Recent Comments

Anonymous
10/27/16, 11:26 AM
So now that hynotism is over, we have to see him go to work! Who is the customer base? Are they hypnotized as well!
Anonymous
10/27/16, 6:34 AM
I'd take Malcolm as well, always good to have a variety. While reading, I thought there might be a biker or a car shop owner, etc, to spice up the variety. Overall, a hot beginning!
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10/27/16, 6:23 AM
As I was reading te story I was stroking my cock it just kept getting harder the more I read as Master Ezra was fucking his slut at the end I came more than I ever did. Great story can't wait for the next chapter.
Anonymous
10/27/16, 5:29 AM
Thank you for replying! Cant wait for the next chapter of WoT!
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10/27/16, 5:19 AM
Both ~~~~ :)
Anonymous
10/27/16, 4:02 AM
That was just fucking awesome! A rapt read that left me wanting more...so much more.
Anonymous
10/27/16, 3:48 AM
Love this series. Great writing. Super hot, slow change. Thanks for your work. Hope all is well :)
10/27/16, 12:43 AM
Mastel: Yeah, I wasn't terribly thrilled with the last chapter on re-reading it to post it here, but it would've taken significant rewrites to make it better, which was not something I was interested in doing, since the story's already been up on another site for a few years now. I fixed obvious points of confusion and poor wording, but that's it. And yes, as Edlam says, there's another chapter of WoT coming shortly. Just waiting on my other proofreader, which could be tomorrow or may take a week or two, depending how busy he is. Once he's done, I usually give the chapter one last read myself and then I'll post it.
Bram
10/26/16, 11:17 PM
Another great story. I so Wanted to be Jesse. A few little spellingmistakes but who cares with a story this good.
Anonymous
10/26/16, 9:46 PM
I would totally buy such good boys, especially those trained to be some sort of pets, and especially the brothers. The Charlyne part was not really to my taste but in general the set of up the training and the selling of pet boys was hot.
Anonymous
10/26/16, 9:32 PM
That was great!!! Would love to see where your imagination takes you with this story line.
autoDream
10/26/16, 9:21 PM
I've done in a few in my days. Depends on the contents and what not, but if you are interested just email me. Anyways, glad you enjoyed the story! (Definitely got that rimming in there!!) I think this was the story I had personally tested out the POV switch with, just never got around to finishing the story (mostly because I finished first... lol) I feel like I definitely need to make chapter two, might just start working on it since this is one of my favorite fantasies.
Carl
10/26/16, 9:16 PM
HOT!!! Oh very sexy and hot. Love the nature of things. Love the character's, all three. The concept of what Ezra does is awesome. The rimming was very cool, looking forward to seeing the scene from the dominants view, hehe. Speaking of iy, I love the info we get from dominant pov. Such a great way to do it. I also love the fact that by day in the world the straight boys are normal, not realizing what occurs at night. That their real life remains as it is while behind the scenes they serve as very very good boys. Really hot and awesome good story. So very cool. Quite erotic and sexy. Really enjoyed the setup. Ps. So you do commissions?
Carl
10/26/16, 8:32 PM
If I may I have to say as a sort of alternate or one shot it was super sexy. The characters hot, the submission of Jesse fyn, and the new dude cool. Jesse being taken away was fine. But when you combine it with the stories already existing it seems outhat of place. The new dude was soon random that I didn't feel it. So on one hand it's super hot but then when one calms down from pure fun to analysis it's like huh. But I love what you're doing, do not think otherwise. The idea of an island where gay hypnotists take over and play with straight boys is so fun. So fun that's it's become part of my fun time imaginings. :)
EdIam
10/26/16, 7:16 PM
To the person desiring a continuation of Web of Trust, I'm a proofreader for Robin and you're in for a treat as the story continues. I love Robins' writing so much and he inspires my writing in many ways. This story was a favorite of mine for so long and it's great to see more people finding it and enjoying it with this re-release!
AgainstMyWill
10/26/16, 6:39 PM
Wow, this was hot. The part with Charlyne was crazy hot it was so kinky. Would love to read that backstory, starting with Phil and seeing his hesitation and horror in the face of being turned into such a freak!!
autoDream
10/26/16, 5:27 PM
The email thing must be on your end Nick. Tist-POV mode is something I will probably stick with. And last comment, yeah, this was a quick story, and the vibe I tried to go with was broken down Jese who didn't really care if he resisted or not. Sort of a "Do what you want with me, this place is stupid I give up" but when they do finally go after him he is a bit more like "I was joking, get away from me, but, I guess that would be, nice..." In the end, just wanted to toss something out quick that had my mind in a swirl, but I have to agree, the hypnosis was rather casual. Hopefully the bell provides better, stuff...
Anonymous
10/26/16, 4:51 PM
Let me begin with saying , I am soooo glad you are back. You are one of the best writers about hypnosis that I know. The slow and Nice inductions in your stories are just perfect, the giving up all the power of the self and then being a toy for the masters are realy great. And I am soooo glad that you keep using speedos in your stories ( I just love speedos ) But that being sad it was a very hot story ,but the hypnosis in this story was weak. Still beter then most hypnostories but to be one of your stories I found it a bit weak. Hope to see the next chapter I cant wait to read it.
Mastel
10/26/16, 4:45 PM
Well a normal ending..., but overall a good story. Just some parts feel like it either hit or miss, like you stop mid way then take a break, and it feel force at some point. It make me cum, that much it has done.
Peter D----- (again)
10/26/16, 12:14 PM
I congratulate the author on this min-novella. So homoerotic I felt aroused to the point that I re-read some chapters as it almost seemed at times to subliminally control the reader. I'm ex-Services, Versatile though usually required to Top but the thought now of being a controlled Submissive like Sean is making me reconsider what I really want from men. You're a clever author, RobinHood70.
Oct 25, 2016
TimNJ
10/26/16, 11:41 AM
Loved them all, such great stories!
10/26/16, 7:39 AM
Thanks guys ;) I'm not really sure where to go with part 2... more humiliation with Ben and Jake? or a wider hypnosis domination?
Oct 25, 2016
Anonymous
10/26/16, 7:24 AM
Perfect writing and a HOT theme...... Please more of it
Anonymous
10/26/16, 6:05 AM
This was cool!! Sex was hot -- decadent!!
Anonymous
10/26/16, 4:54 AM
Still waiting patiently for a continuation of your Web of Trust
Nick Bottom
10/26/16, 4:29 AM
I tried to email you but it won't let me. I think about this series quite regularly. I'm glad to see it hasn't been abandoned.
Oct 24, 2016
Anonymous
10/26/16, 4:19 AM
The power bottom character, ugh, I didn't know I needed that.
Anonymous
10/26/16, 12:33 AM
So far so good! Looking forward to what happens next.
Carl
10/26/16, 12:02 AM
The dominant pov was perfect, makes he wish we saw it in the others. Hehe The way the hypnosis was so quick was perfect. As you said, it's been happening so much his resistance is basically gone. It's so quick. :)
Anonymous
10/26/16, 12:00 AM
This seems more like a side event that could happen but I'd not official. Mostly because him being broken down seems like a task one of the others should do. Quite sexy though.