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FantasyWithKinks
2/5/21, 6:22 PM
Wow, this is a fantastic start! You managed to hit on the point right between "consensual tf" and "predictable tf" that manages to stay sexy while removing the more common non-consensual elements. I'm excited to see where this goes!
Anonymous
2/5/21, 3:07 PM
to be continued ? Who is Tom ? Also you really never explained the bully, zane & what he did to you. You can make a series of this. more details the better ! It paints a better picture ! Don't forget details of the settings around you. For Example: Like it was a bright sunny morning, the red Cardinals were chirping happily. The sky was a beautiful Alaskan blue with a few white cottony clouds. Good luck ! looking forward to reading more of your "work". Remember it's not work if you are enjoying it. So go ahead & Enjoy Life!
2/5/21, 2:24 PM
love it!
Anonymous
2/5/21, 12:18 PM
I loved this. Please make more
Mar 19, 2013
Scott
2/5/21, 10:27 AM
shame more of this story never cane along. its a hot theme. we done.
2/5/21, 9:57 AM
Very good thanks - and a great ending!
2/5/21, 7:34 AM
This was difficult to read, it kept changing perspectives without warning, and I gave up halfway through. I became too confused as to which was Danny-turned-into-Greg and which was Greg-turned-into-Danny. This seems like a decent first draft, the body-swap idea is fascinating, but it definitely needs some thorough editing.
Kent
2/5/21, 7:16 AM
more pleaseeee
Dom
2/5/21, 5:53 AM
Damn this is hot, your writing really captures all the things you wanna hear
2/5/21, 4:58 AM
Thanks. I wasn't really sure how this one would turn out but I liked the idea of being in someones head as they were on the journey. The first section actually came to me while I was half alseep so seemed right to start there.