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10/26/22, 10:52 AM
I wish this would be continued!
Jonanator
10/26/22, 10:11 AM
Very hot
Evan
10/26/22, 9:29 AM
Whoa. I did NOT see that coming. Pregnant Sam. What a twist! The Royal Bitch worries me. It sounded like she was about to orchestrate a tragedy rather than settle for hyperbole of circumstances. I hope she's stopped. I really love this series and the warmth and wholesomeness in the family of boys and their daddies. Even hot and sexy times it's still wholesome to me. Love your work. Can't wait for another part.
10/26/22, 8:14 AM
cant wait for the next one
10/26/22, 6:25 AM
I appreciate it highly to write in a language that is not the mother language - and I know what work it is. Cops, leather and boots are a fetish of mine, so I am triggered - and curious where it will lead to....
10/26/22, 4:34 AM
Squuuuueeeeeeeeeeeee omg I love them
10/26/22, 2:26 AM
Very hot wanting even more
10/26/22, 12:54 AM
creative, saved from a miserable loveless marriage. wish I was brainwashed sometimes, to just be obey. enjoyed immensely
10/25/22, 11:28 PM
goddamn what a story!!!
10/25/22, 10:10 PM
Damn that was hot!
Anonymous
10/25/22, 9:16 PM
Absolutely loved this story! Binged through it all in one day and really enjoyed it. This is not where I thought the story would go at first, but I really enjoyed it nonetheless. You have a real talent for writing and I hope your future stories go in even more detail, because those were some of my favorite parts!
10/25/22, 8:55 PM
Well written story and a horny idea.... thanks mate....it wouldn't need to be made of rubber though, but its ok ;-)
10/25/22, 8:08 PM
Wes and Zeb dynamic is so fucking cute, i love it
Doug
8/5/21, 9:25 AM
such a shame that this never continued

10/25/22, 8:00 PM
yes absolutely a shame. One of the most erotic series on this sitr@[Doug Kent](/user/show/267091)
10/24/22, 4:18 PM
Chapter 3 is pending approval. You should be able to access it soon.

Anonymous
10/25/22, 3:09 PM
@[GhostwriterDE](/user/show/275977) I LOVE THIS SERIES. one small thing I noticed is that when Martin enters the frat house you say nick is with karl I think you mean t to type Rick
Sebastián Apollo
10/24/22, 8:29 PM
What a beautiful thing to witness when a boy realizes his true destiny and purpose. Insanely hot and maintained it's consistency throughout, I know I had a pervy smile on my face the entire time reading it. Good work!

10/25/22, 3:06 PM
@[Sebastián Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Gracias Sebastian! Sometimes a boy needs a hypnotic nudge in the right direction to find his full potential. :wink:
10/25/22, 2:56 PM
This is seriously good
10/25/22, 1:14 PM
Fukkin awesome chapter cheers
10/25/22, 9:49 AM
The wait for the next chapter is killing me. I simply must know what happens next!
EntrancedGay92
10/25/22, 9:48 AM
Nice job. As a fan of the Ghost Clown from Scooby Doo, this ticked all the right boxes. And what's not to love about a dad being brainwashed into a sleeper agent?!
10/25/22, 9:13 AM
I loved this way more than I thought I would. The cover,the background,everything! This could be the start of a great series if you plan on continuing this,I could see all kinds of men ending up like this
10/25/22, 7:37 AM
This was suuuper hot! Really hope you follow up with more chapters with more sexy guys. Would love to see some even worse humiliations for them too!
10/25/22, 6:26 AM
Ooh, I like this setup already. Excited for the rest!
10/25/22, 4:43 AM
Damn can't wait for part 3!!
10/24/22, 5:38 PM
Today, I learned the word "snapback." The more you know! Thanks to your filling this gap in my knowledge (whilst Thomas filled the gap in Ben's greedy throat), I will never again see a snapback without thinking about this story. There's a possibility this new quirk I've developed will make the second half of my life awkward in many different ways, but I can't say I'm sorry about it.

10/25/22, 3:52 AM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) Oh my! I'm glad to have enriched your vocabulary — though, I hope this new quirk of yours doesn't make things _too_ awkward... Hmm, maybe avoid crowded baseball games for now.
Evan
10/24/22, 10:36 AM
A slow burn and a hot story. Clever use of powers too. I feel a bit bad for Thomas but it's so nice the whole campus wants to be his fantasy and his cumslut for a night now.

10/25/22, 3:32 AM
@[Evan](/user/show/133763) Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed reading it! And haha, Thomas would definitely agree that it is _very_ nice, and quite clever of him, too...
10/24/22, 10:08 AM
This was so hot! I didn't know I had a thing for twinks with big arms until this!

10/25/22, 3:25 AM
@[Catcat](/user/show/620382) Ha! And I didn't know I had a thing for buff-armed twinks until I wrote this! 😁 So that makes two of us...
10/24/22, 4:50 AM
A really great, super hot story, and perfectly executed. So many intensely hot moments, and the changes were gradual yet abrupt. A truly long burn with an event hotter pay off. Kudos!

10/25/22, 3:24 AM
@[Essex](/user/show/909447) Gosh, thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it!
10/25/22, 2:37 AM
I already love this! The interesting characters, the physical descriptions (Zeb sounds like such a cutie--short, muscular, and blond!), and the casual description of homoromantic activity WITHOUT going into the "I'm not gay" denial immediately; maybe Wes is gay, and maybe he's bi, but it's not a case of denial--he genuinely doesn't seem to know, and it's awesome that we're seeing that dynamic appear more in fiction (dear SC Walker has been doing that expertly). Judging by the tags, we're in for some odd and sexy surprises. What an incredible beginning! :D