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8/12/23, 3:00 PM
This story is amazingly hot! I love how his submissiveness acts both as "needs to be protected" and "really needs to be bred". I loved Oliver sudden dirty talking and hope there will be (much) more of that. Please continue the story!!
8/11/23, 10:54 PM
Oh, my, I feel so silly. That scene in the gay bar with people being trapped, terrorized, judged, and going through conversion got me in a really blue mood :( Poor people! Fortunately these rangers will never exist in real life. And then I felt a bit like a hypocrite because trapping, terrorizing, judjing and converting is pretty much what the main character ends up doing :P I guess his picture of a Fairy is also that of a predator! lol Even though at least he leaves some room for joy for those he cares the most. I found the story **VERY imaginative**, and with very hot scenes. I feel that with some more time, outside the challenge, these charismatic characters could have more space to expand their substories. Love the new Pride Ranger's uniform by the way ;) Thank you for the story!

8/12/23, 12:04 PM
@[Piko](/user/show/14889) Fairies did abduct humans as servants or to marry, so Alex is on brand for a fairy. If all this wasn't taking place in only a few hours he might have had time to learn how to do more, but he was working with what he had on a very tight time limit. Whenever I get around to doing more with this series he'll definitely start exploring what else he's able to do.

8/12/23, 2:04 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Oh, wow! Fairies are way creepier than I thought! :scream: I didn't know it, so it was weird to see Alex behaving so sexual and predatory just because he was suddenly attracted to men. Being that his thirst for mating, possessing, and dominating comes from how the mythical creatures behave, maybe it could have been subtly mentioned somewhere. That would make the shift in his attitude easier to understand. Also, I just remembered Alex was saying that if fairies existed they would take over the world... And then he goes and starts scheming to just doing that lol So that definitely makes sense :stuck_out_tongue_closed_eyes:

8/12/23, 2:24 PM
@[Piko](/user/show/14889) There's a reason they were traditionally called The Fair Folk. It was because they're very easily offended, and they are quite prone to disproportionate retribution. Your best bet is to never get a fairy mad at you. There are houses that were built with two doors in a straight line from the front and back that would be left open a crack over night because the house was built on a fairy road and being an obstacle in a fairy's way would likely see you wind up dead. Fairies are basically minor gods with a hair trigger temper. Not someone you want taking interest in you if you aren't ready to devote your life to keeping them appeased.
8/12/23, 10:05 AM
Well that was unexpected. On the one hand it was very interesting to see how Travis experiences life from the other side and his squirming from getting attention is very cute and hot. However as a gay man I do wish it won't be permanent, at least not as a complete transformation (cunt boys transformation stories are hot af). I do not trust Jamal the slightest bit. At first I thought he had planted the pills on purpose, however I won't be surprised if he told Travis to keep taking to pills so he would stay female. That's not to say that his teasing is not hot as hell; The way he embarrasses Travis by making him horny everywhere while maintaining a nonchalant attitude making Travis would probably make me melt in submissiveness. I do hope you'll decide to make him a man again (may I once again recommend leaving him with a pussy), and maybe lift this pup's spirit up with some positive reinforcement. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Anonymous
8/12/23, 10:19 AM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) For the very first time in my life, I'm publishing a story that isn't 100% completed. Flipping him back to a man hadn't been a thought until you, and someone else suggested it. But now I'm inspired... thanks

8/12/23, 2:19 PM
@Anonymous Well I'm glad I had an effect but I hope I did not discourage you from writing
Anonymous
8/12/23, 12:19 PM
Super hot. Love all your stuff man!
8/12/23, 6:49 AM
lol didn't expect that gender swapping coming it's hot but I wish it's not permanent

