A truly original story idea.
Evan
12/3/20, 6:57 AM
I loved the way this was delivered, and the concept. Very, very hot. Great first story!
12/3/20, 5:39 AM
i wouldn't mind a chapter about Mr. Wendt's transformation, especially the "straight to gay" mental transformation- that would be really hot!
Anonymous
12/3/20, 4:20 AM
That story was good. It made me feel so horny. How did you become so good writer is their secret or was it just practice for you that made you good at writing. I hope someday is that my stories make people happy like yours. Four of a long way to go before writing gets good.
Anonymous
12/3/20, 1:10 AM
Excellent
12/2/20, 10:32 PM
Can we please get dad a man????
EJG
12/2/20, 8:26 PM
'Engorged'...hmmm,i just love that phrase. I can only imagine when that meathead Darren gets on the stuff..!
12/2/20, 4:03 PM
Incredible finish to an enthralling story!
12/2/20, 4:03 PM
Loved it! Can't wait to see more! :0
12/2/20, 2:58 PM
Literally one of the best mystery thriller eroticas I have ever read. thanks for writing this gem! I had fun anticipating and I never would have guessed the mastermind. But I guess I should have; after all, he had the least reason to be a homophobe, per se. Compared to the others, his contemplation was weak. and he had a layout of the house to heart.
12/2/20, 2:00 PM
Mal is great!
12/2/20, 1:59 PM
Great story wish I knew where that pub was!!!!
12/2/20, 1:19 PM
Very creative way to conclude this great series.
giveintothemusk
12/2/20, 11:40 AM
Been so long since an update! 🥺
12/2/20, 11:35 AM
Deej guessed it right. I did not know that the sun was intended to be a clue to point at Larry. Would like to see more about how Larry was turned by user#341.
12/2/20, 11:28 AM
Ohh, I like this story. I'm a sucker for fantasy settings in general, and buff elves? Even better. The idea of the mask is amazing, although it would have been nice to see more of the older elve falling under its spell. The ending is also really nice, with the elves being allowed to go and getting their land back. Good endings like that aren't seen often on stories like that, so I appreciate it all the more. i look forward to reading more of your stories in future
giveintothemusk
12/2/20, 11:22 AM
A great story!
12/2/20, 10:42 AM
Wonderfully done dude! Good job!
12/2/20, 10:35 AM
I've been checking the site ten times a day for this conclusion--and it did NOT disappoint! What a twist! I can't wait to go back and reread the story to find all the clues mentioned here. And I am also glad that the characters came out OK (and hotter! and gay!) having learned their lessons. Bigger, this was truly an incredible story. You should be so proud! Agatha is smiling down on you. :D
Braxton fan
12/2/20, 10:10 AM
Yes! I totally called it as Larry after chapter 4 I think. Congratulations on an amazing series that seems to have generated a lot of engagement. I often find that long, multipart stories really start to drag after about three chapters, but this stayed fresh, and hot! I usually prefer one-shots but damn! this was worth sticking around for. Genuine envy for how great a writer you are.
12/2/20, 7:55 AM
Oh hey, Azure! Fancy seeing you here, man XD Yeah, I figured the story might fit in here quite well. And you did compliment me back then, that's more than enough ;3 But thank you as well for letting me write this!
12/2/20, 7:41 AM
loved that you included the ryme at the end read the original in school this one was better
Bluedude
12/2/20, 7:36 AM
lol imagine my surprised to see the story end up here! i dont think i got to thank ya for doing it back then so ill say it now. Thank you for the awesome story dude!~
12/2/20, 6:46 AM
I so didn't anticipate this! I loved it! A nice twist ending to a great and horny series!
Evan
12/2/20, 5:29 AM
This was a great story, well done and thanks. The ending was surprising and sweet. I also loved the elf barks at the end, I was hoping for it.
12/2/20, 5:03 AM
Exactly the fantasy that I am into! Love that he retained his consciousness somewhat and we get a glimpse into what being a powerful robot feels like, and what it's like to assimilate someone else
12/2/20, 4:59 AM
way hot