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Aug 10, 2020
BearBoi
8/14/20, 1:40 AM
nice to see some recipricol tf here, with some men becoming small subby fags and some being big manly doms.
8/13/20, 11:53 PM
I echo the first comment. It would have been nice to know something about host orange and host green. That said, let's move on. What a great mental ride. It was fast paced and exciting, perfect for the tempo of the take over. A very fun read. And if I ever had to imagine orange tentacles coming from something, I would have guessed vag. Yet there it was getting me entranced and excited.
8/13/20, 10:44 PM
holy crap, great story. im glad you continued this.
tfsideblog
8/13/20, 10:32 PM
Love blueberry stories! Great work.
8/13/20, 10:28 PM
I love stories that feature reality bending suggestions. I'm sitting on easily 30+ unfinished stories that feature this but have a hard time finishing any of them. Some day I'll either need to finish at least one or find someone willing to collaborate with me to get some done. If you or anyone else is interested in that let me know
8/13/20, 9:37 PM
I like this -- it tells a complete story but gives a nice set-up for sequels. Nice job!
8/13/20, 8:18 PM
Aw yas, das good shyte.
EJG
8/13/20, 7:37 PM
I am so far in 'cum',that sin shall pluck on sin, tear falling pity,dwells not in this eye.. my apologies to Shakespeare
8/13/20, 4:26 PM
Perhaps, Perhaps, Perhaps...
8/13/20, 4:03 PM
I like a lot of the imagery where you're describing the abandoned Manchester and Jafar's army of muscle zombies. I just feel like you skipped a few good story beats by skipping ahead to the moment where Marcus is the only freewilled man left. To me, it would be hotter if he was part of a small band of resisters who were getting picked off one by one as they succumbed to Jafar's power. But that's just my preference; this is still a very hot story, and I'm excited to see where it goes next!