Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/3/15, 9:30 AM
This was awesome :) do you think you'll write more? I hope so!
Anonymous
10/3/15, 7:23 AM
Damned hot. I'm in SG and this is one of my fantasies.
Anonymous
10/3/15, 12:58 AM
Great concept, I love ethnic stuff. But next time go further with it :P
Anonymous
10/2/15, 5:23 PM
that was a waste of my time reading it please no more trivia
Anonymous
10/2/15, 6:08 AM
Oh no!!! This has just got to be continued!! Super hot!
The guy who made this shit
10/2/15, 4:17 AM
And regarding the comment About the stereotypes well I happen to know some aussies, and I'm aware they aren't all "illiterate bushman" . And I happen to wear a hawaiian shirt to all funerals
Anonymous
10/2/15, 4:14 AM
Has anyone really been far as decided to use even go want to do look more like?
The guy who made this shit
10/2/15, 4:12 AM
Thanks for the Feedback. Honestly don't think I'll redo this ,but You folks are all welcome to. With any changes or modifications you want I didn't really intend this as a Solid fantasy. more so a premis. That I haven't seen much of I hope this inspires some of the better Writers, to make more fantasys with a similar premise. (of guys go someplace end up going native as one of you said)
Anonymous
10/2/15, 2:56 AM
LOL! I love Xorvax's cockiness. :)
Anonymous
10/2/15, 1:48 AM
Awesome!
Anonymous
10/1/15, 9:20 PM
The clue is in the title: a bogan is an unsophisticated / redneck Australian. You may as well complain about a hillbilly being stereotyped
Anonymous
10/1/15, 6:52 PM
Not offended, but if I would want to be, I'd find the American guy a horrible 'ugly American' stereotype. Then again, this sets the reader up with glee and anticipation at his fate.
Anonymous
10/1/15, 6:29 PM
Poor grammar. Too many stereotypes. It looks like you had a harder time learning the English language than you did finding out about Aussies. Us Aussies aren't all illiterate bushmen and blokes you know.
Anonymous
10/1/15, 5:15 PM
Hope we see an update to this soon!
Anonymous
10/1/15, 3:45 PM
Wow!!!!
Anonymous
10/1/15, 3:40 PM
This is pretty awesome. I like the sons dominance of the father and how its growing. The subliminal tapes are pretty cool and interesting. Our main guy, the son, could clearly get a harem if he wanted to. Hehe
Anonymous
10/1/15, 2:57 PM
This could have been good. As it was, it is in serious need of proofreading. Writing on a phone is as much an excuse for lack of effort as the closet door being closed is excuse for wearing a Hawaiian shirt to a funeral.
Anonymous
10/1/15, 2:54 PM
Meh...
Mar 12, 2015
Rick
10/1/15, 7:17 AM
Where's part 2. I wish the stories were real sometimes and there was mp3files like the one in the story
Anonymous
10/1/15, 5:18 AM
One of my favorites! Please continue!
Anonymous
10/1/15, 3:20 AM
That was pretty hot and short. You should do a Canada one!
Anonymous
10/1/15, 2:43 AM
Interesting idea. I can see where this could have gone. I agree with some of the other comments and this could have easily been applied to other regions as well. Some frat brothers down in Mexico for spring break taking advantage of the "free" spirits end up going native. Some guys are taletelling Europe after high school and before college end up in Germany.
Anonymous
10/1/15, 1:56 AM
Very very nice. Smooth and thorough
Anonymous
10/1/15, 1:53 AM
Add some punctuation too. Preferably correct punctuation. Makes it easier to figure out what the sentences are trying to say.
Anonymous
10/1/15, 1:41 AM
If you ever chatted with Aussies you'll know they have a helluva lot more colloquial terms (unrecognizable to more monolingual Americans). I suggest you have a couple of conversations with Aussies, then redo the story (the poor grammar really makes reading difficult) and incorporate all the new words you discover to change the protagonist in order to round out his profile.
Kk
9/30/15, 9:35 PM
This is a fun story, thank you for posting. I'm glad to actually see new content here for once!
Anonymous
9/30/15, 7:29 PM
Nicely done
Anonymous
9/30/15, 3:53 PM
SOOOOOO HOTTTTTTTT! Please give us MORE!
Anonymous
9/30/15, 7:40 AM
Awesome story!!
Anonymous
9/30/15, 4:55 AM
Great story!