Recent Comments

Anonymous
2/6/19, 9:53 PM
Interesting start
Anonymous
2/6/19, 9:04 PM
Excellent work Great story Thanks
Tass
2/6/19, 8:24 PM
great, like the plot of race change. Throw in some piercings and tattoos as well.
Anonymous
2/6/19, 8:18 PM
great story, kept me erect all the time and I cum twice as well.
Anonymous
2/6/19, 7:29 PM
I LOVE the premise! Can't wait to continue
2/6/19, 6:51 PM
Cigarboy Cody, you're right: it is a bit like Invaders from Mars. I even thought about categorizing this one as an "Alien" story, but as you'll see, that's not entirely accurate.
UchihaDEMS
2/6/19, 6:49 PM
It's on the way, courtesy of TheWanderer~
KKA
2/6/19, 6:35 PM
thank you all for your comments. I APPRECIATE THEM SO MUCH. @ricknotic i really really appreciated your constructive comments and i made some changes hoping my little fic can be more easily enjoyed. I tend to write these in a hurry and i dont often have friends I can share with or proofread my work.
Cigarboy Cody
2/6/19, 6:04 PM
Love, love, love the start!! The premise reminds me of the old sci-fi movie" Invaders from Mars. Only Alex has his brother's strange behavior to go on that something isn't quite right
Anonymous
2/6/19, 5:09 PM
that's amazing!
Martin
2/6/19, 4:53 PM
I *love* this.... I just want to be that boy!
KB
2/6/19, 4:52 PM
I like this series
LongtimeFan
2/6/19, 4:36 PM
A Cici classic--hot guys, hotter transformation, and steamy sex. Fantastic! P.S. These are some of the hottest images you've ever used...the manager in particular got me going.
LongtimeFan
2/6/19, 4:31 PM
Another amazing installment! The image of a squadron of buff, blissed-out surfer dudes...mmm, mmm. :D
Anonymous
2/6/19, 3:39 PM
It's the obliviousness that makes me hard. Great story! Loved it!!!
Anonymous
2/6/19, 3:38 PM
Good start!! Let's see how this moves along.
Anonymous
2/6/19, 3:36 PM
Loving it :)
Anonymous
2/6/19, 3:31 PM
Good start!!!!
Willie Cici
2/6/19, 3:27 PM
Love reading your stories! The twists, the developments. Sexy, hot!! Keep going!!!
Anonymous
2/6/19, 3:19 PM
When I clicked on the pics, I realized the inspiration for the story. Clever! Hot story!!
Anonymous
2/6/19, 3:16 PM
things are getting creepier and i'm happy with it.
Anonymous
2/6/19, 3:08 PM
I'm excited to see some family get together.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
2/6/19, 2:18 PM
I know the feeling, I'm writing a novella and I'm stuck at chapter 4
2/6/19, 2:16 PM
joaopomilio, I'd like to know that too, LOL! I keep meaning to return to that one, because I have it all plotted out. I just haven't felt inspired lately.
2/6/19, 2:14 PM
A nice start although very fast paced.
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
2/6/19, 2:14 PM
this one has potential to became a great series, so continue please
joaopomilio@hotmail.com
2/6/19, 2:10 PM
I don't mean to demand but I would like to know when will the other series (the one about british television) will be updated?
2/6/19, 2:00 PM
Gotta love a good speedo story! It would be hot if some of Jesse's friends or family members came looking for him at the motel...
TimNJ
2/6/19, 1:57 PM
Beyond hot, I was hard the entire time reading it - and I had previously read that original story on MCStories wishing for gay content! This is like a dream come true lol. Please write a sequel!
Zelles
2/6/19, 12:10 PM
good writer, I need the next chapter!!!