8/12/23, 9:24 AM
@[SlutFiloBoy19](/user/show/10033810) Hmmm... you know I had intended to make it permanent. But you've given me a thought...
Eliot
8/12/23, 9:06 AM
My absolute fantasy. Muscle worship is the sexiest thing ever. Alpha muscle turns me on massively.
8/12/23, 7:40 AM
Can't wait for the next one! This is one of the most darkly imaginative stories on GSS!
8/12/23, 7:21 AM
Fuck! The hyper ass rimming and tit fucking is so HOT!
8/12/23, 6:50 AM
I'm into nip play of a gentle sort in a big way. But I would really like to know more about that "medical device" and that procedure. Is it real or a fantasy? If it's real, what are the names of the device and the procedure which people pay thousands for? It seems as if it involves breaking or tearing tissue around the nipples - is that right?
8/12/23, 5:24 AM
Welp. You're an excellent writer, but for me, it was a really hard read. The hard turn it made halfway through basically lured me in. I don't rate stories badly that don't match my kinks, but I really wish I'd had some warning before I had gotten that far.
8/12/23, 4:52 AM
Yeah, holy shit. This has turned into a grotesquerie. I was honestly so impressed before Javier. Now I want to warn people away from it.
8/12/23, 2:20 AM
Just such fantastic writing, and so slow-burn sexy.
8/12/23, 1:56 AM
This is excellently written and hits a lot of my erotic points. Thank you for posting it!
8/11/23, 10:12 PM
That is one hot class. Lucky students. Cant wait to read to what happened to Gabriel and the two cursed guys.
8/11/23, 9:17 PM
Oh my if I laughed and giggled with this one!! :laughing: Those silly names got me every single time haha And I can't believe it's pretty much the whole first book / movie in one amazing chapter! What a great parody! Great writing + great eye for parody + super funny scenes = A really great story! And I'm very happy I got to read it :heart:
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8/11/23, 7:46 PM
Damn! So hot to be so pretty and sexy for a strong Black Man like Jamal!
8/11/23, 7:28 PM
The suicide and killing felt too abrupt tbh , not that I am totally opposed to the hypnotee dying in some way while under trance especially as it's kinda of a staple of kaa/vampire hypno stories and can be a sign that the person is so deeply controlled that it overpowers the instinict of self preservation, However I feel like it would have done alot better if you transitioned into it by showing axel trying to resist when he is first given the command or the captain attempting to put up a fight when he refuses to kneel longer than the others, wherein some more hypno patter could have been added or thunderpec toying with his victims before breaking them into complete obedience. This is still the first chapter though and any concept involving hypno pecs is hot af so I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter.
8/11/23, 6:49 PM
Ironically, while I agree that as with all Baralai's _fucking hot_ and wildly imaginative stories, the spelling and grammar issues are very distracting, "phone going off" is actually perfectly fine vernacular in this case :-)
8/11/23, 1:18 PM
i love this story. Cannot wait for the next chapter!

8/11/23, 5:39 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thanks! More is planned out. I have at least 2 more chapters of Dan falling under the control of Zahir's powerful musk. Also working on an hypno-curse story.
8/11/23, 2:25 AM
This is series is perfection. I can’t wait to see Tank again. Did he make more himbo tops às himself?

8/11/23, 3:18 PM
@[Elmara](/user/show/910352) Thank you! And Tank is one of my favorites too. Next chapter does have “dumbing down” component, but it isn’t Tank related and is darker than his sweet himbo antics. Trying to think of a good way to bring Tank and others back that doesn’t feel too repetitive. I’m thinking about starting a separate series for scenes from campus that are just smut and not plot related.
8/11/23, 2:54 PM
Just keep making them bigger! Love this story!
Anonymous
8/11/23, 2:31 PM
I like the direction of where the story is going, just not sure about the wives(ex-wives) also being present in the scenes….. but other than that, really can’t wait for Part 3….
Martin
8/11/23, 1:45 PM
I've assigned your first story to your account (you had submitted it without using an account originally), and I've fixed the author name of the other two stories, I hope that's ok with you.
8/11/23, 12:38 PM
This has been a tremendous tale. The twists and turns are great. I have read this several times, and each time I pick up another clue. Thanks
spiralthiago
8/11/23, 11:14 AM
Exelent!!! Super hot twins
8/11/23, 10:10 AM
A great series by two great authors. The world has lost a real talent. Much love and support to all who knew him <3

8/11/23, 10:58 AM
@[Hypno_boy](/user/show/497726) Thanks we did lose a great guy and a better friend.
TGF
8/11/23, 10:12 AM
sexiest story of the site ! thanks for this one, hope to read more like that soon !
8/9/23, 9:26 PM
If the parents have only been married for 15 years and the son came after the wedding, that makes Drew 14, 15 at most. Which makes things a bit icky.

