Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/14/18, 3:32 PM
And like the original Star Chamber ... the corruption sets in when it's used for personal benefit ...
Anonymous
8/14/18, 3:16 PM
I want Anthony to win -- by choosing to join to be with Cameron. But there's not a lot of strong setup for that. Do we know who "Master" is -- I don't recall -- but if he's the editor then it would be perfect and hilarious. Of course if he's a Boss, then Cameron and Anthony are also good choices for his PA and PB
Mark
8/14/18, 3:03 PM
Sorry. I didn’t enjoy the ending
Aug 12, 2018
Anonymous
8/14/18, 2:57 PM
Damn this was hot!!
Martin
8/14/18, 2:41 PM
Thank you, Nnnrg. I'm totally with you and I appreciate your comment.
Anonymous
8/14/18, 2:30 PM
Please continue
Nnnrg
8/14/18, 2:23 PM
This was better than some native speakers' first tries at posting a story in English. All it needs is a little editing for word choice and idiom. If the English is "too bad to read" or you would "like to kill" yourself then please, go find somewhere else to read and stop harassing and insulting someone who actually wrote a decent story, just because you're too bad at English to understand and adjust for the differences in the way things are phrased.
Anonymous
8/14/18, 11:55 AM
Awesome writing. Very hot.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
8/14/18, 10:49 AM
I like the Ideia of having the good and bad ending, so we can pick the one we like the most
anybodys
8/14/18, 6:26 AM
Great addition. Love the attention to detail, love the kink.
Jul 25, 2014
Martin
8/14/18, 6:16 AM
Lovely! You should start to write more again, z119z!
Anonymous
8/14/18, 6:13 AM
I like the story just wish either the mind loss was less extreme or at least nonexistent for gays
Daniel
8/14/18, 4:38 AM
Would love to see what you could do with straight to gay hypno, alien substance posessing human beings ( rednecks, cops, powerful businessmen ) good job dude! I. J. S.
Daniel
8/14/18, 4:14 AM
Getting reallyhot- on to #3 I.J.S.
Daniel
8/14/18, 3:50 AM
Love gay Syfy, can't wait to see where it's going...I. J. S.
bleuboy
8/14/18, 3:43 AM
Thanks for the responses everyone! I actually find myself wanting Anthony to win as well (despite me being the one actually writing lol) but I kind of want to experiment with a good end and a bad end. Anthony Wake is an investigative journalist. He must have SOME sort of a failsafe...right? ;)
LongtimeFan
8/14/18, 3:25 AM
I love this series, Willie! And your attention to historical detail is incredible. Your ability to write across eras and cultures is truly remarkable!
LongtimeFan
8/14/18, 3:18 AM
I love this series so much! :D The early stories were super hot one-shots, but this tale (while still full of sexy images...mmm, those bubbling, bulging butts and growing muscles...and so dim...) is suspenseful and exciting, too. I hope Anthony wins as well, or at least gets SOME of the truth out—part of the problem with an excellently-written story like this is that I start actively rooting for the good guys instead of seeing them as targets, especially when the author gets other loved ones involved (this is just what happened with “How To Be a Good Boy!”). The curse of skilled writing, I expect. :p But however it ends, I’ll be reading it!
Anonymous
8/14/18, 3:07 AM
Great story!!! Loved it!!!
Anonymous
8/14/18, 2:33 AM
Please continue soon, ultra hot, love it
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
8/14/18, 2:00 AM
no it's not, but knowing this website, it's not going to happen
Anonymous
8/14/18, 1:44 AM
Great work!
Anonymous
8/14/18, 1:17 AM
Super hot story!! I love it, especially the straight to gay aspect. I can't wait to see the end. I only wish there were more detailed scenes of actual sex. Yes, the messaging and masturbation is a hot read, but further detailed sex scenes between some of the characters would also be amazing.
Anonymous
8/13/18, 11:09 PM
Is it bad that I still wish Anthony to win?
Anonymous
8/13/18, 10:54 PM
It was great. Good amount if sex and mind control. I think a very fitting ironic death for Greg is that Liberty uses his new body's stamina and strength to force Greg to have sex with him, until Greg is dead from dehydration and exhaustion. Phil would die by falling into the drone making machine leaving him to be a parody of his former creations Just some ideas I had.
Redbird
8/13/18, 10:33 PM
Wonderful. Very seductive, attention grabbing, well written. I was fully erect the whole time reading
8/13/18, 9:50 PM
Nice! Super sexy as well.
Anonymous
8/13/18, 9:34 PM
I thought it was great! Would love to see you write more stories!
Aug 12, 2018
Anonymous
8/13/18, 8:41 PM
Boomer has got to be short for "Baby Boomer"
Anonymous
8/13/18, 6:46 PM
Interesting mix of history and sex. Wonder if any of this is true?