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8/16/23, 8:11 AM
Love seeing an Outlands story here. Well done! An intriguing ending with a mystery to solve. Dangerous to go out there. Sure hope they know what they're doing. What is the Brother's Brigade?

8/30/23, 6:22 PM
I guess we're going to have to find out when Andre joins, won't we?
Anonymous
8/30/23, 5:36 PM
This was very hot I kinda hope for a part 2
Anonymous
8/30/23, 5:13 PM
Great opening! Really interested to see what you’ve got planned next :)
8/30/23, 5:05 PM
i love this. I am very very interested in israeli men. THey are so incredibly handsome and sexy.
Anonymous
8/30/23, 3:56 PM
Excellent!!
8/30/23, 3:41 PM
Nice happy ending!
Anonymous
8/30/23, 2:23 PM
Terrific!!
Aug 30, 2023
8/30/23, 2:14 PM
Hot!! Loved it, funny and sexy at the same time
8/30/23, 12:42 PM
Are there any IT guys that can make the Voice into an app?
8/30/23, 3:37 AM
I absolutely loved the idea and way Rob's corruption went, even if it was a bit brief. Hu'nah's was a fun return to the taming of the wild and the mental link pushing down on him. And while Cliff's isn't the most for myself, I could tell you were really having fun with it, and I loved the idea of taking his clothing options and using it to change the texture of the clay.

8/30/23, 11:52 AM
@[Sabinmoon](/user/show/2093511) Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it. And, yes; I really enjoyed writing that part in particular, but also this whole series!
8/30/23, 11:50 AM
What's he doing to the three straight boys? Will they become slaves too, or just get turned gay? The latter could be fun because it would attract more people to the club to be turned now that being gay is trendy, but the natural gays should still be superior to the converts.
Anonymous
8/30/23, 10:26 AM
Real curious to know what happened between kim and chloe’s dads
8/30/23, 9:48 AM
Keep going please
8/30/23, 7:12 AM
Wow, that was great! I'm not normally into fantasy but this pushed my buttons big time! Hope there's more to come soon...
shoejock
8/30/23, 4:50 AM
Fuck this was hot, i want to hear more details about the sucking and mindlessness
8/30/23, 12:41 AM
Amazing chapter! Really love the insane number of fetishes you explored even if the animal fucking was not my favourite after a certain point. I would really love mpreg to come into this properly - Dan and Greg both seem like they'd have loved to get pregnant in this chapter and the plants impregnating everyone was super hot.
8/29/23, 11:54 PM
Great story. I hope there's more to cum!
8/29/23, 10:19 PM
Absolutely brilliant.

8/29/23, 10:27 PM
@[Essex](/user/show/909447) Cheers! This was a lot of fun.
8/29/23, 9:33 PM
Hot story, especially when Frank first falls under the power of the Green Man. Looking forward to the next chapter!

8/29/23, 10:26 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) same here
Anonymous
8/27/23, 9:53 AM
I'm a bit confused by this story. Obviously English isn't your first language which is perfectly fine you may just want to find someone to edit or look over your stories. The biggest problem I have is there isn't really any background information. I get it at the end but we are put in this world with no context. We don't know what a second maturity is or what it entails, we don't know that these guys are fucking eachother on the reg. It's all implied. If thats a creative choice that we have to put the world together I can respect that but if its not maybe a prologue or introduction story might fit. I saw that you read lukes big butt changes on your profile. The author of that did an introduction in the form of a script for an informational video. I'll link it below. Just my two cents feel free to disregard. https://www.gayspiralstories.com/series/show/10000219

8/29/23, 9:51 PM
@Anonymous Thank you for taking the time to read my story. Indeed, English isn't my first language. There are several clues I deliberately left as evidence of that. The grammatical errors are my fault for blindly trusting the translator in the GPT chat, which couldn't handle some idiomatic expressions. Regarding the second thing you brought up, the fact that the reader has to uncover the rules of this universe as they read about it is (in fact) the crux of the matter. An introduction would have been plausible. It also would have killed the air of mystery.
8/29/23, 9:44 PM
I really liked the story. If I could give a suggestion would be to expand a bit more about Mitchell and how he was influenced by the video as much as you went into detail with Bryan. Overall, great story and I look forward to reading more with Bryan, Mitchell and Jacob.
8/29/23, 4:31 AM
What a hot finale. Even though im not a fan of the villains winning, ill accept this. The twist and turn. I enjoyed this twisted tale of superheroes and villains.

8/29/23, 9:27 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Thank you very much! I have to admit that I _wanted_ to give the pair a happy ending, but it slipped through my fingers as I wrote the last few chapters.
Undieguy58
8/29/23, 9:22 PM
I think I need to get it all out of my system too. Anyone got some Gatorade?
8/29/23, 9:16 PM
People accepting absurd new realities is a major turn on for me, and you do such an incredible job at that :heart: Getting to build this kind of narratives is harder than it seems, so kudos! Also, as a fun extra, I like how heat and anal have become a new chain of actions for the characters, even outside the context of the gym and their team.
8/29/23, 9:09 PM
Sexy fantasy :fire:
8/29/23, 8:53 PM
I like it, thank you for sharing this story with us
Anonymous
8/29/23, 8:48 PM
Spectacular work!!
Anonymous
8/29/23, 7:58 PM
This was so hot! So excited to read the next chapter.
8/29/23, 3:00 PM
Mmmmm very good let's have more fun with him

Wakeup
8/29/23, 4:23 PM
@[Masters toy](/user/show/10022805) I’m sure they’re going to get a lot of use, very soon.

8/29/23, 5:15 PM
@Wakeup Let's hope it doesn't go past 19 he will be stuck for a while 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Wakeup
8/29/23, 6:27 PM
@[Masters toy](/user/show/10022805) Now that would be a shame. 😏