Recent Comments

3/15/21, 12:19 AM
I loved this story. The Parasite draining Superman was part of my gay awakening and I've always had a thing for reading/watching superheroes get drained. This did not disappoint in that area. I hope to see more from you in the future!
3/15/21, 12:01 AM
I do love the twists and thoughtful conflicts. Good works!
Mar 13, 2021
3/14/21, 11:58 PM
Amazing. So curious about the teases of other triggers planted in his mind waiting to be used.
3/14/21, 11:53 PM
As far as writing style goes, it was well done and the proper length. But the ending... I would agree, it was not to my taste. One of the recurring themes in the MC stories is that people find a way to fulfill a role for each victim or character. Everyone becomes connected or finds contentment in their new life but this ends all possibilities. Evil wins. Hope is lost. end of story. If there were a part two where Superman is reborn in the conscience of the Parasite or somehow Parasite is replaced by the unseen power of goodness or hope, I would give this a plus rating.
3/14/21, 11:43 PM
I feel really bad for Dale here. Sure, hid advice was of questionable value, but "one of your patients bought a magical mind control ring of horniness off the internet" isn't really something they train you for. especially when he's right that maybe Marc needs to reign it back a bit. And poor Teddy. His life about to be ruined because Marc wanted to prove a point, and not even a particularly good point. He didn't just make Dale super horny to test his self-control, Dale has already been mind fucked into a horny gay slut and had his intelligence drained so he can't do his job. Its not proving a point, its being a prick. The story really reminds me a lot of "Faucets" by Screaming Moist or "Stone of Nanya", so it will be interesting to see where it goes. Keep up the good work.
3/14/21, 11:10 PM
I really like the world and I think your story is great. Many topics that interest me. I would like to know what types of drones there are, which ones are canon in your story? We know that there are T, B and Cyborg (was it C?) Drones. I also saw pictures of mermaid drones. Are there more and what characterizes them (appearance / function / fetish)?
Anonymous
3/14/21, 10:50 PM
This was hot! I'd love to see what happens next
Anonymous
3/14/21, 10:31 PM
I love this! Please make more
3/14/21, 10:18 PM
Dark Twist! My favorite kind! Thank you for this chapter.
3/14/21, 10:11 PM
You've been one of my favorite authors for some time now, but I haven't commented. Since you've asked, though, I'll offer my thoughts. I love this series. One of the best from you. I love seeing how the ring is changing Marc and how he doesn't seem concerned about it at all. Or maybe he is, but definitely not in this chapter. I think the only thing I would have changed in this chapter is having Marc give a little extra erotic energy to Dale before leaving, but I'm evil like that. I'm also curious if we'll ever find out how the ring got its magic, but yet, I don't want to know, you know? And like the commenter above, I'd love to see what happens to an already gay guy that wasn't changed by the ring. Either way, though, I'm in this for the ride, and know you'll have a satisfactory ending for us.
3/14/21, 10:10 PM
Great story! I confess I've had a Superman/ Parasite story floating around in my head for years, but this one does the job in a terrific way and hits all the right buttons! Well done -- and SUPER dark at the end!
3/14/21, 10:01 PM
Thanks very much for coming back and post a new amazing chapter please i would love to see the next chapter soon cheers up and take care :D
3/14/21, 9:49 PM
This story was SO CLOSE to being written just for me! The writing is excellent, the premise is hot as fuck, the only thing I didn't care for was the very ending. I can't say it didn't fit the theme of the challenge, just snuff isn't for me. That's okay though, bc to each their own. I'd give this like a 98%, a job well done.
Anonymous
3/14/21, 9:45 PM
Love this! What happens when he uses the ring on a guy that was already gay to begin with (as opposed to going for round two with one he turned)? Or does the ring only steer him to straight guys?
Anonymous
3/14/21, 9:21 PM
you truly never disappoint!
3/14/21, 8:23 PM
Very hot. Always love stories with obedient muscle slaves.
Mar 14, 2021
3/14/21, 7:05 PM
This one goes to some really weird places, but I loved it!
3/14/21, 6:42 PM
this is twisted, sexy and brilliant and made me shoot all over! excellent application of the story!
3/14/21, 6:12 PM
this is getting more and more creative.
3/14/21, 6:08 PM
Now that's a goddamn ending! Amazing.
Anonymous
3/14/21, 6:00 PM
too mean spirited
3/14/21, 5:41 PM
MARAVILLOSO...
Mar 13, 2021
3/14/21, 5:20 PM
This is honestly one of my favourite series on this site. I really hope you keep going because its incredibly hot.
Anonymous
3/14/21, 5:01 PM
I so want more chapters of this. It was so good.
Absolute_Abs
3/14/21, 4:52 PM
That was really hot, I came as often as Dave's boys did I'm definitely ready for what you do with Preppy, I know it will be good as you're a great writer
3/14/21, 4:48 PM
Well, thank you very much! As much as I'd like to take the credit, it really is a joint effort and MisterXIX has been responsible for some of my favourite parts of the story so far! We both hope people continue to enjoy the story as it unfolds!
Anonymous
3/14/21, 4:27 PM
the ripping out of his shirt is sooo hot!!!
3/14/21, 4:16 PM
Thoroughly enjoying your writing, you're very talented. I'm curious what will happen to the mortal, and to the puppy.
Mar 13, 2021
3/14/21, 4:04 PM
I love the plot twist. ;)
Anonymous
3/14/21, 3:42 PM
i just found this story... a different read but making me horny... any chance of the next chapter?!?