Recent Comments

12/21/25, 2:59 AM
Excellent story and erotic plot! I like how the dad is so shocked the hypnosis is actually working. I'm sure we would all like a continuing or ending to this hot story!
12/20/25, 12:40 PM
Wow! An amazingly well written story. Great descriptions. I wish I was Alex!

12/20/25, 2:06 PM
@[Yorksbiker08](/user/show/1049586) Aren't we all Alex? Oh no we are not coders

Anonymous
12/21/25, 2:12 AM
@[Rubberizer92](/user/show/1146099)
12/19/25, 8:36 PM
Waiting cock in had for the next chapter! Hayden is such a lucky son.

12/21/25, 2:00 AM
@[Gcub4](/user/show/10000534) He has a Daddy who cares about him, that’s for sure!
BPB
12/20/25, 12:34 AM
Would love a spin-off about Cow-slut / how he became that way or just muscle cow sub in general, your descriptions of him are so hot. Also is it bad that I'm kinda hoping Markus becomes a son too...

12/21/25, 1:59 AM
@[BPB](/user/show/911643) Good to know!! I’ll def keep that in mind for a potential future project. The backstory I had in my head is that he was a farm boy who moved to the big city to achieve his dreams, but just couldn’t handle the hustle and bustle, so he ended up falling into the church. As for Markus, I guess you’ll just have to wait and see! ;)
Freyr58
12/20/25, 10:46 PM
I really love this story as it hits most of my buttons for what is hot and gets me aroused and shoot a good load. The only thing missing would be description and use bare feet and soles during the sex scenes. I hope the author would consider writing some pre-quels to this story and perhaps a follow up to finding the right man for himself.
12/20/25, 7:28 PM
Another great chapter, Soren! I'm actually picking up some advice here for my own writing - as I'm actually beginning to realize how actually extrapolating and exploring someone's internal mental state is just as hot as the actual sex acts themselves. Plus, the whole overarching "dumb himbo/frat boy energy" is just a turn-on all around. Feeling for Hunter right now, who I'm seeing is kind of trapped between two worlds and trying to discover what he wants. Rooting for him and Chase. Good work!

12/20/25, 10:30 PM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Man, thank you! I love using character dynamics to intensify the sex and vice versatility, I feel like this story is isn’t of my better attempts at it. Glad you dig the frat boy energy too. It’s great to hear that Hunter’s arc is working. I def want it to feel like he’s very torn—the sex he wants and the sex he feels like he can’t have, to be a sub but not a slut, the only question is where he ends up.
12/19/25, 11:32 AM
Corin! What the hell did you and ITO-K created here? At the beginning I thought, that Haru wil fuck with his long time best buddy, but the plot went much better. :innocent: I can imagine that both of you had much fun while writing and creating this. And I guess there is weired stuff something going on with the drone... Looking forward to the next chapters.

12/20/25, 8:02 PM
@[Pup Vince](/user/show/10023016) Thank you! We had and still have *so much* fun. Having someone who shares your lewd kinks and fantasies and with whom you can ping-pong ideas and story parts is an amazing experience. I hope you like ITO-K's first chapter which is now online, too!

12/20/25, 9:40 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) I feel you, the idea of co-writing ist a huge thing. Sometimes a plot ist getting it's owned dynamic or live.
12/20/25, 9:26 PM
Please more.
12/18/25, 11:46 AM
This is so sweet, but also so sad. Y’all did a great job writing the emotions. I can’t wait for the next chapter to see how things develop. What’s next for our named characters? How many end up being inducted into the insidious System? And why _do_ drones have assholes???

12/20/25, 7:59 PM
@[Perpetually Erect](/user/show/10018717) I love to write emotional scenes. The first chapter is introductory, to introduce the characters and the setting. The System is definitely insidious and manipulative. But at least the men converted to drones enjoy their existence. That's quite important to me - it makes it much easier to fantasize yourself in their role ;) As for why drones (at least some of them...) have assholes... Well, they need to be feeded. And there are other purposes as well, as you should know by now ;)
Anon
12/20/25, 5:29 PM
@[Bovine Retribution](/user/show/10032242) Scared/aroused seems to be the best way to describe Hayden at this point indeed. Looking back at the last few chapters, we saw jason warned for wanting a son possssively rather than for the church's mission (which has some mustery still beyond the son-daddy dynamic- why make sons?). And if Markus could be a daddy- and if he became one...how would he change? Would that be good for Hayden? Are daddies made by being turned by the clergymen/church father? The other daddies seem to care about their sons so they can gratify them- even molding them into their desired person (perhaps there are exceptions but who knows). There is an eerie sort of implication amidst the desire- even if the sons come to love it, and Hayden seems to notice that to a degree even as he loves Jason.