Recent Comments

8/27/21, 7:06 AM
Mais um bom capitulo, essa historia ta progredindo bem. Não consigo deixar de achar esse plot dos adultos manipulando os dois teens inocentes como se fosse um experimento meio esquisito, porem me divirto horrores lendo. Embora pessoalmente não curta muito esse estilo onde um mesmo acontecimento é contado sob povs diferentes, acho que funciona bem nessa historia. No aguardo do proximo capitulo :D

8/27/21, 7:25 AM
@SrArMais Valeu por ler e deixar um comentario ;) Entao, eles nao sao teens inocentes. Principalmente o Jax. Eu vou explicar isso mais pra frente e tem a ver com o segredo que o Ronnie sabe que o Jax nao quer que os outros saibam. Mas nao, eles nao sao menores. Eu deveria deixar isso mais claro, neh. Vou fazer isso. E eu concordo plenamente contigo em relacao a uma historia contada sob dois povs diferentes. Geralmente eu nao leio o segundo POV. O problema eh que na maioria das historias, se vc nao ler um pov vc perde um pedaco da historia. Aqui eu conto tudo sob os dois POVs entao mesmo que vc queira pular o POV de um ou de outro, vc ainda entende a historia toda, mas apenas de um lado. E, honestamente, eh terrivelmente dificil escrever uma historia assim. As vezes me arrependo muuuito por ter decidido fazer isso haha mas enfim, comecei assim agora termino assim. Tb pq queria tentar algo diferente assim como ainda quero escrever algo atraves de uma terceira pessoa. Fico feliz que ainda assim esteja lendo. Esses personagens ai estao todos relacionados. A Sabrina esta em Cumnoisseur e Ronnie e Jax vao aparecer em FS2BC eventualmente ;)
8/27/21, 6:52 AM
great to see sm own his gay
ALittleBaby
8/27/21, 6:11 AM
very cute story
8/27/21, 5:57 AM
I wish you continued this story! I miss it and would love to see what happens next!
BearBoi
8/27/21, 5:44 AM
the slowly increasing masculinity-appreciation is damn nice
Anonymous
8/24/21, 2:32 PM
my favorite writer is back! cant wait to read this

8/27/21, 5:03 AM
@ haha I'm glad to know I'm your favorite writer. Hope you've enjoyed this one. Please, keep reading, commenting and rating so I feel motivated to keep writing ;)
8/24/21, 6:18 PM
Very hot, please continue

8/27/21, 5:02 AM
@JockPupTraxxx Thank you!! I will ;)
8/25/21, 12:12 AM
Love this story, wish it will be updated sooner.

8/27/21, 5:01 AM
@NickyW me too haha sorry for making you wait. It's just work and everything together. These stories take me a while to finish coz they are long. But I'm always trying to improve. Thanks for the support ;)
Aussiebtm97
8/25/21, 3:43 AM
perfection as usual!

8/27/21, 5:00 AM
@Aussiebtm97 Thank you!!! I'm in Melbourne btw ;)
8/25/21, 5:41 AM
The beauty of a slow-burn story is that it smolders so much hotter! The previous chapters were edging me so hard, the release in this chapter was incredible. And there's still so much further these two characters can go--or fall, depending on your perspective. I love this story so much! :D

8/27/21, 5:00 AM
@WolvenPuppy I read your message like three times hehe I'm so glad you enjoyed this and that you can see the beauty of a slow-burn story. It's not everyone's cup of tea but for those who enjoy it I think it means so much. Knowing the characters and empathizing. My idea is always to make it as real as possible so you guys can feel like you are there feeling that. It's hard to write a story with both perspectives and go on the same scenes from different sides but the result is amazing and I'm very happy you like it :D Thank you!