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Anonymous
2/11/22, 2:06 AM
hot, sad he didn't make it but hot none the less.
2/11/22, 12:42 AM
welcome back! really interested to see where this goes!
2/11/22, 12:05 AM
It's Matt and Drake from the Truth Totem story from before!

2/11/22, 12:34 AM
I think you might be the first person to pick up on that, but yes!@JonDough
Jack
2/11/22, 12:25 AM
Please tell me you guys are going to do more with this series! It's fantastic and I really want to see if this relationship progresses.
Evan
2/11/22, 12:06 AM
Absolute masterpiece. I love this. I thought he was going to manage to mount. Dangling that hope for both the character and the reader. Awesome reversal and really felt his struggle to stay in control. And eventually lose. So, so, so happy you continued this. Brilliant! 11 out of 10. It's got those familiar elements we love but with a new, clever spin. Hot, original, and well-written. What's not to like. And blown away excited that another chapter is coming.
2/10/22, 10:39 PM
I am not much for spandex so I nearly didn't read this. But I am happy that I did. It is a great story.
2/10/22, 10:26 PM
You know, Nash still has an unfucked ass...
2/7/22, 3:47 AM
My friend, I am a three time Cancer patient. I'm not well now and I reflect on my past loves; my past aspirations and my unspoken desires and this echoes them all. I want a clear cut finish. I want completion and the end of the speculation. I am Yarifandeddy (an e.e. cummings reference), in my mind. Your story spoke to me so specifically that I'm moved emotionally. I wish, for your characters the closure I cant or wont have. In my mind, that makes you a very powerful writer.

2/7/22, 7:53 AM
@Stroppy Author First off, mate. Thank you for sharing. I'm quite a bit floored by your post and your situation kinda puts my own angst writing this, to task (there's been tossing, turning, self reflection, appeals for input, uncertainty, insomnia, stuck in the character's heads) but that all seems petty and insignificant compared to cancer survival and life reflection; **Thank you** for being on the journey with me. I promise neither of them are 'shallow inserts' but, I've been both—and have fallen for— 'the Yarif' and 'the Eddy' in my day, and neither position is more enviable or pleasant. In the end, I let their final conversation just be 'them'. I gave them the situation, begun with "hello asshole" and then let them go at it unencumbered by 'a story' or 'an author' any further. My thoughts on the ending and clarity; Yarif declares his love for Eddy goes beyond his stemmed-from-trauma people-prejudice. He declares*to* 'Eddy-the-Person' to *spite* Eddy-the-Person without being aware of the sudden bright irony and affirmation this hits home with. ("I'd love him even if he *was* a person., so there! you horrible *person*" etc.) He declares his 'love of the woods, to spite the trees'. I did have some guilty pleasure in the fact poor Eddy —probably on his last brain cell that 'could even'— was given some absolution *finally*, in such a "shave an a haircut; two bits" declaration. but, after all his graft, they got to somewhere they can build on truth rather then artifice, so long as the love is stronger than the pain and bruises it took to get there. I *know* they can get there now. I just don't know how long it's gonna take, so it seemed insincere to tie down a timeframe. I'm free to DM on our GSS discord or, on the GKS site forum if you want to have a more conversational exchange about it. Massive hugs and love. tDS

2/9/22, 3:59 AM
@The Dirty Spiders Unfortunately, I can't get into Discord. If Martin will allow, he can give you my email. I'll be going in to the hospital again this week so prolly no response for a week at least but you're more than welcome to it

2/10/22, 10:01 PM
@Stroppy Author Contact sent, and please mind yourself friend.
2/10/22, 5:46 AM
Great job! Chase's struggle for dominance is so well-written, and I love how you wrapped things up here.

2/10/22, 9:36 PM
@Hypnothrill ... oh Hypnothrill. You know this isn't the end. Just when I was wrapping up the story, this little devil appeared on my shoulder. Instead of a pitchfork, he prodded me with his "dickfork". (That's a rod with a three pronged cock at the end). Anyways, this little devil coaxed me into writing one last chapter. Now I got to write what this little devil put into my head. While it's work for me, it'll probably bring some enjoyment to the readers. So it's all worth it.
2/10/22, 8:55 PM
You got me leaking at work. Thanks for the story. Do you foresee a back story on how the alpha was transformed?

2/10/22, 9:32 PM
@TexMuscle ... Nope. I think sometimes some questions are best left unanswered. In this case, I don't think an origin story could satisfy. I would rather let readers imagine where this guy came from. I honestly have no idea what his story is. I just know he's searching for his equal. While he didn't find it in the sauna, he did acquire two pups that will bring him enjoyment and companionship.
2/10/22, 7:50 PM
Very hot, but i gotta admit, I was rooting for Chase. I always root for the underdog (see what I did there? Lol) What do you expect from a Mets fan?

