Recent Comments

Jun 27, 2018
corinthian
6/28/18, 5:13 PM
Such a good story - many thanks!
Jun 27, 2018
Anonymous
6/28/18, 4:38 PM
Goodnight*
HeroLuver
6/28/18, 8:20 AM
Unfortunately there are always going to be a few impatient people out there. Just keep writing at your own pace and take your time to tell YOUR story. And THANKS for sharing it with the rest of us, Clown Boi.
Jun 27, 2018
Anonymous
6/28/18, 8:16 AM
Hotttt thank u It was also funny, especially the goodbye kiss U should make more of such role reversal... i think it is called
Jun 27, 2018
Anonymous
6/28/18, 6:16 AM
A shame Baldur didn't do more, but lovely story nonetheless. XD
Oink
6/28/18, 4:05 AM
Hot as fuck. I agree with dirtyrawhungfl. Love unwipwd mussy. Oink
Clownboi
6/28/18, 2:44 AM
Guys I’m gonna be frank I have a huge workload. So going forward I’m not going to guarantee when I release a story. I don’t want to be hounded if it’s 10 days rather than a week. I have one day a week to do this plus other things. It was meant to be for leisure. I really appreciate all the positive comments and will be continuing at my own pace rather than release something that time and effort has not went into. Thanks for all your support. And as a spoiler after Tarzan chapter the dynamic duo go through a very big change :) I like to think what happens to Captain America is probably going to be very popular. Second of course to superman’s final fate. As a spoiler I’ll say all the ex heroes are contributing to superman’s demise ;)
Jun 27, 2018
Anonymous
6/28/18, 2:39 AM
Very hot. Thanks for writing.
Jun 26, 2018
Sanchezinc
6/28/18, 2:38 AM
I liked it, yes it could use some proofreading. But not that hard to follow. Wish a bit more of his life after dumbing down would be mentioned. Maybe for a sequel?
D
6/28/18, 2:27 AM
Hot bro. If Jonas gets aware again I bet the other guys will be able to fuck it outta him
Ultram0th
6/28/18, 2:21 AM
I love that snippet of awareness that you have Jonas. That was my fave part
Jun 27, 2018
Anonymous
6/28/18, 12:36 AM
So fucking hot !!!
Jun 27, 2018
Anonymous
6/27/18, 10:57 PM
Thank you for your feedback
jacobstone1980@gmailcom
6/27/18, 10:44 PM
youdmind123 can you email me
Jun 27, 2018
Swizzington
6/27/18, 9:53 PM
I'm always in support of more school-based stories :-) Of course, that may not be Tkhon's area of interest.
Randy
6/27/18, 9:39 PM
Muscle tits not rots lol
Randy
6/27/18, 9:39 PM
I love this series! Especially the guys with bloated muscle rots and big asses. Great job!
HeroLuver
6/27/18, 9:03 PM
Good point. You would think the writers would notice how big this story is going over, realize there is obviously an audience for superheroes and villains out there, and would want to take a crack at it too. Especially when another superhero story would help fill the void in-between chapters of "The RingMaster" and allow Clown Boi to take his time telling his story without people hounding him for the next chapter.
Apr 18, 2018
6/27/18, 8:47 PM
Shows how strong the training and mind control the Masters have over the three slaves. Well written.
Chris Conners
6/27/18, 7:52 PM
"101 comments for the first three chapters? Over 50 for this chapter alone! Is that some kind of a record? Anybody know?" Personally, I expected a sudden barrage of superhero stories here since "The Ringmaster" is getting such a big reaction. But, so far, not even a ripple. Kind of surprising no one has even tried.
bimarguy
6/27/18, 7:39 PM
Yes please keep this going if you can .hope you have plans to see Phil give Greg what he wishes for ,with some help from Conrad
Anonymous
6/27/18, 7:28 PM
Your writing is horrible.
Jun 27, 2018
Anonymous
6/27/18, 7:23 PM
I like the 2 above
Jun 27, 2018
Anonymous
6/27/18, 6:57 PM
Or how about all boys school where the students teach their teachers and an elite group of seniors seniors secretly control the school
Jun 27, 2018
Anonymous
6/27/18, 6:33 PM
Do a military one with prisoners of war
Jun 27, 2018
Anonymous
6/27/18, 6:29 PM
this could became a nice series
Anonymous
6/27/18, 5:54 PM
Werewolf porn! I am down!
Jun 27, 2018
Bibimbap
6/27/18, 5:52 PM
Hey, Tkhon, this story is so fucking hot! Thanks a lot for it. What I like the most is how Ashton ridicules officer Conner in front of other prisoners, and how proudly and shamelessly Conner debases himself as if it was normal for cops being so pervert. It was a great touch make him realise that something was horribly wrong near the ending. The cop slogan ‘To serve and get fucked’ had a great effect on me! The whole story is very erotic, I hope you make another story involving cops in the future.
M
6/27/18, 5:12 PM
Such a hot story. Another incredible chapter, so erotic that it had me hard thru the reading. I hope you keep on writing it!
Sep 13, 2013
MasterJerker
6/27/18, 4:41 PM
It's a real crime that nobody commented on this, wonderful and hot story, really REALLY dig the idea of the snake like creatures. I'd certainly be intrigued to see what plans there are for both the quad and the humans.