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6/29/23, 9:31 AM
I'm really enjoying this, looking forward to wherever you're taking us.

6/29/23, 10:11 AM
@[Moo68au](/user/show/919772) Thank you! Trust me, it’s been a wild ride writing this one, there’s a lot more of it to come!
mic
6/29/23, 9:55 AM
fucking hot, please more, let them sign more contracts, let them sign their ruin, all assets to you, and sell their storys and asses, let the web laugh over them, love your tricking
6/29/23, 9:14 AM
Needs part two. Even if it’s not part of the challenge. The premise is too good to just be a one shot.
Anonymous
6/29/23, 7:46 AM
hottest cop story ever!!!! can't wait for the next chapter.
Trotskisaurus
6/29/23, 5:41 AM
Absolutely love every one of these, where will it end? Entire station reduced to unwilling sex toys? The corrupted cops kicked out of the force and having to live off their new depraved talents? So many hot possibilities.
6/26/23, 6:31 PM
Let wash become harveys little doll so Harvey can dress him bring him eveywh with him keep him in a jar and tame him

6/29/23, 1:45 AM
@[Masters toy](/user/show/10022805) A cum jar?

Yes he can be filling it every night
6/29/23, 5:12 AM
@[Ziel](/user/show/1683554)
6/29/23, 3:36 AM
Oh my. Oh wow. Oh my and Oh wow. What a fun and sexy and hot and good story. So good! Love Controller pov. Love dom top pov. Love the line about how he loves his bottoms have big cocks so it wings around It's all amazing. So good! I wonder if he could rim his thrall into bliss. So the thrall knows pleasure is from his ass. This was so good!
6/29/23, 3:08 AM
Amazing
6/29/23, 2:36 AM
Oh shit! This is one of my favorite stories abot mindfucked cops, and I'm so glad to see another chapter. I was afraid that this story would end in chapter 3, but this new scenario opens up many hot possibilities! Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU for keeping him in his uniform! Stripping officers and leaving them naked and completely forgetting about their uniform and authority symbols ruins a lot of hot stories. I mean, what's the point of using a uniformed man, if they are going to completely take away what gives them their hottest and signature element? Is far much better to twist those symbols, and turn them into in the opposite, as you did it here. I love that you keep his uniform and now is integral part of his humiliation on his daily work, the use of it in many parts of this chapter (like how people and criminals tease him on the streets) was very, very hot.
Anonymous
6/25/23, 8:16 PM
I agree with you, Mafisto. There's something special about this series. I've been reading since the beginning, probably reread "Grocery Boy," "The Mechanics," and "The Berries" a hundred times when they first came out when I was a teenager. Something has been emerging lately in your writing, some in "Human Trials," some more in the late chapters of this series. It's hard to say what it is, but it shows up in the psychological content and the writing style. This series could end up being the major work of your late period as "Domination" was of the early one. It's not trivial that "Camera" shows up in this chapter. The late writing might be grappling with the meaning and history of the earlier, perhaps with the meaning of this whole genre that you and others began so long ago. One suggestion: don't create too many new characters. Your most memorable works have few.

6/29/23, 2:05 AM
@Anonymous Thanks. The earlier stories were all about the fantasies themselves I guess. And now, 25+ years after Camera and The Game, I am also interested by why there is the need for those fantasies, what role they fulfill and why, and what can lie beyond. Anybody who would have the opportunity to do anything like in those stories would struggle with that, each in their own way. As for the number of characters, it depends on the type of story. The Game and Domination had close to two dozen characters each (some in common). This kind of saga builds a shared world inhabited by a lot of people, and I guess it becomes a mix with other genres, like sci-fi, horror, etc... Smaller more focused stories are their own things, with a limited number of characters. I do restrain myself most of the time. But for the last chapter of Lexington, Piko wanted a celebrity, so I guess I'll need one more. :satisfied:
6/25/23, 10:24 PM
I vote for action figure size! I see fun in Harvey's future and humiliation for Wash.

6/29/23, 1:44 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Action figure is such a fun size. Although I've always been a fan of G.I. Joes. ;)
6/28/23, 10:14 PM
Oh my, oh my oh my oh my, fans head. THIS WAS HOT!!!!!!!!!! Loved it all. Good on the comeuppance. I like how he didn't ruin their lives but, in my opinion, made it better. So sexy, so hot, so fun! Loved the whole set up. Also the tie in to them doing it his sister is funny as its like his opportunities come from protecting his sister. hehe The daily activities was great as was the sex at the end. So hot! The fingering in the shower was hot and so was the rimming. Imagine if they came from it, that would have been cool, but even as it was, it was super cool. And hot. And sexy. What a fantastic story!

