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1/13/24, 11:59 PM
Just wondering when Marcus gains his normal mind again? I know he's being trained now but I'm curious to see how his conscious mind will handle the changes.

1/14/24, 8:03 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Me too. And I wondering if the archive unlocks a new pet only when the loyalty of a first pet reaches 100 points? Beacuse I want to see Hesper and Malcolm becoming pets soon (And see theirs conscious minds handling with all changes, like Cutlerfan suggest for Marcus).
hypnocat
1/14/24, 6:15 AM
Nice story! Wish Harlow would take Blade's key to keep them locked
Jan 13, 2024
1/14/24, 5:21 AM
A submissive fitness dilf isn't something you easily see in the stories on this site. Great work. Already waiting for part 2.
12/31/23, 7:40 PM
Ich bin für B

1/14/24, 5:11 AM
@[ingogay](/user/show/10031493) Ich habe die Optionen jetzt gegeneinander getauscht! (also die bisherige Option A, gegen B und umngekehrt). Zeitgleich ist die Option "Vollzeitsklave" bereits in Arbeit...
Anthony D. Langford
1/13/24, 5:54 PM
This story was hot, taboo and has so much truth. A truth people dont want to admit, but their hard cocks can’t lie. The body wants what it wants.

1/14/24, 4:58 AM
@Anthony D. Langford Yes. Good fiction exposes truths we have all been conditioned to repress or deny. Thanks for your comment.
1/14/24, 4:40 AM
@Edlam please continue!!
Anonymous
1/14/24, 3:56 AM
LOVE THIS! I hope we get some snippets of his life in the future. Will you continue on?
1/14/24, 12:25 AM
Great story. Nice to see a power bottom's perspective.
Jan 13, 2024
1/13/24, 11:55 PM
Young the master and a dilf as a sub/victim, I love it
Jan 13, 2024
1/13/24, 11:54 PM
love where this is going!
Jan 13, 2024
1/13/24, 9:31 PM
Any time I see that you've posted, I instantly open the story, grab my dick, and let your words take me away!
Martin
1/13/24, 9:10 PM
Interesting start! Looking forward to where this is leading!
Jan 13, 2024
EntrancedGay92
1/13/24, 9:08 PM
A nice twist on a favorite trope.
CorvidCorpus
1/12/24, 10:23 PM
Hey there! Very much a first attempt at actually contributing to the site after using it for years. Friendly feedback appreciated :grinning:

1/13/24, 9:06 AM
@CorvidCorpus Hi, and congrats on your first story! I thought it was a great addition to the stage show stories we have here! It was interesting that the audience was also hypnotized as well, I think that could have potential in a future story. I liked the hypnotist’s sadistic bent, and hope that we might get more of this character. The small scenes of the suggestions you illustrated and the cold open paint a really tantalizing picture of the kind of show they got into, I think you could write something really great by exploring the inductions/buildup to the show and more of the suggestions. I went ahead and added this to my list of mass hypnosis stories: it perfectly hit my tastes, good job! Hope to see more from you

CorvidCorpus
1/13/24, 9:01 PM
@[11037](/user/show/13616) Thank you! Would definitely like to continue it though I have no specific ideas of where to go from here. I figure the set-up here lends itself to vignettes in basically any scenario haha. Definitely see the point about inductions and such, not my forté but something to certainly take a shot at next time. I've always enjoyed seeing the more callous/sadistic side of stage hypno and keen to explore it further when I get the time!
1/13/24, 6:05 PM
Would love to see more of this!!
1/13/24, 5:27 PM
Fuck me that’s so hot. Can’t wait to see where Sargent takes Lucky. The lucky bitch.
1/13/24, 5:05 PM
Awesome story!
1/13/24, 4:52 PM
Very hot. Lucky should be taking cock up his ass pretty soon. Great story dude. Thanks
1/9/24, 2:39 AM
Lord, I have something to confess... That this was the most incredible chapter so far! Very intense and fun and deepens both characters a little more. But it looks like the priest will be in trouble due to his recent strange behavior. And Patrick seems to like him more than he should. Drama Drama!!! Already waiting for the next chapter.

1/13/24, 4:38 PM
@[Sexcrab](/user/show/10027159) Well damn, I’m not even sure what I’m going to do for the next chapter 😂 I’ve been grasping at straws for the next installment, but I’m worried what I think of next won’t be as good as this chapter in terms of development 😬
Anonymous
1/13/24, 3:09 PM
hot!!!
1/13/24, 2:15 PM
The delivery boy. OMGOSH. NICE
1/13/24, 2:06 PM
Wow, wow, wow! What a hot story. Cant wait for more from ya!
Gingcub
1/13/24, 2:01 PM
Hot! Love when it’s this cruel and dark
Dec 29, 2021
1/13/24, 1:47 PM
JoSmith, you are such a great and compelling writer. It is shortly after Christmas while reading this...and I feel the "spirit of Christmas" all over again. i love the masculine yet sensitive and kind man that you created. He is ABSOLUTE perfection. Thank you for including smells of the room, his body, his aroma, his privates etc... LOVE that... these really make a difference for me as I "get into the story".
Elm
1/13/24, 12:52 PM
Love the game mechanics!
1/13/24, 12:46 PM
Very excited to see the story and all of the characters continue in this sequel! Great writing. I love just how dark Pete has become.
1/13/24, 11:35 AM
Such a hot story, love it!
1/13/24, 10:18 AM
This is one of my favorites on this site. I’m still coming back to it nearly 3 years later 🥵
1/13/24, 8:42 AM
I'm so happy to have found this amazing story which I binged over the past days and many sessions. You're writing is perfect in my opinion. I can clearly see everything happening. You're descript with a great balance of detail but moving the story along. I had to be patient to get to the juicy parts but not too patient to where I dried up and got soft, wanting to skip ahead. Instead I was hanging on every word, and even felt myself under Tanner's spell. I wanted to choose Tanner's ending. I'm so glad that it was a choice. The only sad part is that it ended. I will be on the lookout for any other stories by you since I'm a new fan!
1/13/24, 8:24 AM
It's hot to read something with a Muslim character, even if I find hotter that the Muslim guy is the one who become gay. A lot to do with this kind of character.