Recent Comments

9/18/22, 5:35 AM
This is really shaping up to be one of the more unique and interesting stories I've come across. I'm loving the slow-burn pacing and the more subtle take on military conditioning rather than the typical overt brainwashing or swinging watch hypnosis. I also like that you've continued the theme of dealing with personal shame and self-acceptance from some of your earlier works. I'm not sure how this story is going to end for Trevor but I'm hoping we'll get to see Omar play a part in it somehow and they both get a happy ending along with Liam.
JockHunter
9/18/22, 4:37 AM
Great take-away from Farras's original work. Brody is now pure queer and his father must become as the son is now. Let the the trainer, than the coach and lastly the reverend fucked Hank. I especially think the Asian and African cocks need to own Hank's tight and white bubblebutt. After all, everyone must realize that the black daddy next door has lusted after Hank's white man holes for years. Yearning to sink his midnight shaft up his sexy neighbor studs pink orifices for a long time.
9/16/22, 1:18 PM
I’ve always wanted to try hypnosis. I find it extremely erotic having someone take control of my mind. Wish I could find someone near me to do just that.

9/18/22, 1:43 AM
@Bootman I hear ya. I’ve always wanted to be a hypnotized robot, but hypnosis doesn’t really work on me no matter what I try. I’ve never been able to relax, ever, so I don’t know what ‘relaxing’ feels like. Even when I’ve had downtime and just laying there my mind is going a million miles an hour. I’ve even had an in person hypnotist try. I have an extremely vivid imagination (that seems to semi-autonomous, giving me images when I don’t want them) and can follow every single direction perfectly except for “relax.”
9/8/22, 5:47 AM
Haha I read this out loud to my boyfriend while he sucked and jerked me. It's a great story and your writing style is also great. It was easier to read out than another one I tried. Thanks :)

9/18/22, 1:11 AM
@Dreadmage23 thank you for the review! I'm glad you and your boyfriend could enjoy it together!
9/18/22, 12:49 AM
I have to say that I am a bit afraid for Liam. Thinking that he loses himself, his love and his life to this kink and will become a military "drone" and inlist kind of gives me shivers... and a boner. Hope it doesn't turn to dark with him and he stays happy.
9/17/22, 8:27 PM
I think we know you're safe word as I think you used pineapple as a safe word in Mind Control Palace Preppy story

9/18/22, 12:04 AM
@nerdysuitedbaby My motto has always been "Write what you know" :rofl:
9/5/22, 9:30 AM
Wakey wakey I hope this doesn't become another incomplete story series Please continue the story!

Tyrol
9/12/22, 10:25 PM
@Anima I really want to keep going but I just started a new job so that takes up most of my time, I've got a new boyfriend, and I've also been writing some non-porn in the little time I allocate for writing. So while I hope I can continue because I really enjoyed writing I'm not sure when that will be 😭

9/17/22, 11:57 PM
@Tyrol Oookkkaaaayy lol I guess I can wait a while longer.
bucke
9/17/22, 10:59 PM
I'm loving this so far. Really excited to see how this develops!
9/17/22, 1:44 AM
I'm loving the libido and sensitivity increases and how he reacts to those! Making him play with his newly sensitive nipples was really good. I would add to that making his whole package a size where he thinks it's too big, so when he does get hard and horny he's unable to hide it and it further humiliates and embarrasses him when he does leave the apartment, especially if the leakage were increased along with it!

9/17/22, 8:27 PM
@djinnie love that idea, especially the precum leakage. Just got to make sure he's wearing pants that show wet spots really well. Thanks

9/17/22, 10:04 PM
@Cargo Cub My thought with the size increase was to have him suck himself off and be unable to keep up with the production so he still makes a mess no matter what he does. I'll be looking forward to your next chapter with whatever you choose! We're already blueballing for your next chapter :D Keep it up!
9/17/22, 9:45 PM
Gracias!