The Author
6/28/23, 11:50 PM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) Thank you for the support! And yes, I would very much agree that Simon has helped make a significant improvement in their lives. And not to worry, with all the buttplay they've got to look forward to, Anton and Ned will definitely find themselves conditioned to fill their jocks from rimming soon enough.
Anonymous
6/28/23, 9:44 PM
I'm looking for a story very similar to this one, but in the one I'm looking for a guy used a spell to connect his friend's fleshlight to his own butt, his friend knows it and decides to connect the other end to his mouth and in the end he decides to leave the magical fleshlight in the team locker room to have fun with. Does anyone know where to find this story?
6/28/23, 6:19 PM
My guess is that at some point Liam would get corrupt enough and desperate/frustrated enough that he will use the label maker on Mason, in a sort of a Shakespearian tragedy.
6/28/23, 4:24 PM
Great story.... also BimBinTopxx is a great fucking name haha!
6/28/23, 4:22 PM
Such a hot story. This has to be EdIam
Lanscul
6/28/23, 4:12 PM
J' adore ces histoires...
6/28/23, 4:06 PM
I like the ending but I think that there should of been a master sub trist between Matt and Jake before Matt informed Jake that he was his new permanent master
6/27/23, 1:37 AM
That Gabe still give me a bad vibe. He used "rapist" as an excuse for his enslavement of Jake, and his fellows at Syndicate called Jake all kinds of name because of that. But who was talking here? Human-traffickers. Were all the guys kidnapped and sold being rapists or criminals in some kind? If not, this Gabe is so fake. He used "I'm saving you" as a way to bound and manipulate Matt, and now Jake's bound with Matt and "Matt's saving you" were used to bound and manipulate Jake. So my feeling of him as an exploiter is still true, in a bad kind of way. This Gabe does look like another "alpha" deserving his own "downfall", like Jake, doesn't he? Him kidnapping people left and right, then takes on the wrong person... For Jake and Matt, I feel like Jake's feeling for Matt was a case of Stockholm Syndrome and it's being used to warp his mind. Though I think he was in good hands and Matt would use him but not mistreat and abuse him (much), like those customers the Syndicate dealing with would potentially be (heavy modification, amputation, going-wrong breath-play...); and I'm kind of happy for that.

6/27/23, 9:31 AM
@[StalkerInTheShadow](/user/show/10009319) I getcha! Master Gabe is despicable, but that’s the point. Slavers are evil and for the most part unliveable bastards, yet I’ve always been attracted to guys like that. You may hate Gabe, but you hve to respect him

6/27/23, 11:52 AM
@[SlaveBoyJG](/user/show/10017787) I don't know about that. I find it's hard for me to respect a gaslighter like Gabe, "I'm doing you a favor, it's for your own good" while it's not at all. I have experienced enough bullshit like that, I would like no more. Due to circumstance, I may need to put up with it but by no mean would appreciate it or respect the person doing it. But each person has their own criterias, I suppose.

Martin
6/27/23, 4:01 PM
@[StalkerInTheShadow](/user/show/10009319) The characters might be assholes. Nothing in the story condones what's happening. In fact, it's so over the top what Gabe is doing, that I could accept this as a totally unrealistic fantasy - otherwise, it wouldn't be admissible to this site, as realistic rape stories are not allowed. As the story is told from Jake's point of view, letting us in on his humiliation and slow conversion, this story becomes sexually attractive to me personally. As I'm not a sadist, I couldn't enjoy it if it were told from the pov of Gabe for example - but I don't do kink-shamming, to each his own. For me, there is no point in overanalyzing this story. It's a fantasy, nothing more. In stories, you have villains, victims, and heroes. There is no point in trying to blame the characters. Whether Jake is falling victim to Stockholm syndrome is of no consequence to me - I don't judge him, as he's just a fictional character. I can hate Gabe, I can feel conflicted about Matt and I can feel both sorry and a little bit envious of Jake. I don't have to respect any of these persons, though, I respect the author, who has created an amazing piece of erotic fiction.

