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Pedro888
9/12/23, 12:47 AM
Wish this was longer!! Fck love this story
9/11/23, 11:43 PM
so Theo will become a bodyguard for whoever buys Ezra, but I'm curious about Vox
9/11/23, 11:41 PM
I liked chapter 1, especially the moment of what Paul received for his betrayal).
9/11/23, 11:30 PM
No worries. Do what feels comfortable to you.
Martin
9/11/23, 8:30 PM
You're 5 years younger than me. I wish I had the revelation you had at the age of 29. Even though I lost my virginity way earlier than you, I had to grow way older to find my kinky side. And even to this day, I very rarely get to live it properly. This is an amazing story and I love where this is going ... reading the next chapter right away!

9/11/23, 10:37 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Better late than never right? And I think you've more than made up for it has you're the owner of site that deals in kinky fantasies.
Anonymous
9/11/23, 9:52 PM
Your work on symbiotes is amazing , I just which there was more hair

9/11/23, 10:36 PM
@Anonymous I know what you mean regarding hair. I either want completely hairless, or the opposite with werewolf-like body. Honestly, nothing beats a man with a chest of pure fur. He can be bald on top as long as his entire body covered in hair. So hot!
9/6/23, 9:05 PM
Excellent writing as always! Jason is a treasure and needs to be protected and Booker is sweet as well. I maintain that Greek should lead them all (especially since they are all getting too horny to function). I hate Lewis, but damn his dirty talk his great. If we're on the theme of Greek mythology, he seems like a great fit for hubris and its consequences. From his first faild attempt it seems like he is jealous of the jock physique and then he moved to steal some of Jace's magic. If he won't be cautious he might just get what he wanted. I like the reality changing chaos. However, and this is a matter of taste alone, I liked that the jock isn't on the wrestling team for a change and on athletic team instead, It was refreshing. But as I said, this is only my taste and nothing more. After you said they were growing from eating the fruit I was wondering if soon will no longer be the big guy in the house (I will be really up for that). And finally, the cherry on top, your literal mind breaking scenes. Theh are just *chef's kiss*. I hope there will be much more of those soon. I'm really really glad you're back. I've missed your writing :)

9/11/23, 9:31 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Thanks! I'm struggling to get into a good writing schedule, but I have a ton of stuff in drafts, so more to come.
9/11/23, 9:18 PM
Second chapter even hotter than the first, love him squirming through his exam…
9/11/23, 9:15 PM
I love this story so much. Pushes all my buttons
Joe
9/11/23, 8:13 PM
Keep the story going. Joe
Sep 10, 2023
9/11/23, 7:12 PM
It looks much better now!
Joe
9/11/23, 7:09 PM
Keep the story going its so hot. Joe
Joe
9/11/23, 7:08 PM
Keep the story going it's so hot. Joe
Anonymous
9/11/23, 5:52 PM
This is INSANELY hot
9/11/23, 4:19 PM
So happy to see this back buddy 🔥
Anonymous
9/11/23, 4:18 PM
Where is next parts of this amazing story sir.
9/11/23, 3:55 PM
Super hot. I hope some of the gooners come back for repeat treatments and follow ups.
2/5/23, 6:34 AM
I liked the story a lot just not the use of 'fag' at the end.

Anonymous
9/11/23, 1:45 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Yeah, same.

Wakeup
9/11/23, 1:57 PM
@Anonymous Just to acknowledge, i’ve taken this feedback on board. Some people are okay with the ‘reclamation’ of the word and some aren’t.
9/11/23, 6:35 AM
An incredible finale to peeking in on Charlie after he got the 'curse'. The fuckbuddy curse is awesome. It's both wholesome and holesome. I loved the changes you made to his friend group and how eagerly they all enjoyed realising how guys ought to be friends and held each other out. Super hot chapter. It's not easy with such a large group either! (A couple of name goofs but nothing an edit won't fix - I offer this to help not as a criticism. It was glorious!) > They all watched for a moment as Tom bobbed up and down on his own cock, moaning to himself. Tim, rather than Tom. (It was bound to happen.) > Charlie left his tent to find Tim, Tom, and Charlie naked around the camp in the morning light. Tom was the only one wearing anything, in just an apron as he heated up a stainless steel coffee pot on the portable grill, while Tim sucked his cock. Charlie was sitting ass up, waiting for someone to come by to fuck him. All but the first Charlie should be Aaron, I believe. Again, I hesitate to offer unsolicited editing feedback, but the story is so hot and such a great read I want to do my bit to make a smoother read for your followers. Can't wait to read more of your work.

