Recent Comments

4/23/24, 7:50 AM
Seriously this story is fantastic. Idk if we’re going to keep following Ian but that would be SO satisfying given the ending. Overall though, AMAZING and looking forward to more of anything.

4/24/24, 8:04 PM
@[Sprkl](/user/show/10003797) Thank you! I've fleshed out this concept as much as I can, but there'll be more concepts to come. What did you like best with this one?

4/24/24, 8:13 PM
@[Cat of Nine Tales](/user/show/10047490) I like the creeping feeling of embarrassment/humiliation and how it’s all wrapped in an overall pleasant exterior. Nothing is really malicious and it’s oh so satisfying to watch the main character get in way over their head, lol. The way Ian feels as if everyone is staring at him is fantastic. Also love how the change isn’t permanent but it lasts a pretty significant amount of time- and is essentially indistinguishable from actual male pattern baldness throughout that time frame.

Hank
4/25/24, 5:03 PM
@[Cat of Nine Tales](/user/show/10047490) This story still has a lot of meat left in it. It could definitely use a sequel where Ian goes to the wedding, and he is forced to choose between keeping his mpb secret under the toupee, or taking it off and begging known as male pattern bald to his entire family

4/25/24, 10:16 PM
@[Sprkl](/user/show/10003797) Ah yeah, Ian could have stopped at any point, but he didn't for reasons even he doesn't understand. Once it's done it's done, though, and now he'll have to live with it for a good while, and hope his secret isn't revealed.

4/25/24, 10:20 PM
@Hank Which do you prefer?
4/25/24, 9:50 PM
Love this story and so happy to see it continued!
Apr 24, 2024
4/24/24, 12:10 PM
I thought the scenes describing the growth of the drone collective were extremely hot, and I loved how we saw Antonio undergoing a very slow conversion, as it took time for more nanobots to replicate in his body. On the other hand, Pete's response to all of this was so passive and chill, it frequently made me laugh. The story would have made more sense to me--and been even hotter--if we got some indications that Pete had also been mentally affected by the cyborg implant, but was just oblivious about it.

Anonymous
4/24/24, 1:15 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) thanks for the feedback and I can see what you mean... this was my 3rd rewrite so the story has evolved a lot from the initial version and I can see it could use more... details. Let me see what I can edit in to add more to incorporate some additional ideas!

4/25/24, 8:44 PM
@Anonymous I thought about that too but I just assumed that the issue was that Peter was not genre savvy. (Either that or he's dumb.) I mean when the third guy showed up if it were me I would have at least kind of leaned forward and went, dude if you don't leave right now you're going to get turned into a drone though if you're into that... Which has you explicitly stated (good job there) he was. It did add a very slightly comical vibe to it but I don't think that's a problem. It's basically a drone threesome romance.
4/25/24, 8:36 PM
A great start! I look forward to more fun!
4/25/24, 8:25 PM
Interesting start. The move to the Doc pov is fun. Looking forward to the result of Harry being a subby needy bottom.
4/25/24, 8:16 PM
Sexy story! Love the frat takeover.
4/25/24, 7:46 PM
Feels a bit rushed, but very hot!!!!
4/25/24, 7:46 PM
I love such stories. I don't know why but they turn me on. Keep on writing! The wishes are great.
4/25/24, 7:42 PM
Re-read everything to be sure I did not forget anything, man the whole story is so hot!!! So many new men to turn into depraved slaves, so many possibilities, but Christmas is not over yet!
Art
4/25/24, 4:57 PM
Isn't it time you added more to this fun story? Thanks

4/25/24, 6:50 PM
@[Art](/user/show/1014223) Hey Art, glad you like the story. I figured I owed you a response. I have chapters 2 and 3 written, but hit hard writer's block in chapter 4. I wasn't going to post anymore until I figured out my way past the writer's block. I know what needs to happen in chapter 4 (I have up to chapter 10 outlined), but I just keep hitting a wall on a certain scene. Maybe I should just go ahead and post Chapters 2 and 3?
4/25/24, 5:37 PM
Hot and sexy and fun and awesome. What a great start. So hot! Love it! The wishes here are great!
Elm
4/25/24, 5:23 PM
Wow! Just WOW! I loved every second of reading it! It's just dark enough to be enjoyable, and just filled with lovely details. Making Eddie turn his own father was just *chef's kiss* and I like the fact he was made into a gorilla of a man. I kinda wanted the same thing to happen to Hank haha. I just loved the mental image of him always having his belly peeking out of his dress shirt! I just can't help but love overtly detailed stories, please don't ever stop writing them.
4/22/24, 12:23 AM
A sexy version from the horror of the deep

4/22/24, 11:48 PM
@[Dream maker](/user/show/908635) Yeah. Wet, salty and dark with tentacles. Cthulhu is sexy(!?)

Anonymous
4/25/24, 4:10 PM
@[Tofu83](/user/show/87624) yes he is indeed
4/25/24, 2:54 AM
Really looking forward to what happens next with Boots's newest guest!

4/25/24, 11:13 AM
@[NeedControlling](/user/show/1223696) Thank you!! ❤️
4/25/24, 8:16 AM
A fun little story. I can't wait to see what kind of trouble they can get into.
Hotttt
4/25/24, 6:50 AM
This is story is awesome. So long since I read such a wonderful hero downfall story.
4/25/24, 3:04 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Great work dude and me and my cock can hardly wait for your next one. Thanks
4/25/24, 3:00 AM
Hot.
4/25/24, 2:25 AM
I wish there was more to this.
4/25/24, 1:27 AM
Intriguing end to the chapter... and j am quite curious about Ced's surprise video!
4/25/24, 12:28 AM
gut geschrieben.......tolle Idee.........bin schon gespannt auf die Fortsetzung
Apr 24, 2024
Anonymous
4/24/24, 11:56 PM
Fantastic story! Loved it!
Ying
4/24/24, 9:27 PM
Suck cocks!
Ying
4/24/24, 9:26 PM
Suck more cocks!
4/23/24, 5:46 PM
Great story ! Nick has to find John and go back for few final days in his highschool ! 😈

4/23/24, 10:54 PM
@[John Kuir](/user/show/588303) Appreciate it! I love your stories aswell!!

4/24/24, 1:10 PM
@[Nick Rivers](/user/show/10014837) Thanks ! Feel free to contact me, maybe we could share ideas for future stories.

4/24/24, 8:24 PM
@[John Kuir](/user/show/588303) Your IG-link doesn't seem to be working! Send me a DM, would love to talk :)
4/23/24, 6:48 AM
Like the setup, cant want for more transformations

4/24/24, 8:06 PM
@[Tass](/user/show/1751376) Thanks!
4/23/24, 2:19 AM
Amazing story! Super excited to see where it goes from here!!

4/24/24, 8:01 PM
@[Hunter](/user/show/10035315) Thanks! This concept's done, but I'd be interested in hearing which parts worked best for you.
Apr 24, 2024
4/24/24, 7:21 PM
Wow. Amazingly well written and powerful too. Are their plans for more
4/24/24, 7:02 PM
I hope you get a chance to continue this soon! It's such a hot story!