Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/28/19, 4:23 PM
I'm just curious whether it ends here or we could see more in the future. There's so much substance here to explore further. Great works!!
Anonymous
5/28/19, 2:39 PM
i always look forward to your story. i love this one
Anonymous
5/28/19, 1:17 PM
Still waiting for and looking forward to more... Where's the rest? You can't leave us hanging.
SirD
5/28/19, 11:52 AM
OMG That was hot!!!! please do a chapter 2
5/28/19, 7:43 AM
I am enjoying this series some good writing.....My question is about Alex's parents, yes he has been "jocked" but he will be going home at the end of the day....how does he get his parents to accept the same new values that he now has
Anonymous
5/28/19, 5:05 AM
The apartment is wired as a pay-per-view porn site. Those mind-controlled into the space are the unwittingly stars. Site viewers pay to make requests. The more they pay, the more exotic the request can be. Then at some point one of the viewers does something that results in him becoming the latest newly recruited star.
Anonymous
5/28/19, 2:35 AM
Please do continue!
Jun 21, 2007
Anonymous
5/28/19, 1:43 AM
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Stephan
5/28/19, 12:54 AM
Wow, man, this is amazingly hot. I hope there is more to come! Pushes all my buttons. Thanks!
Evan
5/28/19, 12:41 AM
Loved more of the Bull milking. Great second chapter, thank you!
5/28/19, 12:27 AM
And we've hit full blown horror movie.
5/28/19, 12:10 AM
Another cum-worthy chapter! Really enjoyed the detailed transformation scene. Looking forward to reading more!
Anonymous
5/28/19, 12:00 AM
great!! i love it, bro
LeadPb
5/27/19, 10:50 PM
I would have followed along if not for the fact that I'm instructed to not care about McJohnny down there. But I can see how this works, and it was really hot reading it, despite having read almost nothing at all. I think it's more intimate this way, as though you and I were sharing a moment, and it's a different kind of "hotness" that I rather enjoyed. I totally dig this.
SirD
5/27/19, 10:22 PM
looked the story but would have like more sex at the end
Anonymous
5/27/19, 9:28 PM
loved it - had me jerking off with the haircut but was careful not to cum.
May 27, 2019
Anonymous
5/27/19, 9:27 PM
Loved it!! Dominated and controlled. Makes me hard.
Anonymous
5/27/19, 9:25 PM
Those who can, do. Those who can't, criticize.
5/27/19, 9:02 PM
This has potential. It was a little quick for me, I like a few more details but the idea is good. More characters, yes.
Anonymous
5/27/19, 8:28 PM
Turn Jared either into an adult baby or a complete sissy. With Connor as his Daddy either way.
Gus
5/27/19, 8:12 PM
You're gonna be my happy horny hypno toy babe
Anonymous
5/27/19, 7:19 PM
I feel like Willie Cici's stories always follow the exact same trend/line
Anonymous
5/27/19, 4:48 PM
Ho Hum. Can't say I've never read anything exactly like this before. Willie Ceci is writing too much, too fast.
Anonymous
5/27/19, 4:43 PM
The fuck scene at the end is so hot!
Anonymous
5/27/19, 4:34 PM
thanks everyone who liked my idea for a classical music major into a bad boy rocker. if Dylan decides not pursue this idea, I may attempt to write something inspired by this idea, though I can say with a guarantee that if I do write in a sex scene it would not be as beautifully written.
Anonymous
5/27/19, 4:31 PM
a favorite chapter in a favorite story... so well written... so hot...
Evan
5/27/19, 2:34 PM
Thanks, PupScout! That's a good question. I suspect the Sergeant is not necessarily a one fuckslave sort of man and the others probably have some sort of latent programming waiting to be unleashed when the mood strikes him. So glad you liked the potency of the Sergeant's cum. Hopefully have more stories soon. Thanks so much for the comment.
The grand watcher
5/27/19, 11:25 AM
After reading the first chapter i wanted to read more and this chapter didn't disappoint keeping to the style of the original but adding something new, some might feel it is a little light then the first chapter but what has this chapter has great potenial. I did feel however that the mindcontrol was abit light but other than that it was a great entry and cant wait to read more from you wether it is another entry in this series or a new one.
bikerbro
5/27/19, 4:33 AM
Lemme tell you, I've read a crazy amount of erotic TFs over the years, on a wide range of sites, and not once did I ever come across a story where the sex got me off...til now. There's just something about the way you write it, I can practically feel myself experiencing every act, as both top AND bottom. So, high praise there for someone who's usually only in it for the shift! Speaking of, it's like you're going through all my kinks - the power bottom, the muscle jock { which, lemme say, I LOVE your portrayal of. Much more realistic, human, than the 'hur dur me dum' type } - so, why not continue that streak with a lean rocker, or leather clad 'bad boy'? Seems like the cast could do with someone a li'l' rough around the edges, if you catch my drift. Will be eagerly following this series. Wishing both it and yourself all the best, man.
5/27/19, 4:09 AM
The comments made me check this out, and boy am I glad. Both chapters are super hot, and I gotta agree with the comment above about seeing a classical music major get turned into a rock god. Poor Katie, though. Maybe she'll come under the wing of a butch coach on campus who is running her own indoctrination program on a lesbian fiction site.