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Randmperson2
5/24/19, 3:12 AM
Agreed! I really enjoyed this one and I'm looking forward to future stories from you! Keep it up!
5/24/19, 2:49 AM
At the beginning I thought this was going to be a different character telling the same story as Officer O'Connor. But oh, we had jocks and coaches, with a firehouse as transformation central. Who could ask for more? And the gradual transformation as he wrote in his diary was great. And ending at firehouse transformation central to become a true Musclehead. Perfect!
Anonymous
5/24/19, 12:41 AM
Great debut! Always love a good mental descent. :)
Anonymous
5/23/19, 11:28 PM
maybe you could make a vore universe that would be hot as the devil
tomozco
5/23/19, 11:06 PM
This is getting even more exciting!
matt
5/23/19, 7:32 PM
for a first effort extremely well written, great idea and execution.
Anonymous
5/23/19, 12:26 PM
I agree with dems, wish it was him who topped the daddy. oh well, it's still good though.
Mar 6, 2019
Anonymous
5/23/19, 12:13 PM
green arrow is, canonically bisexual
Anonymous
5/23/19, 11:43 AM
Great story! A writer's note: you switch here between past and present. This is one thing that tends to take me out of the story because I have to keep adjusting my frame of reference (take this with a grain of salt, however; it might just be something that bothers me and no one else). Otherwise, super hot! Keep writing!
UchihaDEMS
5/23/19, 5:50 AM
Welp, kinda sad its him wanting to bottom for the daddy but don't worry about it. Its amazing non the less.
Anonymous
5/23/19, 5:28 AM
Touchstone can you be my daddy?
Anonymous
5/23/19, 5:20 AM
So HOT
Anonymous
5/23/19, 5:02 AM
Hope there's a sequel in the works!
boi98229
5/23/19, 4:38 AM
Everyone else who has made a comment seems like a long-time fan. As your newest over-the-top fan, i just have to agree with everyone else how hot this story is! i love the way in which you reveal both to Sleepy Boy and the readers over the course of the story the truth of what happened in the past, including the already made ultimate decision that Sleepy Boy will be leaving his girlfriend in order to live his life as Daddy's hypno-responsive submissive/slave. i also love the way in which the sub is in effect hypnotized and seduced all over again while his mind slowly opens to his immediate past, and he re-experiences for the first time his surrender to Daddy's dominant control, charismatic voice, loving touch, and addictive pheromones. As the reader (and a sub) i re-experienced the past just as Sleepy Boy did, feeling the same cloudy mind and growing submission. (i shamefully admit though that i couldn't read far enough to get Daddy's command before i came. i probably deserve Daddy's discipline.) i love this story!! Thanks so much for sharing your imagination and writing talents. ~david
ForgottenCradle
5/23/19, 3:16 AM
oh,damn...this was what I needed tonight
LOHWPR
5/23/19, 2:35 AM
More Please
Anonymous
5/23/19, 2:25 AM
This series overall is wonderful with some fantastic ideas. i always loved the original Area 51 story and this series is an exciting continuation.
Anonymous
5/23/19, 1:09 AM
*elmo doll in flames* YEEEEESSSSSSSSS! I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS FOR SO LONG!
Anonymous
5/22/19, 10:11 PM
this was so good!! please keep writing more!
Anonymous
5/22/19, 9:56 PM
Take as much time as you need. We'll be patiently waiting until you're next masterpiece. <3
Mar 13, 2019
MicroModal
5/22/19, 9:17 PM
Great Story! Very hot and left me wanting more!
Anonymous
5/22/19, 9:03 PM
This was excellent! My only problem is that I should not have read it at work...I've got a massive erection that's not going down any time soon. Oh well... :-)
May 22, 2019
Kevmccoy
5/22/19, 7:18 PM
I like the feminization aspect and would love to see Alex follow Brads lead
5/22/19, 5:00 PM
> how firstly Smartiak 6 got turned and how his inner programming has now been linked to serving Rex in any ways possible > My sex-bot wants to become a REAL boy!
Anonymous
5/22/19, 4:04 PM
another chapter please!
malskin
5/22/19, 3:33 PM
i dont know why, but for me some of the bits that turn me on is how firstly Smartiak 6 got turned and how his inner programming has now been linked to serving Rex in any ways possible
5/22/19, 3:23 PM
After reading it a lot, I come to the conclusion that I didn't like how fast Darius became Darry, when the best part was starting of him perceiving he was turning dumb just like Josh and Vince, BOOM, not Darius anymore. I guess it would be great if there was a phone call to Ahmed, so the two discussed Darius transformation and Darius had to deal more with his dumbing. That side, I am still really grateful for this great reading.
5/22/19, 3:19 PM
I wish I could guarantee there was more to come in a short space of time! Alas. Will try to wrap this one up before i disappear again this time though :p
Anonymous
5/22/19, 3:10 PM
AMAZING Work. How the HELL does someone get an internship into these places in Touchstone's stories? Asking for a friend.
Anonymous
5/22/19, 3:04 PM
3 Touchstone stories released in the same month?! THANK YOU. I never thought I'd be so turned on by a story where the "boy" was in control, but here we are. <3