Recent Comments

9/2/20, 5:03 PM
I'm very happy to see you decided to go ahead with this one. I thought we were going to see Cubby putting some resistance, but it was nice to see him so happy with his role. Burro is still my favourite. Would be fun to see a spin-off focused on Burro or Benji, interacting with guys from their former life.
9/2/20, 4:58 PM
OMG! I'm dying to know what happens next!
Jockmorphr
9/2/20, 3:00 PM
This story was a really fun, sexy romp and I loved it. Thanks for sharing it with us. I thought the nature of the curse was original and I really enjoyed the way Trent's intelligence came and went. The descriptions of that were great. It's also been far too long since I read a magical mental tf story. so it was very welcome. And I loved Barry. I always enjoy stories where the loyal friend gets caught up in the action of the story. Also, I have a soft spot for big, muscular college jocks. I especially loved when Zonnor got Barry high on oxytocin. I'd been hoping somehow Barry would get affected by Trent's curse, or get caught in the crossfires of a spell, and "dopey Barry" was everything I'd hoped for.
Anonymous
9/2/20, 2:59 PM
what a wonderful read!!! thank you
9/2/20, 2:13 PM
really hot
9/2/20, 1:36 PM
You had me hard & leaking the whole time. Great storyline but I wanted the action to last longer. Also, need to find out what happened with the other guys...more chapters?
Deltayankee
9/2/20, 1:11 PM
If you liked this story, give Cris Kane's *Mariposa* stories a look-see.
9/2/20, 10:49 AM
This is BEAUTIFUL. My heart aches for Tim. What will happen?
9/2/20, 9:54 AM
Great start! Cant wait to read the next part. Thanks!
Oct 13, 2005
Deltayankee
9/2/20, 9:37 AM
Umm ... could use some editing.