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Anonymous
1/5/21, 5:58 PM
Such a great story thanks so much , love your work
1/5/21, 4:04 PM
As the others said, this is a very well written story. Well done !!
EJG
1/5/21, 3:31 PM
I liked it. Would be so much hotter that if Paulie's gonna get jocks to fuck him,he should get them to assert more control,more alpha-ness. Maybe some dirty talking and upping their dominance./
1/5/21, 3:22 PM
So great, as usual!!! 🤩
1/5/21, 3:15 PM
Weird, original and wonderful. And the thought of Jörmungandr - oh gods.
1/5/21, 2:55 PM
would like to c more of this kind of story.....although might have some ideas like getting a pup to do him maybe.....LOL or maybe something kinky like that maybe even have him become somebody w/ a fat fetish/feeder/feedee type of relationship....
1/5/21, 2:34 PM
This is brilliant and I love it.
1/5/21, 2:22 PM
I think you've outdone yourself with this one. The whole way through reading it I was theorising about how things would end up, but you still managed to both surprise me and keep that feel-good tone that I just can't get enough of. I still can't help but hope that Griffin's parents hold the key to some obscure immortality for pairs in true love - but that's the hopeless romantic in me... Anyway, this is a truly inspiring creative work (and any story that has a kraken come out of left field is just... *chef's kiss*).
1/5/21, 1:29 PM
This story stinks . . . and I mean that in the best possible way.
1/5/21, 1:13 PM
There are some stories on this site that go way beyond fap material, and this is without question one of them. (While still being excellent fap material, let's be clear.) The writing is just magical. The way you describe that little tea shop in the beginning is beautiful, the way Coiirei catches feelings for Griffin is so sweet and tender, and the way you describe their relationship evolving is so, so, so well done. There's so much to appreciate here, from the way you describe the 'energy' that Coirrei gets from having sex to the blisteringly hot first time they hook up to the little pet names they come up with for each other as the years go by. I'm rambling, but this deserves to be rambled over. Excellent, excellent work, Time!
Anonymous
1/5/21, 12:46 PM
Love the unintentional debasement with the boots pairing with the daisy dukes and the tanktop that is likely closer to a crop top. Not to mention them being assless (bare-assed) to top it off. Also, the mentioning of them making Green Lantern into their drug mule sounds like a preview to him visiting Roy again and actually getting some action (which clearly will greatly please Roy, and of course the mind-fucked GL as well). Looking forward to wherever you take this! GL being used by a different criminal associate/thug/lowlife of T-Bone/Chuy works too.
1/5/21, 12:41 PM
It's hot. I'd love that to happen .
1/5/21, 11:36 AM
this is so good. I cant wait to see what's next!
1/5/21, 9:50 AM
In my opinion, Authors shouldn't have to adjust their story to fit the readers. This is a free site, stories here can be read for free. If a story doesn't interest you, or makes you uncomfortable in anyway, you can and should not read it. Im pretty sure the author does not mistreat women in anyway in real life, and fiction is meant to be explored. Anyway, thank you for writing an amazing story. looking forward to more
Jonanator
1/5/21, 8:43 AM
Hottt story, can wait for more.
1/5/21, 8:18 AM
@Larry Thanks, Larry, glad to see you here again! and thanks for keep reading this story, buddy! There's far more humiliation on the way, you can bet for it. There will be some changes on Kyle's uniform but it will take a time to appear. If you have some suggestions let me hear them!
1/5/21, 7:14 AM
i like the setup, the mind control, and the twist at the end, but the story so far is fairly short, so there hasn't been a lot of character or plot development yet. Don't have much to say yet, except that i am looking forward to seeing where the story will go from here.
1/5/21, 7:01 AM
Very interesting so far! Would love to see more perspective chapters from unaffected gay men in the world now that any man they want is at their disposal
1/5/21, 5:21 AM
This one is really nice again .
Anonymous
1/5/21, 5:00 AM
Very sweet in its own way. I quite enjoyed it!
1/5/21, 4:32 AM
Such a unique combination of the supernatural and romance! Enjoyed this story.
1/5/21, 4:08 AM
Ah, it ws woderful, a bit sad at the end, I thought that he would use the son to get to his father and then all the gang, just not to mess with him and keep the son xD
Robodrone
1/5/21, 2:53 AM
Great work! i know this is supposed to be a cautionary tale (among other things! ;-) But, it SO makes me want to be a Bad Boy for Christmas! Fucking Santa Claus bastard! (think he heard me??) :-D
giveintothemusk
1/5/21, 2:36 AM
Need need need an update! Hahahaha 🙏
1/5/21, 1:54 AM
great job! Loved it!
1/5/21, 1:09 AM
Pile the humiliation on! Thanks for the longer chapter. It's always great when the superhero gets so close to getting out of the situation, only to get sucked right back in. Im hoping for more modifications to Kyle's uniform. Maybe a two piece suit? I wonder whats going to happen if that video gets out.....
Aug 12, 2018
1/5/21, 12:59 AM
That was such a fucking hot slob transformation story. Fuck yeah.
1/5/21, 12:49 AM
Glad you are continuing this story. Looking forward to reading more.
1/5/21, 12:48 AM
So hot. Just the right amount of tension that makes you really want to see that hot unaware dad/son pair go at it for the pleasure of Dr Cullen
1/5/21, 12:31 AM
An extremely hot, well-written story!