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Dec 31, 2020
1/6/21, 1:36 PM
I loved getting a peek into all these different multiverses and I became really invested in seeing who would wind up together! It made me think of a short story called "Happy Endings". Really well-written!
1/6/21, 1:31 PM
I love the character dynamics you set up so quickly and deftly in each scene. You could feel their reputations in the school coming through in the crowd's reactions. I also loved the way you used enemy-to-lovers here -- it felt way better than actual revenge would have and they make a very sweet couple. Incredibly well-written and super hot!
1/6/21, 1:29 PM
This was INCREDIBLE! Guys getting potted out, slow, and lazy is one of my biggest turn-ons, and it shows up so rarely here. The transformation aspect and intelligence draining were amazing! :)
Jan 6, 2021
1/6/21, 1:26 PM
You manage to up the ante really quick in this story and it is very, very hot. I especially like the part where you get into this new slave's mindset and his devotion to Master -- it's really sexy.
Jan 6, 2021
1/6/21, 1:04 PM
This story is making me think that A) my own poker games lack imagination, and B) I'm glad they do, because I'm not that good at poker. You took on a big challenge with four characters in a 1,000-word story and did wonderfully. Nice progression of mental changes and heightening of the sexual tension between the guys throughout. Nicely done!
1/6/21, 12:16 PM
@keeprofd he will think its part of the rehabilitation program for the criminals
1/6/21, 12:05 PM
nice one
Daniel
1/6/21, 7:21 AM
One of the hottest stories I have ever read- BRAVO SIR. I.J.S.
Dec 17, 2020
Anonymous
1/6/21, 6:39 AM
Creative and sexy, more please I.J.S.
1/6/21, 5:13 AM
Oh nice! Love this chapter, would love it if Kyle can get his mind free but still has to obey his orders and they fuck him while he's protesting!
FantasyWithKinks
1/6/21, 4:54 AM
*"Let's talk consent and boundaries"* the kraken says... I don't think I've ever laughed so hard at porn as I have at this.
tpify
1/6/21, 3:31 AM
quiero ese anilllo!!!!!!
1/6/21, 12:36 AM
One of my biggest turn ons in stories is resistance or trying to escape, only to succumb and become one of them in the end. Liam's continual refusal wasn't resistance, but it was. Even when he got on Grindr and got excited about the gorgeous guys, it was still refusal, but growing in suspicion which led to resistance. But alas, all for naught, he became one of them. Perfect. All very hot.
1/6/21, 12:16 AM
How did I miss this when it first came out? I loved the first chapter and finishing this, I get to look forward to Ch 3. I love take-over stories, no matter how plastic they can be. LOL. You do them so well. "And once Douglas shot his full plastic load down his father's throat...." my favorite line in the story. Always good to see Dad/son.
Anonymous
1/5/21, 8:54 PM
i love this series so much I cant even explain it!
1/5/21, 8:33 PM
this is great. thank you for writing more of this story. it goes well with the original.
Jonanator
1/5/21, 8:19 PM
Sooooo can't wait for more, I love this story.
Jonanator
1/5/21, 8:17 PM
more, please this is so hotttt. I hope you bring his brother back for more fun.
1/5/21, 8:13 PM
this story never fails to turn me on. I love the dominance the main character has over these dumb straight muscles hunks
1/5/21, 8:06 PM
This has been fun. Thanks Rotherham
1/5/21, 7:18 PM
Yes, Moose, YES!!! Thank you. And thank you AMS for this amazing story! Still on the edge of my seat :)
1/5/21, 7:16 PM
Welcome back ! You're my favorite author here I'm so happy to read a new story from you :)
1/5/21, 7:13 PM
Thanks all! Glad to hear you enjoyed it. :) Not sure EXACTLY what's going next in the series. Have a couple ideas kicking around because I envision it as a bunch of vignettes. Might take a minute because I have a few other WIPs that I need to finish off. I'll make sure to post any that are applicable to this site's theme here ;)
i am your slave
1/5/21, 7:00 PM
I really loved this story, the idea of first hypnotizing the cock to control the boy, is not new but it is well written here. I love that he strokes to the image of miles fingers going from left to right, right to left.. and at the end of the count down you are totally Miles slave, lol.
Leather Boy
1/5/21, 6:26 PM
I loved this whole series I would love this to happen to me, every bit of it..
1/5/21, 6:08 PM
Wonderful! The reality shifts were great!
Anonymous
1/5/21, 6:01 PM
My all time favourite story , thanks for sharing your work
Anonymous
1/5/21, 5:58 PM
Such a great story thanks so much , love your work
1/5/21, 4:04 PM
As the others said, this is a very well written story. Well done !!
EJG
1/5/21, 3:31 PM
I liked it. Would be so much hotter that if Paulie's gonna get jocks to fuck him,he should get them to assert more control,more alpha-ness. Maybe some dirty talking and upping their dominance./