9/11/23, 12:56 PM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Thank you! Edited and submitted to republish. I make these mistakes in scenes with 2 characters, so with 6... yeah, it was bound to happen. I really appreciate the notes, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
9/11/23, 12:36 PM
Nice story, nice plot twist. Cannot wait for the next chapter either.
9/11/23, 12:21 PM
I love this story so much, thank you
9/11/23, 10:10 AM
More.....lets get back into the chair!
skinpiss
9/11/23, 8:59 AM
excellent wanking story, fuckin hot. Malskin a brilliant author. could have helped with that fuckin German. Still looking for that quarter in Berlin.
Richard "Rocho" Wheeler
9/11/23, 8:47 AM
Your stories are normally very HOT and sexually stimulating! I think you definitely missed the boat in this 9ne. Very full quite boring. I know you have it in you to do better. Soo much BETTER!!! LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT GREAT STORY! THANK YOU FOR YOUR EROTIC STORIES!!! I DO APPRECIATE YOUR ATTEMPT HERE. HAVE A GREAT DAY!!
9/11/23, 8:37 AM
Another one falls. I love the references to previous stories, like the frat house. It would be so easy to get repetitive that anyone affected just can't think of anything but gooning now, but you've taken it a step further and I really appreciate it. There are layers being added and it is impressive. They love their gooning, always leaking and needing to try to hide it. But the afflicted also have another purpose. Helping other guys experience the stench and lose themselves to their cocks too. As Zeke demonstrated, then they can team up and really keep each other going for hours.
Sep 10, 2023
9/11/23, 7:35 AM
Being bald and bearded, I fully support this story 👍😁
9/11/23, 7:11 AM
i love stories in which the Dominant seduces a submissive into giving up more and more control until there is no more to give up. Using the natural hormones of the Dominant as an addictive drug is a hot means to coerce the submissive without his quite realizing what was happening. The pace of seduction was really nicely handled. Stephen did provide a nice possibility to rescue Ethan which kept us wondering. (Actually i am still wondering about Stephen. It did seem like his character has been left as a loose end.
Ben
9/11/23, 6:30 AM
This was hot 🔥
9/10/23, 9:48 PM
Hot stuff as always! Nice pace as Chester is discovering his powers along the way, feeling himself more empowered and becoming more corrupted in it. Eager to see how things will go throughout the week! I'd certainly love a change in dress code in the office for the males, and see what changes in behaviours and hierarchies Chester will bring to the men in the office. :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye: One question though, you mentioned: _"Just two weeks ago, Jason had suddenly decided he needed a different job._" But Chester only made his wish the night before, so is that a sort of backstory that the spell is putting into Bryan's and Jason's minds, or was there a confusion in the timeline?

9/10/23, 9:59 PM
@[tomozco](/user/show/13902) The magic being utilized is reality altering, so for Bryan/Jason, their lives were exactly how they were before the wish except two weeks prior to the wish where Jason suddenly had a desire to change careers. Reality alters in the past, present, and future to match the wishes...something you'll see MUCH more of 'Friday' of Chester's week :P

9/11/23, 6:27 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Noted. That's what I thought to be too. It's just that it wasn't stated in Chester's wish so I didn't expect that their thoughts would retro back to a time before the wish was made. But that makes sense too. I'll stay tuned for the upcoming episodes of Chester's week as they roll out then :wink:
9/10/23, 8:24 PM
I haven't checked in to the site for a while, and what a pleasant surprise to find a new story from Edlam again! I remember the previous version...curious to see how you would reinvent the plot. Liking the start so far, definitely a much more developed storyline to get things going in Edlam's iconic dark and perverse fashion! Looking forward to see how dark, deep and out of control the world will go with Chester's corrupted mind. :wink:

9/10/23, 9:34 PM
@[tomozco](/user/show/13902) Thank you, friend! I'm hoping you get the writing bug back again sometime soon. You have such classics on the site...and I'm always excited to see the masculine feet dangling in your profile pic lol :tongue:

9/11/23, 6:24 AM
@[EdIam](/user/show/17145) Cheers sir! I did started picking up some writing again recently, though it's been slow but I'm not giving it up yet! Glad to have your compliment...you inspire me quite a bit I'd say, so I hope to see more from you as well! :wink: Cool to hear my feet excite you...haha :grin: