Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/15/19, 6:52 PM
I agree with Martin on this, particularly the last sentence. Plus, I love the story so far! Please continue writing!
No thank you!
5/15/19, 5:22 PM
nanadangerous stuff always has illegal content and i advise no one should read them. GROSS
topaz172@aol.com
5/15/19, 5:05 PM
TheD - so my gay-makeover powers work in real life BWA! Ha! HA! Not part of any plot... but I just thought this... Emperor: Oh, I'm afraid the Hypno-shield will be quite operational when your friends arrive. Prepare to witness the full power of this FULLY operational Fag-STAR! Ackbar: Its a TRAP ! Mmmm! Hello Sweety! Meanwhile if anyone has a specific gay archetype that needs a chapter please let me know (I keep thinking of ones I've missed)
Martin
5/15/19, 5:00 PM
Guys, please don't be so judgmental. This obsession that a story becomes unacceptable right away if a character is not at least 18 is something I simply can't understand. The US law, which makes it illegal to have sex with anyone below 18, is not shared in most other countries in the world. People below 18 DO have sex, all over the world, and even US teenagers are not unheard of getting laid... And, believe it or not, the US moral compass is not shared by most people on this world either. The rules for acceptable stories on this site are [spelled out here](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/newStory/create) Please read that and refrain from telling us, that reading about sex with a 16 year old is a big no-no while a story about someone hypnotizing an 18 year old to practically rape him against his will, seems to be totally ok for you.
Anonymous
5/15/19, 4:37 PM
I have no problem with this. Please continue!
5/15/19, 3:59 PM
i mean everyone is entitled to their opinions, but i the author should try to be more aware of these things. this is my first story and its not even entirely mine. so im here for suggestions.
Anonymous
5/15/19, 3:43 PM
I guess nonexistent minors have rights and feelings too, they could hurt themselves in this imaginary world and of course people would get offended
5/15/19, 3:42 PM
i totally hear yah, some of this was a result of the collab that happened. but i ran into the problem of needing a solid older younger sibling while still keeping them kinda young. so rich is 18 and tommy is 16 :/. really just trying to see if the core idea would play well.
GrowingGeek
5/15/19, 3:08 PM
I really enjoyed this, loved that sudden and unexpected realisation that he'd been transformed and loved it. In my opinion, I'd love to see more specifics on his size. How big is fat? We already know he wasn't lean, but how much bigger has he become? How does his extra weight feel? What knock on impacts does this make him think of? What would his family and friends think? etc - I love that extra detail and I think this would have taken a great story and made it excellent. Overall though a great job, well done!
Anonymous
5/15/19, 3:05 PM
one of my favorite stories here. hope you can write more.
Anonymous
5/15/19, 2:51 PM
premise is good but it's super uncomfortable that the characters are underage. can you not?
TheD
5/15/19, 2:34 PM
First off, I'm such a big fan of your work, all the way back to the Cupid Boy and Various Techniques stories. Your stories helped me acknowledge that I was gay. Second, this world you're building has SO much potential. Thank you for opening it to the community to contribute to it. Third, hit me up whenever you want at fueledboi@gmail.com to discuss story ideas or request nudes. That last bit is for everyone, I guess, but especially for you, Topaz172. I owe you so much.
Anonymous
5/15/19, 2:31 PM
Turks arent Arabs. They’re a separate cultural group with different customs, cultures, and languages
May 6, 2019
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
5/15/19, 2:25 PM
Great story (as always!). Less "hot" than some of your other works perhaps, but fun to read and very glad you shared it.
Cumluvnbottom@yahoo.com
5/15/19, 2:07 PM
Very well written! as others have pointed out, not every story has to be a wild sex romp. Noot that there’s anything wrong with those either of course!
Anonymous
5/15/19, 12:54 PM
This is a great story idea. It could easily be used for various types of gay stereotypes, not just twink.
May 10, 2019
Anonymous
5/15/19, 8:13 AM
Love this!!!!
david
5/15/19, 6:50 AM
@hyphap i completely understand and react similarly to many stories. However, in this case i assumed (perhaps naively, particularly given the story summary) overall good intentions by Henry for both of them for the long term. In my ignorant bliss, i assumed the best! (And Henry did make me feel so so good!) :)) Thanks again to Twan for his enticing stories.
Anonymous
5/15/19, 4:58 AM
Awesome story. How about an installment about the brother?
5/15/19, 12:09 AM
I always think of writing an alien milking story but never come up with a good idea. Yours was great. I loved the last choice they were allowed to make and the Navy SEAL personified the pained human decision very well.
david
5/14/19, 9:15 PM
OMG! This is so so hot!! Like the readers posting previous comments, i agree that the hottest part of the story is the use of pheromones, touch, and physical control along with a calming caring but very insistent commentary to be slowly mind-fucked and seduced. i would love to lose my virginity to Henry -- over and over and over again!! Thanks so much for this great story. i have to say too, that the comments from your readers seem pretty hot too. Ckabu, you can totally manipulate me anytime ;) slavethruhypno, would love to go for coffee sometime and hear about your favorite hypno masters.
5/14/19, 7:35 PM
You had excellent descriptions and a good idea and back story. Good job. :)
david
5/14/19, 5:23 PM
Good idea. Sexy visuals. Well written. Hot!! Unfortunately much too short for my preferences, without enough character development, relationship development, or the mental and physical details of Dane's take-down. Again, personally, i love getting the details of the seduction and take-down. Still, very hot and enjoyable. Thanks so much!
Rick
5/14/19, 3:58 PM
My 5th read of this hot story. Being ex military remember all those hot looking Jack's out there with their huge booted feet. Wishing I had the chance to indulge myself. Maybe in a future story have Jack working in a recruiting station with a few other soldiers. All looking sharp in their alpha dress uniforms, wearing those hard plastic corofram dress shoes, and their thin black dress socks.(Speaking from experience, those corofram dress shoes definitely make your feet sweat, and leave a nice heady aroma inside the shoe). Jack could be in the office talking to some hot high school jocks thinking about joining the military. Definitely a hypnogun opportunity there.
Anonymous
5/14/19, 2:15 PM
It's great to see another series from you, Topaz172. I enjoyed the idea and look forward to seeing how it comes out next. I am excited to watching myangel collect them all.
Anonymous
5/14/19, 1:39 PM
great stuff. I'm looking forward to reading the next installment
Anonymous
5/14/19, 11:13 AM
Very good, not enough quality milking stories
Jamie
5/14/19, 10:24 AM
dont u think some nerds would actually like to become a jock?? i mean... so far they all protest and whine but i can imagine some would love to become part of the system and become a happy mindless bro.
topaz172@aol.com
5/14/19, 8:55 AM
ulyssesgrant fair point... I'll have to write that one at some future point... on the plus side, you'll get a future chapter that does includes a guy who's been told that in order to bulk up and avoid olympic drug tests all he has to do is to take it up the ass..'just once' And I have yet to write the Gym Bunny episode
Anonymous
5/14/19, 7:47 AM
Yes please continue with this; keep coming back to it!