Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/20/19, 2:24 PM
Love it! I've been following your work over on Nifty ever since Curse Breaker, so it's fantastic to see you here on Spiral!
3/20/19, 11:54 AM
@MeddlerIncs I hear that more than you think! Okay, first, thank you -- I'm incredibly flattered, super-glad my stuff gets you off -- and more, to be in the same sentence as FanTCdude is high praise. FanTCdude has been my "go to guy" when I need to get off for years. His work is both well-written and effective. I made friends with a bodybuilder on IG recently who was like, "you're THAT Absman420?" and he immediately cited this story, not just knew it, but knew it intimately! (He fancied himself a "Little Budd") That to me is the most amazing kind of coincidence! I can't tell you how happy it makes me. I don't get to brag about these stories in "real life" so whenever I meet someone and discover they've read them -- it's really amazing. And it happens more often than you would think.
Anonymous
3/20/19, 9:31 AM
please please please next chapter!
Max
3/20/19, 8:41 AM
This is an amazing story - two suggestions: 1) since you said you wanted to change up the chapters, maybe focus one chapter on how a ruffian starts to feel better about himself AS he changes - maybe he has memories of his former identity but his thinking changes and he realizes being a clean cut prep is much better for his self-esteem, attitude, life, etc! 2) maybe focus a chapter on haircut (and shaving) -- and how different the boy looks as his hair is cut shorter, combed - and his facial hair (if he has some) is shaved off -- does it open up his face more, make him look older vs younger? etc. very hot ;)
Martin
3/20/19, 7:39 AM
To add to UchihaDEMS' comment: The series (as listed on the main page) will always inherit the tags from all stories combined.
Anonymous
3/20/19, 4:34 AM
This was so hot! Please make more
Anonymous
3/20/19, 4:07 AM
This was so hot! Please make more
ember
3/20/19, 4:02 AM
this was glorious. super hype to see where this one goes!
3/20/19, 3:37 AM
This is a hot story, but I think it would have been a lot hotter if we'd gotten more detail about what's going on in Mason's head. Why is his first response to grab his camera and film this fuck-fest? Is he planning on blackmailing his teammates? Does he find it funny and he wants to tease them? Erotic and he plans to jerk off to the footage later? Disturbing and he plans to take the footage to the police? And then why does he suddenly join in the orgy? Again, it would be so hot if you depicted his attitude changing and his growing arousal as he got closer to the boys. But this is still a great start and I'm eager to see where it goes.
Anonymous
3/20/19, 3:15 AM
love it !
MeddlerIncs
3/20/19, 2:46 AM
An oldie but a goodie. I still jerk off to this story - and anything really you and FanTCdude written really. XD
UchihaDEMS
3/20/19, 2:10 AM
You have to tag only for the part wise, on the other one, you use the ones corresponding to that part...
Anonymous
3/20/19, 12:55 AM
could have used some more struggle on Billy's part against his changes. Hopefully a wrestling-jock bearified Isaac gets his way with the boi soon.
3/19/19, 10:30 PM
Golly, thanks everyone for liking (loving) it! It's nice to see so many taking joy in turning guys into preppies. I know I certainly love it myself! **Two of my favorites, skaters and preppies** Who better to preppify than skaters? Well... maybe emos. >:) But yah, I agree, skaters...mmmmm. **@ Prepboy18** Oh, he just might at that. After all, doesn't every young man need to be preppy? ;) **@ nerdysuitedbaby** Besides the fact that he *needed* that haircut (heh heh), there's a reason Freddy didn't acquire a bunch of new preppy togs right then and there. You'll find out why. And don't worry, you'll see Freddy in sweater vests and ties. He LOVES them. Given that Ricky's protests stayed internal, I didn't get to have Chad tormenting him, but this is a good idea and something similar would have shown up in what's to come. So hang tight... I just wanted to say that yes, I'll continue since y'all want it. But I don't want the chapters to just become rehashes. Yeah, sure, it's fun to force preppy onto a guy, but if the next one had just been another guy who "drinks the water" and we get to see him squirm as he's rewired into a good boy, it's going to be very much the same as this one. There's only so much "NOOO!! Don't DO this!!!" that you can write. Not that it can't still be fun, and not that it won't be included. I just think it runs the risk of being a formula with fill in the blanks for guys' names and for clothing & behavior acquisitions. So instead each chapter will have a different spin. But it will still be 100% about preppifying "ruffians". Hope that makes sense and hope that's okay. Thanks again!
Anonymous
3/19/19, 10:17 PM
a good start. I'm intrigued to see what happens next :)
Anonymous
3/19/19, 10:14 PM
can you continue, please?
Vicbiguy
3/19/19, 10:03 PM
Fuck Willy, I love your stories! The pics are always so hot too! Love to see a sequel to this one.
3/19/19, 9:36 PM
Sorry. I was tagging for the two-part series, not just _this_ part.
Anonymous
3/19/19, 9:33 PM
The tags on this story are misleading.
3/19/19, 5:09 PM
Love the idea and love the mind control technique. Would have preferred the guys have some general description, but I can imagine you wanted the reader to come up with their own guy. Probably would have preferred, from an erotica stand-point, that things go in a linear format (describe John fucking Mark in detail, then switch), but from a general writing stand-point it subverted expectations and brought humor to the story at the last minute. I like the overall writing style. Keep up the good work. :)
Anonymous
3/19/19, 1:46 PM
This was so hot! Please make more
Anonymous
3/19/19, 12:14 PM
There was a Leeches movie with Josh Henderson. I was picturing him the whole time
Oct 23, 2008
Anonymous
3/19/19, 11:55 AM
Thoroughly enjoyed. Would love to see how he could use Mark to get Vicenzio
Anonymous
3/19/19, 9:57 AM
fantastic, as always! can't wait to read more :)
nerdysuitedbaby
3/19/19, 8:44 AM
Love the story kind of wish he'd get a bowtie or necktie while he was still their and possibly a sweater vest and the haircut. Maybe even a little Chad talking directly to a helpless Ricky to torment. But hot damn I loved it!
Anonymous
3/19/19, 5:46 AM
A great story! Hope there's more to cum! :D
Prepboy18
3/19/19, 5:13 AM
Wouldn't it be keen if Fredrick took it upon himself to preplfy those uncouth ruffians he used to know. He knows that they need to be preppies. They need to be good boys What I am trying to say is MORE CHAPTERS!!
Anonymous
3/19/19, 4:14 AM
Huh.... Rubber Tentacle Dildo Alien.... Strangely enough, I'm okay with it....
thenakedginger@gmail.com
3/19/19, 4:03 AM
Really well done
Anonymous
3/19/19, 2:35 AM
Two of my favorites, skaters and preppies, in one story! More, please!