Recent Comments

10/3/22, 11:47 PM
Excellent short yet super hot story. No quarters given to the unsuspecting lad, and the promise of maybe more. As always, amazing job, Twan!

10/4/22, 10:35 AM
@Essex Thank you so much! I'll try not to disappoint!
10/4/22, 9:39 AM
can't wait for a more chapter. This whole story with incest, transformation, hypnosis, pecmilk, groupsex (and more) and the greek mythology concept with Eris and Eros fucking up reality, i just love everything! I hope you will continue some day, in the meantime i will fap to it every now and then. Good job! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts:
EntrancedGay92
10/4/22, 9:27 AM
You are becoming one of my favorite authors! Thanks for adding to this already great story. I love that Omar is active and encouraging with Trevor's kink; gives me hope that one day my own husband will be the same. Lol.
bbRyan
10/4/22, 1:56 AM
@Plymouth58 I see you mention kind of a back story on these thug guys. I think that's good, it can help explain how Kyle did screw up his life and why the horrible revenge is needed. Maybe once we understand that then the final destruction of Kyle can happen. While I'm completely for totally destroying him, the way he acted when his friend found him shows he's already in a pretty horrible state and likely irreversible now. I know some don't like this being a dark story, but it's nice to see once the good guy totally lose. If I had a suggestion for improvement I'd suggest trying to keep a good pace. This one was good, however some of the previous ones drug on a little too much. I did wonder if you'd make one of his friends take on the identity of a new Green Lantern who becomes a double agent helping their criminal friends while looking like a good guy. Anyway, keep up the great work! Please don't hold back on anything when it comes to destroying Kyle!

10/4/22, 9:05 AM
@bbRyan Hi! I'll try to take more care of the pacing, buddy, you made a fair criticism. I agree sometimes is a bit too much, I think chapter 12 needed an extra trimming. I take note of everything, thank you very much for your positive comments and your suggestions! :slightly_smiling_face:
Evan
10/4/22, 7:36 AM
Fantastic! I still love how you weave in some references to your other stories like the Iron Bulls and Zeus and his husband. Hot as always. Thank you for your writing.
10/4/22, 5:36 AM
I remember reading that story! I'd love to see where you take this.
10/4/22, 3:24 AM
This was GREAT. Perfect side story to the rest of the series. What a transformation!
Footy73
10/4/22, 2:08 AM
Hypnotised to serve a hot Cigar smoking Master hmmm!! Hot and horny story :yum:
Martin
10/3/22, 9:44 PM
Interesting start! Hot sex scene, I love oil on skin :)
10/3/22, 7:28 PM
This was really good. Great writing. I love breaking the fourth wall and addressing plot lines for Hero Vs Villans sagas. I WANT MORE but that's me. Would have loved to have read about Green and Black converting fellow classmates into minions. This was Great really enjoyed it Thank you for this.

10/3/22, 7:39 PM
@Redneck Cubby Really happy to hear you enjoyed this! It was great fun to explore.
10/3/22, 5:45 PM
Excited for more!
Anonymous
10/3/22, 5:08 PM
this is so good like i am so serious about that
Anonymous
10/3/22, 3:32 PM
Really good start, can't wait to see where you take it next!
10/3/22, 3:12 PM
Super inventive idea! Definitely looking forward to more!
Anonymous
10/3/22, 1:49 PM
Another banger (no pun intended!)
10/3/22, 7:40 AM
I loved it! I only wish there had been a sixth ranger :grin:

10/3/22, 1:37 PM
@Norismo Glad you enjoyed it! Oh, and there's sure to be a sixth ranger out there somewhere! They're just late to the party. Maybe they lead the futile resistance before their inevitable defeat?
10/3/22, 8:13 AM
Big tiddies. :heart_eyes: Short and sweet, I'll echo everyone else and demand another chapter. Great stuff!

