Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/27/18, 5:28 PM
Great story...great photos
Anonymous
1/27/18, 4:22 PM
Excellent!!
Anonymous
1/27/18, 3:39 PM
Excellent work
Anonymous
1/27/18, 3:24 PM
Definitely kept me hard. The plot twist made this story even more arousing.
Jan 16, 2018
1/27/18, 1:58 PM
Wow. That’s an extremely well done, interesting story. As always, your writing impressed me. Very clever and very hot.
Jan 26, 2018
Anonymous
1/27/18, 12:06 PM
Amazing as always. Please keep on writing hot mind control stories :Q
1/27/18, 7:43 AM
I like the build up and change. Sad to hear about the kids
1/27/18, 6:31 AM
Thank you for coming back to this story! It's easily in my top 10.
Jan 26, 2018
Anonymous
1/27/18, 6:20 AM
Tkhon* (So sorry! I really do love your work)
Jan 26, 2018
Anonymous
1/27/18, 6:20 AM
The last bits were great. Never stop writing, Thkon
Anonymous
1/27/18, 2:19 AM
intriguing. get to the hot stuff...
Anonymous
1/26/18, 8:35 PM
Has anyone managed to find the other two parts yet?
1/26/18, 5:56 PM
It was amazing!! Thank you for writing this! I had a lot of fun! The scenes were very hot and well explained, something hard to achieve considering how messy orgies can get! Lol The ending was excellent. Finishing a story isn't easy, but you did it proficiently. I hope we get to see more from you in the future! Not necessarily from this series! I'm eager to see what comes next from your imaginative mind.
Jan 26, 2018
Swizzington
1/26/18, 4:31 PM
I kinda wish the kid had put up a just little bit more of a fight. But still, I really enjoyed it!
Jan 26, 2018
1/26/18, 2:01 PM
Such a hot story! You do a great job of describing Kobi's mental transformation.
1/26/18, 6:12 AM
Will there be more? I hope so.
1/26/18, 3:42 AM
Great premise, but there's no dramatic tension. I think the story would work a lot better with third-person narration and a slower pace.
1/26/18, 2:08 AM
Gareth needs to do some more work with another cast and soon!
Anonymous
1/26/18, 1:40 AM
Loved it!!
Bluemohawk
1/26/18, 12:09 AM
Loved it! Impressive, expressive and hot as all kinds of fuck! You are now on my radar as a great writer. Keep it up.
Anonymous
1/25/18, 10:57 PM
For once i would like to see a brainwashed slave twist it so that he became the twisted Master. I don't know how that would work but maybe a guy is brainwashed and the guy didn't realised how twisted the guy was he was brainwashing. He made a nasty top without realising
1/25/18, 5:55 PM
Such... originality :-)
Anonymous
1/25/18, 4:07 PM
Wow...truly awesome...each chapter was spectacular...thank you
Anonymous
1/25/18, 12:08 PM
Wait, I thought Carlos was supposed to have control of Troy as Nathan promised, not the other way around? Still, a fantastic end to the story! Shame there is nothing more....Though, I am curious as to *how* they "convinced" the *entire* police dept that Troy was a different Troy, with specifically Carlos and Nathan's help.... Maybe a new story series?
Anonymous
1/25/18, 5:38 AM
Seems like a departure from ChaoticDjinn style, but nevertheless good
Anonymous
1/25/18, 2:10 AM
Terrific
1/24/18, 11:39 PM
I bursted on a big laughter the moment I read Jim shouting "You’re cheating on me?!" !! You know how to play with the audience and it shows. There are some nice winks to the people behind the 4th wall here and there. Such a delight to read! The cheap porn movie atmosphere is so authentic! It's got everything: The overly complicated sex scenes, the cheesy lines, the skimpy clothes... All with mostly straight men who are completely unaware of what's going on. I'll be eagerly waiting for the next installment of this brilliant story!
Anonymous
1/24/18, 7:59 PM
Great story!!! Loved it!!!
Anonymous
1/24/18, 7:58 PM
So freaking hot!! Damn!!!!
yagtaluda
1/24/18, 6:23 PM
Yummy! :)