Recent Comments

6/9/21, 12:14 AM
its nice to receive tribute
6/8/21, 10:14 PM
Thanks very much for continue the story and post this new chapter thanks you so much and i'm glad you bring AN-14-0213979 i'm eager to know about him and his fate as well like the Noel story hahahha cheers up and continue like that!
6/8/21, 9:51 PM
i neeed option 3!
6/8/21, 9:45 PM
Ah, the memories! I remember how this series OBSESSED me when it was first released. The chapter with the robot spider injecting the kid and his transformation into a slave? I still get hard thinking about that. You weave a beautiful homage with this story! I love the repetitive chanting, the surrender, helping with a new recruit before the protagonist is fully converted, all of it! Well done! Anytime you want to dip back into this universe, I'm right there lapping it up!
6/8/21, 12:22 PM
You are my favorite writer on this whole site. I stalk for new updates however few and far between. But I'll take quality over quantity any day. I also think you are giving subliminal messages in your stories. What started as a small liking for men's feet is growing into a bigger fetish thanks to you. My cravings grow after reading your stuff. I also love other sex acts of course and wondering if they will be incorporated into the story (don't respond to that, I hate spoilers either way). But either way it's hot and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Family Matters is my absolute favorite because of the many characters and sex acts (which on occasion includes ass eating too!), but I really love them all. I have been reading your stuff a long time but this is my first time commenting (since I always need to type 1-handed after reading your stuff). Keep up the great work!

6/8/21, 7:18 PM
Thanks for your comment @HusbandFirst. I humbly appreciate your support, it truly keeps us amateur writers encouraged and interested in carrying on with our writing. Thanks again and stay tuned! ;)
Jun 8, 2021
6/8/21, 6:42 PM
Its cute and hilarious and also very sexy. Nice job here.
6/8/21, 6:33 PM
also just some notes! 1. i vote for option 2 or 3 for the story. and can i say - only praise and adoration for Dan cause basically i would have done everything he did this chapter... in fact, anyone know how i can sign up to be house bitch?
6/8/21, 5:45 PM
I count four. And can't wait for more!
6/8/21, 5:43 PM
awesome story work so far, I like both options 1 and 3 but I think I'd vote for 1 seems really unique.
6/8/21, 5:20 PM
I always look out for New Chapter of this story, Yet again you have not disappointed. Glad the Daniel has got to the point where he now knows he is the Sheriff. (the past 2 chapters have been worth the wait). And I really loved where his deputies chastised him as he was in the wrong uniform, Of course its right that the Sheriff wear a different type of uniform, and Yes its right that as he is a "Daddy" it's a leather one. Like the surprise at the end where, papa is Billy Bonkers
6/8/21, 2:10 PM
Every chapter I read makes me feel like I'm on more drugs. I mean I love the story but it is very much confusing at points

6/8/21, 5:09 PM
@salty_binch I'd love to hear more. For me, the story makes complete sense, but that's how my brain works. Is it a plot issue, or a descriptive one, or character motivation?
Apr 11, 2021
Anonymous
6/8/21, 5:00 PM
I'd love to see this be continued! 😍
6/8/21, 6:14 AM
That was brilliant.

6/8/21, 5:00 PM
@Lacerator thank you!
Jun 7, 2021
6/8/21, 10:11 AM
great story, I really liked the premise always been a desire of mine to be whisked away and turned into a clown. more clown stories please

6/8/21, 4:11 PM
same!@Defy
6/8/21, 3:03 PM
Kept my interest going beginning to end! From part 1 thru 3. You have a way of making it all seem so natural. Hope you keep it going ! More MORE MORE Continue!
Jun 4, 2021
6/8/21, 2:34 PM
this is genuinely incredible. i can't wait for more from you!
Mikeinlth
6/8/21, 1:18 PM
****
Anonymous
6/8/21, 1:13 PM
good work
6/8/21, 11:53 AM
Fun story. Interesting to see how he's making changes in VR that he's then using irl without dad knowing. Looking forward to the next one!
Jun 8, 2021
6/8/21, 11:20 AM
Great, fun little story. The more you go into it, the more you wanted to see what's next. More chapters?
6/8/21, 11:20 AM
I vote option 2
6/8/21, 11:02 AM
One of the best things i have read in this site, if not the best.
Anonymous
6/8/21, 10:18 AM
wish i was there and made to do all those things
6/8/21, 7:12 AM
i love hypnosis and use it as a subject a few times per week. Hypnosis and mind control stories are favorites of mine. i've want to understand so much better the levels of trance and how each feels and the effects the hypnotist might achieve at each level. The way you described it here with Cody and the Doc was very hot. Thanks so much! Looking forward to more!
6/8/21, 6:36 AM
This is so much fun and such a great concept! Your ideas for the perils that befall them are so creative. I wish we could see three every week, although I'm sure that would be a bit too complex for you to have to write. I'll cast my vote for option 1, just because I love me some himbo action.
6/8/21, 6:14 AM
I vote for option 2.
Jun 7, 2021
Oddballs
6/8/21, 2:03 AM
A bit rough around the edges writing skill-wise, but highly refreshing from the same old solid suck-fuck and cum fountain stuff we see around these parts. Creative and different. Keep going, sir. We need more new takes and tastes like yours.
6/8/21, 1:56 AM
I enjoyed it. Sure the concept is a little confusing, but I'm sure for dudes who like pipes and the concept of human fleshlights this is great, just not my cup of tea.
Jun 7, 2021
Anonymous
6/7/21, 10:09 PM
I've been waiting for coulrophilia to make its way onto the site. More clown stories please!

6/8/21, 1:49 AM
I totally will!
Anonymous
6/8/21, 1:06 AM
Amazing story