Recent Comments

Anonymous
7/4/18, 11:17 AM
Hopefully u can post it soon! Been too long since We've got a good Edlam fix
Anonymous
7/4/18, 5:42 AM
Loved it! Would love to see the Captain infect his sons, maybe even do a school presentation? Or they all go back to infect families, friends, neighbours, in-laws?
7/4/18, 3:55 AM
OOF! Very hot, very well done!
Anonymous
7/4/18, 3:49 AM
Update soon please
Anonymous
7/4/18, 3:25 AM
Great work!!! Loved it!!!
Anonymous
7/4/18, 3:25 AM
Great story!!! Loved it!!!
Anonymous
7/4/18, 2:36 AM
This was hot, well written and sweet. I love it when everyone wins
7/4/18, 12:12 AM
Thanks. I got it working! I made some small edits.
LongtimeFan
7/4/18, 12:01 AM
Great story! Love the gradual dumbing down. And at last we disagree, Hypnothrill—I very much enjoy some of the guys shown. They add to the fantasy. ;p
Cooper
7/3/18, 10:52 PM
Will you be adding anymore parts to this story. Please say yes, it’s so fucking good. I feel like it needs more.
7/3/18, 9:47 PM
Opps. For some reason, my last comment showed up as "posted by Martin". Really sorry that happened for some odd reason. But I changed my account profile name now. I tried to clear the cache and also reload the page, but it doesn't seem to work. It would send me to the page, "Oh! Either you are trying to find a page that no longer exists, or an error has occurred. Either way, try going to the Home Page and starting over?"
Martin
7/3/18, 9:32 PM
Oh, I just used a different acronyms, because the first acronym was no longer possible. It needed more than 3 characters. The original was "S." which standed for Submissive, but I changed it to "G.B." in order to satisfy the requirement to post a story.. I will try to clear my cache and reload. I do get stats and ratings.
Martin
7/3/18, 9:00 PM
@G.B. First of all, the "author name" in your account doesn't match the name you used here. If you're logged in, you should be able to edit your story just fine. If you get an error, please clear your browser cache or force a reload of the page when your story is displayed. Do you get the reading stats and ratings statistics displayed on your story?
7/3/18, 8:39 PM
Great stoyr! BTW, the link to the "sexy butler outfit" in the middle of the story is broken...it's missing the final "g" in ".jpg".
Anonymous
7/3/18, 8:33 PM
Great story Thanks
Anonymous
7/3/18, 7:33 PM
Awesome work
Hunter_C_Wolf@Hotmail.Com
7/3/18, 7:16 PM
Where can I buy those speedos? There are links to pictures, there should be product links as well :)
7/3/18, 7:01 PM
@commentor before me Yeah, it was just a spark of inspiration, though I do agree it could have been much longer. I think I might add some transitional time phrases, like "After a few minutes or The next day..." and make the story longer in general. I think my biggest weakness is trying to describe characters and actions more descriptively, and even describe the environment more. I might challenge myself to write a part 2, and take more time constructing the story. Also I can't edit my story, because I made a few grammatical errors, but whenever I tried to edit the story, it fails. Does anyone know how to fix this problem?
Anonymous
7/3/18, 6:42 PM
Make them wear use diapers
Anonymous
7/3/18, 6:40 PM
It might just be me but this seems a bit short and abrupt. The description given though sounds like a neat idea
Jim valen
7/3/18, 4:32 PM
I like how the father and son started to spin the relationship based on the suggestion. So fucking hot. As an avid cock sucker I enjoy the oral aspects the most. I know health issues make writing difficult. I hope it works out well.
Anonymous
7/3/18, 3:15 PM
Please update soon
Anonymous
7/3/18, 3:04 PM
Terrific
Anonymous
7/3/18, 2:30 PM
This story hit all my buttons. I loved it! Hot and well-written.
Anonymous
7/3/18, 2:30 PM
This was a great story!! I almost never look at the pics because my fertile imagination produces much better product than any photo lifted from the web. There was a gradual transformation, very subtle, but it's there.
7/3/18, 12:33 PM
By the way, the writing itself is really good, although I would have loved to gotten more descriptions of Trent's gradual mental transformation as he grows to love the speedos (and the big dicks inside of them).
7/3/18, 12:29 PM
It's my own fault for clicking on the links, but I find that the pictures actually subtract from my enjoyment of the story. The guys are never as hot as I imagined (and those black speedos barely show a bulge).
Anonymous
7/3/18, 11:46 AM
Great story!!! Hope there will be a part to or remake!!
Anonymous
7/3/18, 8:22 AM
Great story. Any chances the next story takes down a jock? Turn him fat and give him a small cock. 😝
Anonymous
7/3/18, 6:49 AM
Really? I'm still waiting ....