Recent Comments

9/24/18, 6:46 AM
Amazing work! I can't wait to see them change again!
9/24/18, 6:34 AM
I'd say you were generous to the gay basher. Once a day isn't too bad. If he's not propositioned he is his normal albeit kinder self It's a great ending!
Daniel
9/24/18, 4:51 AM
Great set-up, lame pay-off I.J.S.
Daniel
9/24/18, 4:34 AM
Let's see what'S next....I.J.S.
9/24/18, 4:08 AM
AUTHOR'S NOTE: for everyone's enjoyment, please try not to post spoilers in the comments after each chapter. Hope you find the story to be a fun ride. Thanks!
Daniel
9/24/18, 3:51 AM
A lot of 'prep' where's this going? I.J.S.
Daniel
9/24/18, 3:43 AM
Looking forward to something nasty! I?J?S?
Derek Williams
9/24/18, 1:16 AM
Nice, didn't figure we'd get another chapter with that tf - cool! Sent you an email tho, cuz I got a guess about spoilers.
Anonymous
9/24/18, 12:14 AM
very good plot, but cannot wait to see what the next chapter has to offer for the next tf
Martin
9/23/18, 9:25 PM
Wow... this was just so incredible hot...
9/23/18, 8:06 PM
I appreciate the nice feedback. If I could ask a favor, please try not to post comments or speculation that might be regarded as spoilers, at least until the whole story has been posted. Thanks! CK
Anonymous
9/23/18, 7:04 PM
no complaints about the 2nd person POV. I actually like it.....it's a change of pace. Regardles of what POV you choose to use, you work is always fantastic and well crafted and written. You rank as one my top authors on here.
Aug 13, 2005
Anonymous
9/23/18, 7:04 PM
keep going!!!
Anonymous
9/23/18, 6:56 PM
Very well written, funny and interesting! Great premise=magic drinks on your honeymoon!
tomozco
9/23/18, 5:52 PM
ForgottenCradle, thanks for your suggestion! I do already have a general idea of the plots for the next parts, and cops are one of the plots that I intend to write on!
Daniel
9/23/18, 5:10 PM
HYPNO, BIKER, CORRUPTION...A+ dude- wank material for sure...I.J.S.
9/23/18, 4:19 PM
A cliff hanger worthy of Victor Hugo! You've got such a vivid imagination! This is turning out to be a wonderful story - I'm not sure any sexual activity can counteract the narrative. Great going, and looking forward to more!
ForgottenCradle
9/23/18, 4:03 PM
That was a really great story. I love these oblivious stories. Say,will there be more? I mean,Ed basicly told us some scenarios. This story has so much potential
Thegreatstoryteller
9/23/18, 3:37 PM
ah! Always leaving us on a cliff hanger! brilliant job with this story though. love where its going
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
9/23/18, 3:26 PM
Excellent story and excellent conclusion. We enjoy your stories... its ok if some don't get as much traction as others... just write what you love and we fans will follow along Being Good Boys.
Daniel- hypno, bikers and corruption- these are a few of mmy favorite things...great job dude I.J.S.
9/23/18, 2:58 PM
SEE ABOVE, SORRY I.J.S.
Anonymous
9/23/18, 12:30 PM
i wish those urinals were real mmmmmhhh
Anonymous
9/23/18, 12:11 PM
Wow wow and wow! I came like twice from reading this!
Jul 24, 2018
David Cuir
9/23/18, 12:08 PM
Congratulations and kudos on a most excellent story! This one pushed so many of my erotic "buttons,"/ turn-ons, it's just not even funny! Clearly, I need to go to this piercing parlor and have my nips re-pierced! I had to remove my 4 gauge rings several years ago, because my body was rejecting them. THANK YOU for this amazing hot story! One of my top three favorite TF stories, as of this first reading! ;-)
Anonymous
9/23/18, 8:52 AM
This was great. Please keep doing these adaptations!
9/23/18, 8:00 AM
Nice work! Particularly liked Ed having the straight guys picking out their own sexy outfits, even if they do need some feedback to get it right. Well done!
9/23/18, 7:42 AM
Awesome arousing story! I happily await more of it.
Anonymous
9/23/18, 7:35 AM
been waiting for this to appear. it did not disappoint. thanks for the installment!
9/23/18, 6:10 AM
Wonderful ending! I kept wondering if you were going to repeat the ending that appeared in "Satyr in the Woods" which I thought was so hot. But you outdid yourself and have a very lovely ending where Jeremy is overcome with ecstacy. So very beautiful. It's a coming out story - just that as he realizes he's gay, he's transformed. Love the descriptions which are so vivid. You're a wonderful writer and not only do I thank you for what you've written but I look forward to more of your work!
Anonymous
9/23/18, 6:10 AM
Nice thanks for the chapter