Recent Comments

corinthian
4/14/20, 5:08 PM
Very cleverly written and a turn-on too! Thank you.
4/14/20, 4:50 PM
Another great chapter! I'm in awe of the way you've managed to write a mind control story that's so hot and yet so romantic at the same time.
Apr 13, 2020
4/14/20, 4:18 PM
Thanks for the encouraging comments everyone. Dont worry, Red Lightning and the other's perspective will be explored on the next chapter. As for the person above, I'm actually thinking of focusing on Wolfman and The Quaker next. It's goin to be a doozy so stay tuned!
Feb 24, 2020
captainjack114
4/14/20, 3:01 PM
Amazing!Just Amazing!
Apr 13, 2020
4/14/20, 2:20 PM
oof,I LOVE this kind of story. really well done. hope to read more of it soon
Anonymous
4/14/20, 1:59 PM
Fun! Loads of potential. I'm wondering how many readers have said "Eligorn pelagor ..." and their name
Bimarguycnj
4/14/20, 11:40 AM
and the plot thickens lol , cant wait ti read how it ends
LongtimeFan
4/14/20, 10:29 AM
Amazing story! Absolutely fascinating, and I loved the ending. :) Finally a mind-controller with empathy! :p
4/14/20, 10:15 AM
Please make a part 2
Anonymous
4/14/20, 10:08 AM
Wow. Hope there's a part 2