6/27/23, 4:23 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thank you so much, mate. So glad you enjoyed. Was so much fun to create this fantasy!

Anonymous
6/28/23, 4:09 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) I couldn't have said it better myself. Totally agree with all your points here, mate! I DID brought up the point about Billy a chapter or two ago as well but then came into this conclusion that you so eloquently put. ;)

6/28/23, 5:14 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) My comments were to talk about the characters. To me, they are one of the elements presented in a story along with the plot, the writing, etc.; if we don't talk about those, then what are there to talk about in a comment, outside of a single line "I like/don't like it"? Obviously not the author, since I don't know him so I can't judge.

Martin
6/28/23, 5:47 AM
@[StalkerInTheShadow](/user/show/10009319) Well, that's perfectly ok, of course, but to me, it sounded a bit like you were mad at the author for creating flawed and unlikeable characters. What I meant by "overanalyzing" the story is that we all understand that these characters are flawed and even unrealistic to the core. Of course, Gabe is worse than Jake ever was and his "justification" is completely nuts. Of course, Matt's being enslaved himself doesn't excuse him for doing the same to Jake. But in the end that doesn't matter to me. This wicked story in itself is simply a hot and fantastic read. Maybe I got your comment the wrong way, but I got the impression that you were unhappy with the story because of the bad things that happened there.

6/28/23, 3:55 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) It's true that I were unhappy with the story; characters like Gabe troubled me and kind of stopped me from enjoying it. However, it's about the characters, not about the author; just as while I despise Lex Luthor, I'm not mad at his creators who are also creators of Superman. And it's my personal taste. On the other hand, it's seem like the comments was steered more toward me and less toward the story. I think it's better stop here.
6/28/23, 3:21 PM
Need more
6/28/23, 3:10 PM
Thank you for such wonderful comments.
6/28/23, 2:42 PM
Love the sequel. I can already see a third one with someone being stuck in a huge baby’s thick, loaded diaper :thinking:
benedick543
6/28/23, 1:43 PM
This was such a hot story! Something I'd go back to in the future for sure. I can't wait for the contest to be over so I'd know the author and read more of your works! Just a little nitpick though, I think you might've changed some of the names midway through writing, but maybe you overlooked some remnants of the old names that resulted in some inconsistencies. Clarence is sometimes called Chester, and Caleb (Brad's bf) was initially introduced as Matty. This didn't really take away from the story, though, but I thought you should know. Thanks for this story!

6/28/23, 2:32 PM
@[benedick543](/user/show/10034418) And I ooooop. I def changed the names halfway through and likely missed a couple! I’ll have to edit it when I get the chance! Thanks for your kind words regardless!!
Trotskisaurus
6/28/23, 1:35 PM
Perfect! Please write either a sequel or more like this :)
6/28/23, 4:47 AM
Crazy!!!! You coulda given me a million guesses and I'd never have seen this coming. I'm so impressed by your ability to always keep this fresh and come up with fun new variations. I can tell the parties just getting started and I suspect no one is going to have quite the evening they suspected. :P Can't wait to see what happens next.

6/28/23, 1:09 PM
@[fanboi214](/user/show/908190) THANKS, Fanboi!! :smiling_face_with_three_hearts: GR8 2 hear from you & that you enjoyed this latest chapter!! ALWAYS Grateful 4 your positive comments ...working on curveballs 4 the next chapter--:exploding_head: The PARTY's only JUST begun!!:sparkler:
6/28/23, 12:32 PM
This has been a great series so far, can't wait to see what happens next. Fantastic work.
6/28/23, 12:00 PM
Liam is turning out to be a Daddy. A hot corrupted Daddy. I wonder what would be the last item Ryan would turn into.
6/28/23, 11:54 AM
I actually had somewhat change of heart I am a romantic & while both Matt & Jake did bad things, we humans all have weaknesses and the ability to change and grow. I think Matt & Jake truly have grown to want , need & love each other. They want to please each other. So their sexual relationship needs to be one of compatibility. That means there are times one tops but also bottom at other times. As to a working relationship the two should work together Matt as boss but Jake also working for him full time. But this is your story so I accept how you ended it.Agree Gabe is a monster.
6/28/23, 9:31 AM
I live to serve the virus
6/28/23, 8:30 AM
Another hot chapter! Really enjoying Liam's descent into daddyhood.