2/10/22, 9:26 PM
@Beaner ... when I first conceived this story, I thought most readers would expect Chase to somehow triumph at the last moment. And I tried to really indicate that. But I thought how fun it would be if at the last second, just at his moment of triumph, that Chase would succumb to his carnal desires and be taken. I just thought that would catch the reader off guard. And don't get me wrong, these brothers are very happy pups and have no regrets in being the Alpha's pups. So I'm glad you were rooting for him. But still ... I hope you're happy on where he ended up. If anyone deserves any pity, it's the Alpha. He'll continue to search for a man that will be his equal ... a true partner.
2/10/22, 8:54 PM
Nash seems to be implying that Greyson is a well known dom/top. Makes me wonder if he dominated any of Dallas' friends or teammates prior. great chapter as always!
2/10/22, 8:46 PM
awesome story brah
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
2/10/22, 8:46 PM
So many men. So many moocows! If only this were real and we become moocows and could all give all the milk our Herdmaster wants and needs.
2/10/22, 8:05 PM
Oooh, I like this so far! I can't wait to see the rest of it!
2/10/22, 6:54 PM
cant wait for the next part
2/10/22, 6:51 PM
looking forward to how it develops. I think it was a strong choice to mostly skip the parts about maneuvering the parents and Dean so it focuses more on developing from that point
Anonymous
2/10/22, 6:21 PM
Cool story! looking forward to it!
Art
2/10/22, 5:54 PM
Love your writing and this story as much as the first time it was posted. Can't wait for something new!
2/10/22, 5:12 PM
Wow! I know I gave you comments for this story in private, but I regret that I didn't also post them here. I hunted them down, though: "Ahhh, Noam, what a tender and lovely story! So sensual and full of longing! I love how you matched the action to the poem and you manage to do so much vivid texturing of the world in do little time. Thank you so much for the lovely gift!" What I love about about this story really is the sense of yearning and the way that I can imagine exactly how this all went down. So bittersweet.

2/10/22, 5:32 PM
Thank yoouuu, @time.to.occur! It was fun to write this for you and discover a writing gear I didn't know I had.
2/10/22, 5:43 AM
wow this is a really hot well written story sequels when brett goes downstairs?

2/10/22, 5:26 PM
@sanfrandave maybe? if it's well received I might do it. I left intentionally the idea of a "group" of people waiting downstairs so...
2/10/22, 3:40 PM
I would love to see hala next

2/10/22, 4:55 PM
@darkblade2814 Can do! I think I know how it will go but I'm always open to suggestions.
2/10/22, 1:39 PM
Thanks Man, Great Chapter!

2/10/22, 4:51 PM
@hairyartist thanks for reading man!
2/10/22, 12:48 PM
With your writing I got to wonder how many pairs of balls you have subjugated, waiting on the next syllable from you, checking back multiple times a day to see it you've posted. Guessing it's more than a few. Your story telling is the equivalent of having the biggest cock in the room...

2/10/22, 4:51 PM
@Currious haha thanks I never thought of it like that
2/10/22, 3:07 PM
This is so sweet and heart-breaking, and I’m glad you didn’t shy away from the pain and reality of their historical situation. I really enjoyed the descriptive writing—this is the kind of thing I’m glad to see on Cupid!

2/10/22, 3:46 PM
Thank you, @Soren Fitz! I owe a lot to Emily Dickonson for inspiring this, and to time.to.occur for providing ED's work as a prompt to begin with. I'm really glad what I was trying to do came across for you.
Fry
2/10/22, 2:02 PM
Seriously hot chapter!! All I can say is please write more!!
Evan
2/10/22, 6:08 AM
A promising start. Eager for more and see where that bite ends up taking Max.

2/10/22, 1:16 PM
@Evan Thank you! Interesting things will be coming!
Anonymous
2/10/22, 12:08 PM
saying "mr. mayor" is a major boner killer.
Zai
2/10/22, 10:18 AM
Hot stuff, dude! You not only paid homage and respect to the original story, you've taken the premise and made it fresh and as Donnie did with Connor... made it your bitch. A+ and 5 gold stars earned for fine storytelling! The only thing missing was some Speedo action like there was in the original. I do so love me some stud Speedo action, lol. Thanks! 🔥🔥🔥🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🔥🔥🔥
2/10/22, 6:03 AM
Worth staying up for. Literally!

2/10/22, 6:49 AM
@THAT Steve haha :P