Anonymous
8/10/23, 5:21 AM
@[ex-top](/user/show/932298) The math is off yeah, but he's in college so I think we're suppose to assume that he's at least 18. Sometimes people are careless about that. Dates are easy enough to be an oversight.

Martin
8/10/23, 6:06 AM
@ex-top Also, why do you care? The age is not an issue in this story. It's not like he's written as being a child. The fixation of some people on the age and whether something might be 'underage' (that term being very subjective as it is) is already unhealthy initself. If a story would be about a child or pre-puberty teen, we'd see it right away and deny its publishment.

8/10/23, 6:39 AM
@[ex-top](/user/show/932298) Yeah I was thinking something similar. I don’t think the implication is he’s underage but perhaps we could get an edit with some maths updates the confirm?

8/10/23, 6:57 AM
@[PJ34](/user/show/2558338) Yes, all that is needed is the change of a digit from “5” to an “8”. But as the owner of this site bluntly asks “Why do you care?” it’s obviously time for me to steer well clear of here.

Martin
8/10/23, 7:54 AM
@[ex-top](/user/show/932298) Good idea!

8/11/23, 2:01 AM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Excuse me, but this whole interaction is very rude. Even if the character isn't being "written as a child," he's still, in the context of the story, underage (and not 17, but 14/15), and people are well within their rights to question and dislike that. "Underage" is not a subjective term--it means, at least in the United States, "under 18," and Romeo and Juliet laws aside, full-grown adults having sex with anyone under the age of 18 is illegal. Yes, I know it's a fantasy website that crosses FAR more taboos than that, but the issue of sex with minors is one that people are right to be passionate about--ESPECIALLY at a time when the biggest cudgel being waged against the LGBTQIA+ community is accusations of grooming and pedophilia. Look, I know I personally come to this site to get away from all of the seriousness of the world, and I bet others do, too. Politics are frustrating, especially when you're trying to get off, and I don't like thinking about that kind of thing when I'm going at it. But ex-top was right to point out the underage nature of the story and raise concerns. And I think that the owner of the site--who is responsible for its content--might be a little more sensitive to the issue than rudely dismissing someone with "Good idea." Those are my thoughts, such as they are. Thank you for reading!

Martin
8/11/23, 9:11 AM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) This discussion is coming up like once a year. But a story's comment section is simply not the appropriate place to discuss it. However, since it's important to many people, obviously, and because you took the time to write a calm, sincere posting, I wanted to explain my reasons once again. Check out the forum posting: https://forum.gaykinkystories.com/t/another-underage-discussion/5749 Also please use that thread to voice your (dis)agreement with my position. In this comment section, I will delete any further comment about the matter, though. It just doesn't belong here.
8/11/23, 8:22 AM
Soooo incredibly hot, I can't wait to see what tye captain will make him do next
Anonymous
8/7/23, 2:12 PM
This story is really hot! I liked Travis' puppy personality and if someone like Jamal would've let his cock nonchalantly caress my cheeks I would just die of embarrassment, confusion and arosement. However, despite it being stated, Jamal doesn't look like a nice guy. I mean, Travis did absolutely nothing wrong, and probably could've been manipulated in a more positive way. That's not to say that this is a bad story, because it's not, I just feel bad for Travis. That in itself is some great writing as I didn't expect to sympathize with the white himbo who never faced a challenge. I hope Travis' spirit will be lifted soon, especially if it involves being lifted over Jamal's dick.

8/11/23, 6:45 AM
@Anonymous Thanks for the reply. And aargh... I tweaked the story a little to add in a bit more of Travis questioning himself, and Jamal getting a thrill by teasing and slightly humiliating Travis. But don't worry, they settle down quite nicely soon... but maybe not how people will expect