Anonymous
10/3/22, 8:17 AM
@Norismo

10/3/22, 11:38 AM
@Norismo So glad you liked it!
10/3/22, 7:16 AM
Excellent story
Evan
10/3/22, 5:04 AM
I did not expect that Phil would seek to use the machine on the boys rather than using it himself. Very cool little plot point. Especially now he knows the cost. Hot and brilliantly written as always. Always excited to get to see more from you.
10/3/22, 4:30 AM
Hoo, _scorchingly_ hot! It certainly kept me up the whole time, and it was fun seeing the subtle ways he was growing. It’s also interesting to see a sort of aggression coming over him—I should have been looking for snarls and growls, too late, but I wonder if there’s any effects of the Aubergines going on in terms of his sexual personality. Looking forward to more!
Anonymous
10/3/22, 2:30 AM
Strange to think of Hydra wearing their insignia so openly, but overall great story. Poor Thor. He really needs a chance to rest and relax, perhaps in Tahiti. It's a magical place.
10/3/22, 1:23 AM
Really hot story! Transformation descriptions were great!
Anonymous
10/3/22, 1:22 AM
Excellent series. I'd also love to see the alt ending!
Tbb
10/2/22, 8:54 PM
I hope Kyle is reduced to his mouth being used a urinal for his masters.

10/3/22, 1:00 AM
@Tbb After his first experience tasting all that that gang of thieves gave him, he is increasingly curious about giving it another try, especially if the drink comes out from mis masters. Just give him a little time and you'll see, buddy :wink:
Anonymous
10/3/22, 12:59 AM
I really enjoyed this, I've fapped so many times to it. Any update on part 2?
10/3/22, 12:55 AM
LOVE LOVE LOVE!!
10/2/22, 9:10 PM
Just to add my two cents, I think you've done a really good job. The sex scenes are hot, and the corruption is done slowly and believably, which adds to the hotness. In terms of plot progression, it's done incredibly well. Despite English not being your first language, I think you've written something of pretty high quality in English, which is also incredibly impressive. Yo he estudiado castellano por casi catorce años, y nunca podría escribir algo así en castellano jaja. The only thing is that, for me, I'd just rather read something else. Some of the kinks are major turn offs for me, and to be honest, I just hate T-Bone and Chuy as characters. Please don't misunderstand; they are very well-written characters! Their motivations and personalities are very clear and understandable. But it is because I understand them so well that I just cannot stand them. Their myopic view of the world just reminds me of people I know in real life (and if I'm honest, some of my own personal flaws lol) so it's just...grating for me personally to watch them get away with so much. But again, these aren't really criticisms; they're just my personal preferences. All of that said, the fact that I did read this far even with all the problems I have with it just goes to show that it's very well written! Despite my personal gripes with Tyron and Chuy, I do think that they're quite hot Daddy fantasies. Like I mentioned, some of the kinks aren't for me (like the humiliation or piss) but the transformation/corruption of Kyle is very hot, to the point where, again, I read this far just for that. Please keep writing!

10/3/22, 12:07 AM
@MCBrain Man, thank you very much for taking the time to write such a complete and nice comment, I really appreciate it. Your opinion of Chuy and T-Bone makes me very happy, and that they remind you of someone in real life, it's a great achievement for me. And yes, they are a couple of obtuse selfish jerks, I totally understand if you hate them as persons, but I'm glad you find them well written and that you're liking the corrupting elements on the story despite the not so pleasant kinks here and there. It means a lot to me to have your presence and support here despite that. It's a great relief that you find it well written! Precisely chapter 14 will show more of how and why the thugs are the way they are, and I would very much like to know your opinion on whether their back story makes sense to you on that when it is ready (by the way ¡tu español es muy bueno, amigo!)
10/2/22, 10:15 PM
I need to find this Maze
10/2/22, 9:59 PM
Great Work Jeep!!!
Anonymous
10/2/22, 9:20 PM
Mmmf! Would love to see more of Dr Daddy and Tommy! Maybe Tommy's father is in need of a dentist's appointment?