Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/13/17, 4:26 PM
Awesome way to mush up short transformation stories!!
Martin
11/13/17, 2:32 PM
What a nice, hot short story! Right to the point! Love it!
Anonymous
11/13/17, 2:25 PM
Great buildup as always! Looking forward to seeing where this goes next.
Nov 12, 2017
Anonymous
11/13/17, 2:21 PM
Would love to see more, please!
Anonymous
11/13/17, 1:51 PM
Finally (probably) some hot incest dad son action on the next chapter
Anonymous
11/13/17, 1:19 PM
More please
Anonymous
11/13/17, 12:07 PM
Happy belated Halloween !!
Anonymous
11/13/17, 11:25 AM
Great to see Coach's love to the players!!
Anonymous
11/13/17, 10:32 AM
Please let the dad be hypnotized before everyone else!!
Anonymous
11/13/17, 10:20 AM
Great, can't wait to read the rest.
Meca
11/13/17, 8:59 AM
Hello, Mr. Martin. Thanks for keep the site working. I was wondering, do you have plans to make some changes on the rules of the site? if you have, please announce it with some time to give us chance to save the stories. It was sad when the former administrator removed the stories involving superheroes. I remember a particularly good one titled "Superman Vs The Vice Lord", by an author called "Angus", that was saddly left unfinished, and didn't let us chance to save it, nor a way to contact the writter. It was a pity, because the story was brilliant.
Nov 12, 2017
Anonymous
11/13/17, 5:09 AM
How he ended up in this mist intrigues me!! Great story! Loved it!!
11/13/17, 3:10 AM
Thank you, Martin!
Anonymous
11/13/17, 2:45 AM
Will this site become secure again?
11/13/17, 1:30 AM
Thanks to Hugh for all he's done over the years, and Martin for taking over!
11/12/17, 8:13 PM
Thank you for keeping this community alive! I'd be so sad to see this place disapear again :( You seem to love this place as much as we do, so I'm sure it's in excellent hands! Also, a huge Thank You to Hugh as well for taking over the former NCMC and creating this fa! You did an amazing job! Must have taken a lot of effort! Whatever you're doing now you have my full support and best wishes!
Anonymous
11/12/17, 6:19 PM
It’s so obvious Grant is a beta who obvious loves and worships his Dad even without any hypnosis. I can’t wait to see how that turns out! — and he has older brothers too?! Wow.
Nov 12, 2017
gaycub
11/12/17, 2:43 PM
awesome story .
Nov 12, 2017
11/12/17, 1:54 PM
great story
Anonymous
11/12/17, 10:48 AM
That's why I love your stories so much Edlam! Making these hunks and dad's and authorities do things like it's normal. I find that so hot as well. Please make it rain with chapters! Can't wait for chapter 2 and all other chapters
Anonymous
11/12/17, 10:01 AM
It got a little to dark for what I normally Expect from Erotica. Still, It was very good. Very Descriptive and overall a complete story. I find it amusing that this works very well as a gay erotica but also works well as a horror story on its own. You have a talent for making likable Protagonists and Making them suffer in twisted and sick yet erotic ways.
11/12/17, 8:47 AM
As Robin said, for me, I find hypno most erotic when someone is made to do something they never ever would have done before...not only made to do it, but to want to do it and make them think it's normal. That control is very sexy. That said, it's only sexy when in the realm of fantasy. Most everything I write about would disgust me if it happened in real life, especially incest. If I knew someone was trying to make me be intimate in the way my characters are with their family, I'd be beyond disgusted. But when it's word on a page (or screen!), there's no harm in it. Beyond that, I did tag it with 'incest' so people really opposed to it can avoid it if need be. And, just so you know, if you really don't like incest, I'd steer clear of Chapter 3 ;)
11/12/17, 7:52 AM
"why does it always have to veer into incest? Why do thay always have to make family members interact?" Edlam already explained his interest. For me, it's about a few things. The first is control...I'm into hypnosis because the fantasy of making someone do something they'd never do otherwise turns me on. Incest is one of the most taboo things there is in our society. In reality, I'd have serious issues with anything like that actually happening, but in a fantasy, it's "safe"...I know everyone is enjoying themselves and not harmed by it at all, because that's how I set it up. The other thing that turns me on about incest is flipping a trusted relationship on its head...having someone who should be objecting or even calling the cops instead be approving and/or participating. I love that! Does that answer your question? :)
Anonymous
11/12/17, 5:12 AM
I love you, EdIam!
Anonymous
11/12/17, 4:10 AM
Day incest though 👌 very nice
Anonymous
11/12/17, 3:32 AM
^ own it girl ! Lol
11/12/17, 1:34 AM
Cuz I'm turned on by it......and I write it....... ;)
Anonymous
11/12/17, 1:33 AM
With so many hot men for Paul to enslave, why does it always have to veer into incest? Why do thay always have to make family members interact? I hope this is not focussed on too much. The story was otherwise very hot.
Anonymous
11/11/17, 9:41 PM
This. This needs to continue. Please
Anonymous
11/11/17, 4:27 PM
brilliant, just brilliant! you and Robin's stories made me cum every time i read.