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Jan 22, 2021
giveintothemusk
1/22/21, 11:31 PM
Would love a story where he meets the other guy 😍
Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 11:09 PM
I don't see how a single conversation in an entryway could be so incredibly hot! I was hoping Greg would take Paul along for dinner, but maybe Greg will bring his new Man home with him. i certainly hope so!
Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 9:55 PM
Oh, fuck, what a hot story! I love the change, and how good job you did describing it! It started good, and was enjoying it, when suddenly I realized how turned on I was. It is great. I like how much Greg have changed in the end. I would love to read another chapter, but would be great if you keep that sexy Man out of screen, so we could follow Paul's further debauchery in hands of an even slutty and dumbified Greg.
giveintothemusk
1/22/21, 9:13 PM
Yeah, I've come back to this story several times already. You've got me hooked!
1/22/21, 8:46 PM
great visual writing 😊. great job. do more.
Jockstink
1/22/21, 7:53 PM
I loved reading this, but more important for me, it passed the dead of night test: when I went to bed last night, and woke up a couple of times, I found myself replaying the story over and over again in my mind.
Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 7:18 PM
Love it.
1/22/21, 7:08 PM
Interesting suggestions guys. Thanks! Glad you are all enjoying so far and I appreciate the comments 😊👊👍
1/22/21, 6:37 PM
I really hope you continue , its a really great concept :D
1/22/21, 6:17 PM
I loved it. thanks for the story. And don't hesitate to write another story with the same tags because I like them very much !!
1/22/21, 4:52 PM
What I want to say about this story. It's really inventive, well written and I liked the detail of the changes happening that were present. Like others, I would have like to have some writing on the mental changes that might be going on during the physical changes. Other then that it was really wonderful to read and I would love to see other stories like this with monster cocks.
1/22/21, 4:49 PM
blankbot, I can totally see mind control in the way "Papa" chants over his head at night, and the speed in which he lost English! I imagine more stuff to your liking, to occur in the next chapter?
Jemsea13
1/22/21, 4:30 PM
Love this! A new favorite!
Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 4:11 PM
Amazing story! I'd love to get a sequel where the man comes back to Greg and Paul's house.
Jan 22, 2021
Anonymous
1/22/21, 4:08 PM
Hot. More like this please.
Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 3:57 PM
I really love this story! It was very well developed and you built the world well. I'm more surprised you didn't add the classic Edlam dark twist, like one of the sons (Todd specifically) comes to visit his dad at work and is as twisted as Rob and makes changes to the world to be more gay or perverse; or John deciding to step into the room and make changes without Rob knowing, making him more of a sex plaything for him and his sons, or make gay incest a perfectly normal thing for everyone. I found this a much nicer and sweeter story and I really do love it quite a lot.
Jan 22, 2021
Anonymous
1/22/21, 3:46 PM
spectacular
Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 3:30 PM
Wow. This is great. Reminds me of a similar straight story on mcstories. Pacing is excellent. The suspense added when John tries to get to the generator was very nice. I could definitely see you getting more mileage out of this. One of the other employees at the lab could use the device while John introduces Rob to his new home.
1/22/21, 3:00 PM
Wonderful story!
1/22/21, 2:53 PM
Amazing story and incredible transformations! I hope there is more!
1/22/21, 2:34 PM
I definitely need to see more of this. hope there are plenty of changes!
Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 2:33 PM
I'm fairly new to this forum but having been a fan of your writing over at MC stories for a very long time I was thrilled to see this submission. I absolutely love the story it was great! I only wish it hadn't started out so fast. I would have loved to have seen small changes made and some small perception of the changes. I find it so incredibly exciting when they're aware that something has changed but not quite sure what. loved this!
Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 2:09 PM
So Hot Man, Thank You!
Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 1:09 PM
Your writing is incredibly hot. Loved this story!
Rock Creek Werewolf
1/22/21, 11:42 AM
bravo! you should consider writing more!
Anonymous
1/22/21, 11:40 AM
I think a watersports round would be hot, and yeah, it's the obvious choice, but Victor
Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 10:18 AM
Theres too much world building to let it just be a one and done story, it'll be such a waste!
1/22/21, 9:29 AM
Hello and thanks for the support! I do plan on having the next part come out soon. This was rather a pretty spontaneous write I did in about two hours, but I do have a little bit more planned. The pinball machine isn't done just yet...
Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 9:29 AM
my god!!!! more!!! this is so fucking hot!
Jan 22, 2021
1/22/21, 9:05 AM
fuckkk im so happy to see a story by you again