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6/24/20, 1:36 AM
Would love more chapters!
6/24/20, 1:36 AM
it would be amazingly hot if the chief will be taken down to be even lower than officer Humpme. Maybe from station chief to station maid !
6/24/20, 1:17 AM
naughty and psychological Is he being seduced or him others. I can feel and smell the scene. an erotic experience wish more
6/24/20, 12:49 AM
Two of my favourite writers on this site made a story together? Incredible, so excited to read it!
6/24/20, 12:20 AM
Incredibly hot - always happy to see new stories from Edlam
6/23/20, 11:51 PM
Hey, betaman! Just wanted to say I enjoyed this new branch of Ass Assassin Round 1! It should be interesting to see Kyle, Rick and Hayden (well, Hayden not so much) get a new lease of life in your branch. I appreciate the effort you've put in to keep the character descriptions consistent - I know how long this stuff can take to do right! Looking forward to how this continues.
Steve
6/23/20, 11:46 PM
Can't wait for. Any ideas when the next chapter is out?
EJG
6/23/20, 11:26 PM
Hot. Suppose this is the end though? Makes me want more
Anonymous
6/23/20, 11:11 PM
I'll admit I was a bit confused as to what was going on here. Was the business man Jerod triggered in his growth by the mysterious pen? If that's the case, how did it happen that Jerod seemed to have no idea what the pen would do? It seems like the pen just mysteriously appeared as two guys met randomly on a train, and things unfolded from there. It was an intriguing set up, rather than a complete story. The growth descriptions were intriguing and done well. I enjoyed the growth
6/23/20, 10:24 PM
Not gonna lie, I went crazy when I saw Edlam's name when I was checking the latest story posts. So glad that you updated! And as usual, you didn't disappoint. I only got halfway through so far, but I'm really liking Rick!
Anonymous
6/23/20, 10:13 PM
add chastity!
6/23/20, 10:04 PM
That was a lot of fun.
6/23/20, 9:55 PM
Why did you switch from past to present tense midway through?
6/23/20, 9:47 PM
Really reminiscent of my first time with a live tist. He had me tightly bound to his bed frame in my hockey uniform, held his skate shoe to my face (I always get pretty focused on sweat, doesn't mean anything), said some trigger I don't remember now (it's been years!) and I roared and broke his bed apart getting loose. But of course I was just playing along the whole time. No one ever told me how rare it is to actually "feel like you're in a trance" until you get a lot of practice going under.
6/23/20, 9:19 PM
great story!!
6/23/20, 8:27 PM
Oooh nice! Very very nice. What an interesting look at religion. Hehe Love the rimming. :) Well really I loved it all.
6/23/20, 8:15 PM
loved it
6/23/20, 8:00 PM
this one was awesome! really creative to see that scenario from the subject's perspective. LOVED it
Anonymous
6/23/20, 7:45 PM
Bro this is so good
6/23/20, 7:27 PM
loved it back then,love it still. when it comes to cop stories,this one is far up the top
6/23/20, 7:27 PM
Really nicely done all around. I love how deeply we get into his head as he's experiencing everything.
Plymouth58
6/23/20, 6:49 PM
I don't know how you make it, but every chapter hit the bull's eye of my fantasies of humiliation and dominion, both in the side of Officer Humpme and Punk Kid. I never heard the words "coochie" nor "meter maid", but I love how debasing they sound applied to a former good manly cop. Is good to see how mind fucked Humpme already is and how low he would be in the ending. Will be great to see chief Angelo in action! I don't want to bore you mentioning all the things I like and how much I enjoy the story (practically everything!), but a detail that I like is that you're not explaining the source of Punk Kid's powers. Some things don't need to be explained, and I like it that way.
6/23/20, 6:46 PM
Best chapter yet!! Just WOW!!
6/23/20, 6:45 PM
OKAY! that did take a different turn from what I expected,but it's SO HOT. I really wanna see how it continues. (and who's at the door)
6/23/20, 5:55 PM
another beautiful chapter. I love it when the unaware cops really enjoy what they are made to do. and YES,the chief is coming. I can hardly contain myself
6/23/20, 5:46 PM
I wonder what will be the chief's new name?
Anonymous
6/23/20, 5:42 PM
it's great
6/23/20, 4:44 PM
Very hot, would love to see more dumbing stuff
6/23/20, 4:32 PM
Literally my first story of yours that I'd read, Robin. An absolute classic that had me falling in love with your style. Definitely one that inspired me to start writing!