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Hyphap
11/7/15, 2:49 AM
Simple and just about perfect.
Anonymous
11/7/15, 2:11 AM
awesome
Anonymous
11/7/15, 1:13 AM
Another hot installment. Looking forward to more...
toughluck
11/7/15, 12:01 AM
Ridiculously hot scene. Really hit a spot for me.
Anonymous
11/6/15, 10:19 PM
I simply can't wait for Lucas' enslavement. Love this story!
Thom21 eroticgayhypnosis.com
11/6/15, 10:06 PM
You have a great concept with this story and I easily got the ideas you were trying to present. I loved reading this despite gramatical issues and think a team up with another author would take take your story and a series of stories to the next level.
Anonymous
11/6/15, 6:03 PM
Lovely, simply lovely. The dad is so hot, it's awesome to see him under control.
Vfdinc
11/6/15, 3:30 PM
Love this story, this and new installments of how does that make you feel we keep me coming back to your stories
Anonymous
11/6/15, 10:55 AM
This could make a reasonable story. Maybe you should post an e-mail address, in case someone interested in collaboration would like to contact you. Some criticism: It's just a fantasy, certainly, but the store still seems to exist in a void. No-one has families or friends who come around asking for them and local culture apparently ignores public displays of programmed boytoys. A more important thing: I don't quite get which part of Zack's experience you intend to focus on. The obliviousness? The suspicion? The terror? The reprogramming? (Any of these singly or in combination can make a fine story - I'm just not sure about your intent.)
Anonymous
11/6/15, 4:53 AM
Great idea - I too would like to see it turned into a full (longer) story.