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screamingmoist
1/15/19, 2:19 PM
Glad to hear people enjoyed this one. I left it open ended so that there was room to grow, either with Steve being used as a warning for someone else or revisiting him specifically down the road. Regarding an earlier comment - I have no idea what SPH stands for?
1/15/19, 12:44 PM
Great story! I'd love to see Darryl and Evan recruit some of their best-looking bros for Jamie's harem.
1/15/19, 11:38 AM
You don't have to wait a whole month. Just two weeks until the next update. ;)
Anonymous
1/15/19, 11:21 AM
Absolutely incredible. When you had the brothers staring into each others eyes and further hypnotizing each other it was a complete fantasy come true
malskin
1/15/19, 10:47 AM
enjoyed reading this - thanks i wonder if the 2 fathers are no longer exclusive to their wives just jocks looking for boobs etc
Anonymous
1/15/19, 10:36 AM
Love this story! Humiliation and underwear are two of my favorite fetishes. Would love to see more!
1/15/19, 10:20 AM
"Straight"...riiiiight!
JR
1/15/19, 9:56 AM
Great story I hope theres a second part, it feels unfinished
Jan 13, 2019
Craig
1/15/19, 9:36 AM
Great story Mal..hypnoskins are hot!
Bibimbap
1/15/19, 8:39 AM
Hi! I was anxiously waiting for this chapter. I must be honest, it was not the hottest, but I like it because it advances in the plot... which is great, because I much prefer a hot plot as a whole than just a bunch of sex scenes together. Now I know that the upcoming chapters will be super hot! the best part for me is the change both in Corey and Castor, how they begin to giggle, how they become slowly dumber, and how they start to think debasing things about themselves... it was so short, but so promising! it will be hard to wait for the next month (I'm broken right now, sadly, but I'd love to be one of your patreons!) best regards!
1/15/19, 8:33 AM
I like this story and it excites more and more, but it would be better if the victims do not forget what you did to them, but you could just force them not to say anything to anyone so as not to create problems.
degoetz@yahoo.com
1/15/19, 8:11 AM
Loved it. This site needs more dramatic physical TF. :)
1/15/19, 7:33 AM
@Heru Kane: And you said you didn't want to read any gay-to-straight stories!
Anonymous
1/15/19, 7:12 AM
it was surprisingly skillful to turn this controversy into another solid dumb jock transformation story.
1/15/19, 7:10 AM
I really found the calls and such changes pretty hot. It's a great concept.
1/15/19, 7:07 AM
This is a pretty sexy story, especially what happens to the fathers. Though I must admit to be sad at the way the two gay guys lost their sweetness.
Jan 15, 2019
1/15/19, 7:05 AM
This is a well written story. So thumbs up to you for it.
Martin
1/15/19, 6:52 AM
I love the story, especially in the light of the recent controversy of course. Still, it's almost as painfull for me to read how these two sweet, cute, sensible, emoathic boys are turned into single minded, red-blooded, testosterone driven, muscle jock boys... I guess this type of man is just not my thing. Still, thank you for that marvellous story!
Anonymous
1/15/19, 6:35 AM
I found the subject matter distasteful (I accept that I may not be the target readership) but was more annoyed by the quality of the writing. Lots of typos like "like it being drained from his head", "once it the shirt white" and "made a kiss on Ryan" among others. Far too many run-on sentences. It's not against the law to use a full-stop once in a while. Using commas instead of full-stops doesn't work. Other issues include random words capitalized in the middle of a sentence.
Jan 5, 2019
sw904513@gmail.com
1/15/19, 5:49 AM
cool story what happened on deviantart why did you stop posting>
Anonymous
1/15/19, 5:23 AM
Very smart lol
1/15/19, 5:21 AM
Hahahahahahahahahshahahahahahahahaha
Willie Cici
1/15/19, 4:38 AM
Kudos to you for your ingenuity and your incredibly well-written story. I read everything you write. This was a pleasure, especially in light of recent postings.
Anonymous
1/15/19, 4:32 AM
That was incredible. Loved it. Great.
1/15/19, 4:30 AM
That's an awesome, pretty unique take on the gay to straight kink! :3. I love it
1/15/19, 4:27 AM
This is a very clever story indeed and extremely hot - thank you for writing it.
Jan 13, 2019
RynSmkr
1/15/19, 4:06 AM
Mal Great to see another story from you ... it's been awhile.
Anonymous
1/15/19, 3:58 AM
awesome piece! i love the anonymity of the person who is causing the changes
blankbot
1/15/19, 3:55 AM
I love this series...
1/15/19, 2:55 AM
While we're in the middle of a plot line, allow me to compliment you on your interesting technique of shifting point of views. You have it in this story, but you are placing a sectional line in between the multiple narratives which makes it very easy for the reader. In Belial's Legacy (which is probably my favorite of your stories) you didn't have such a line. I remember trying to sort out the voices in the beginning as you shift back and forth between Belial and Adventis. Once I became used to it I recognize it in all of your stories - sometimes more intense, sometimes less so. It's a very cinematic technique (of immediately cutting to a different voice or perspective) but it has a nice effect in writing. I'm looking forward to see what you do here.