Recent Comments

1/13/24, 5:18 AM
Glad I skipped to the end before reading much of the series. You write well, though.
1/13/24, 5:10 AM
A pretty fun story with no serious aftereffects.
1/13/24, 4:58 AM
Hehe Belated happy new year! I hope you find yourself well and invigorated to continue? No rush, of course :kissing_heart:
1/12/24, 2:05 PM
Micha lässt sich beißen

1/12/24, 7:48 PM
@[leedsdevil](/user/show/910157) Falls noch nicht gemacht, bitte die [1] drücken und über diese Variante das passende Ende lesen. Ich hoffe es gefällt, viele Grüße Arcturus

1/13/24, 2:37 AM
@[Arcturus](/user/show/10044412) Danke
Avox
1/12/24, 12:48 PM
So when’s the next chapter coming out?

1/13/24, 2:32 AM
@Avox Probably next week Sunday.
1/13/24, 2:21 AM
Another fun chapter. Always hot to see hunky Noah being played with again.
1/12/24, 11:55 PM
Fantastic story thus far, hoping for it to continue!
1/12/24, 11:10 PM
Great work. I definitely enjoyed the story and would read a story about Ate. Thanks for sharing your work.
1/12/24, 10:06 PM
Hot Hope he makes him (and his dad) to convert to Islam a Muslim men needs a Muslim wife I love sissies in burkas And Muslim men are as teached by Islam protective of their wife’s they submit and are treasured so not other men sees her outside family for the beauty he is Circumspicies him have him start tugging become more ashamed of showing him self to other man Revert him to Islam am have walk in public in a brurka After all he is Persian Muslim men and no one should lay an eye on his woman
1/12/24, 8:51 PM
Wow. Leviticus. Now that’s a new wrinkle. Someone commented earlier that they felt this whole thing was being instigated by the doctor’s assistant and I am leaning that way now. I think it’s more of an intervention to help the doc overcome what his asshole parents did to him with Leviticus. Regardless…I’m loving it. More more
1/12/24, 8:31 PM
Can’t stop reading.
1/12/24, 8:15 PM
Woof! Damn you’ve got me going. More more
1/12/24, 8:15 PM
Loved this and definitely looking for more from these characters!
1/12/24, 7:57 PM
Wow. Very well written and thought out and my cock is loving the story. Great start. I feel like a lucky man for running onto this and look forward to reading more. Thanks man
1/12/24, 5:22 PM
Very hot. Strange, but i loved it! I really like the way you wrote the characters.
HH
1/12/24, 2:32 PM
Happy New Year to the GH team, can't wait to see what you get up to this year to keep us hooked! ID: 1240050

1/12/24, 4:07 PM
@HH And rewards for you! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
Anonymous
1/12/24, 3:45 PM
Please keep writing stories like this! I found you on ao3 and I love your work :)
1/12/24, 2:46 PM
Wow. So much info. I love it. I so wish this was an adult movie with top notch CGI and voice actors with all the explicit sex scenes. It would be bigger to me than Lord of the Rings! I long for the day when all of your stories are available like that. You’d be bigger than Stephen Spielberg. Fuck me that would be sweet!
1/12/24, 2:46 PM
I LOVE this story of Jack and Joe. You have so effectively described him and his personality, that I can feel this man. Such a great writer.
1/12/24, 2:42 PM
More please want to see what happens next
1/12/24, 2:26 PM
I LOVE LOVE this story. THANK YOU.
1/12/24, 1:31 PM
I can’t wait for the next part!

1/12/24, 2:17 PM
@[Hypnocurious](/user/show/1798860) Thanks! I'll try to be fast 😁
Anonymous
1/11/24, 3:30 AM
Great story, enjoyed it a lot. I hope the main character gets to at some point. I would like to see Dane get topped by him or maybe a cute nerd or teacher.

1/12/24, 1:51 PM
@Anonymous Hey, hey! Thanks for the comment. (SPOILER) but yeah, definetly have plans for Jace to do that as well. He'll be very subby in the beggining, but do already have plans for 4th or 5th chapter, depending how long the scenes before will take. His dom/sub, top/bot preferences will largly depend on the specific person he's having sex with, but even then it can change as their relationship grows.
1/10/24, 10:40 PM
As requested, letting you know I came to this story~ Excited to see more and hoping Jace gets his shot with Dane!

1/12/24, 1:44 PM
@[AgentCoyner](/user/show/10008527) Thank you! Hope to keep hitting the right notes for you and for many more explosive reading ahead. <3
1/9/24, 3:33 AM
A day late, but just wanted to take the time to commend you for writing an effortful first submission! The juxtaposition between Jace's stepfather and Coach was a nice contrast and I'm looking forward to seeing how Jace's relationships develop - particularly between Coach and Dane. I would heed Soren's advise about the separation of dialogue between paragraphs, as you did a masterful job writing it and it would be a shame if it got lost in the reading. Keep writing and I can't wait to see more!

1/12/24, 1:41 PM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Thanks! I'm also most excited about developing these specific relationships, between Jace with Coach and his stepfather. Wanted for him to have a diferent dynamic with each other character, so they truly feel different and wanted to have both extremes. There's gonna be more exposition and worldbuilding in the next two chapters, so then it will be a bit more clear where each path is going. Stay tuned!
1/12/24, 2:21 AM
ID 1291843

Anonymous
1/12/24, 1:06 PM
@[Palladium](/user/show/10033545) Rewards! 😍
1/11/24, 9:14 PM
ID 1191188 I really like all the new stuff, especially the labyrinth! The events and the guys are so hot! I just wish getting a mythical was a little bit easier and didn't require thousands of battles even when shards are plenty available...

Anonymous
1/12/24, 1:06 PM
@[Hinner](/user/show/10013948) Rewards! :heart_eyes:
1/12/24, 12:20 PM
I agree with felix.nox : the ending just confirmed the rest of the story. All chapters are unethical, not just the last. The bad guy won, yes. It doesn't mean the story is badly written or uninteresting or not exciting. I liked this story, it gave good material for masturbation, it was hot.
1/12/24, 11:56 AM
Super super hot!
1/12/24, 6:54 AM
It took me a while to get into the characters of this story. I'm not certain that I ever did, but the writing grew stronger with each chapter. For a first post, this is a great one. I'd like to read more from you, DomNerd. Thanks for an unexpected New Year's gift.