This story is FAR more engaging than it isarousing....make no mistake, however...I like it

Utterly emthralling

heading towards a true masterwork

Please make more! :) I love your stories

can't wait to see where this goes.

Fantastic story! I love the conflicted, confusing feelings that Sean experiences in this. Please consider writing a chapter 2. I really like the wedding and closet case ideas above.

love this second part would love to see many more chapters.

Second reading was even better than the first. What a well crafted piece of writing!

I am sorry, but this was not a good story st all, IMHO. Ive never enjoyed kidnapping scenes or forced behavior scenes.

I kinda want Katie to expose him. That'd be really cool. You never see the bad guys lose here.

I just love this story, hope you can someday give it a continuation

Poor Katie :( I feel bad for her

Okay, so, MaxOutMale is a story a lot of cats seem hella pumped for, yeah? And I've got the link open in my browser so I'm like, yeah, man, I'll review it or something. But I dunno, dude. I didn't actually read this or anything cause I checked out after it turned out boardin wasn't the central focus. You'll never catch me tripping when it comes to boardin and shit, I mean if you give me a time of day and a place, I'm probably there, busting some tricks up in that bitch like a total, and I quote, bitch-ass-motherfucker. Kevin* didn't believe me 'cause he's a lil douche and all but I said "nah that's cool dude, you're entitled to your opinion and I respect that" only I didn't say that 'cause I don't think I mentioned this yet but he's a lil douche, and lil douches get smacked. That said, I wasn't about to let him totally cramp my style like that so I had him name a time and a place and you'd better believe I busted tricks up in that bitch like a total, and I quote, bitch-ass-motherfucker. Anyway that's the story of why I'm never being invited to a family funeral again but lemme just say, great story broseph, especially the part about the skate shop. Uncle Lorenzo totally had one of those too, may he RIP. Well I mean its probably hard to RIP after your corpse has totally been decapitated by a skateboard but y'know *a lil douche

very interesting man, excellent job, nothing more to say, I'm just think, that think the girls about the change in the boys

Fantastic

Really enjoyed this chapter.

Code alrdy sent to ur email.And I know my request is a tough one so it's okay.But if u feel like in the mood,maybe a spinoff story of Super Suckers about Starbull, Comet,Hammer or any other heroes's detailed captures and some hot slave trainings would be also be great substitute.Am I too greedy?Xd

Hi. My email is just underneath the byline for this story. You can use that to contact me. Unfortunately, while I certainly appreciate the gesture, I just don't have time to get into a book like that at the moment.

I did not expected the master to be a Twink... I mean, I prefer the master to be the small one so... yeah, this makes me happy. Sadly, not many do that so good job! <3

Really liked Barry's empty-headedness bit with the selfies and show offness. Would enjoy another bit of him. Great second chapter, overall, too

WOULD LOVE LOVE a new story where something similar happens to a super alpha superhero!.. a 6'6 375 pounds of hairy musclebound body of a GOD that makes a pro bodybuilder look sickly and puny! whose also literally breathtakingly incredibly handsome (think the famous david blue eyed beast character artwork creation!) and beyond straight and yet at the same time cocky as hell but morally a goody two shoes, with always a wink at the ladies who throw themselves at him around the world..he a incorrigible flirt but yet gets away with it because well he's not a whore even though he could be the ultimate male whore and he is a good superhero always saving mankind... perhaps his name is i don't know SUPREME MAN?.. anyway, would love to read a long, long detailed (no wham bam thank you mame quickie) story with quite a number of chapters, where i don't know perhaps "SUPREME MAN" is visiting a local high school to give a speech and the secretly gay coach whose a alpha himself normally but NOTHING compared to SUPREME MAN somehow finds out that this ultimate ladies man super power superhero has one secret weakness that he himself has no idea he has! he is susceptible to young male pheremones and when in contact his brain goes to mush, his sexuality is no longer restrained and he can be easily manipulated into superhero on barely legal young man on man activity! the coach first realized this when he saw the superhero at a function and saw how the superhero started to sweat and literally tremble and quiver when he was giving autographs to some twinky wimpy effeminate young men... the pheremones that such particular young men give off are PARTICULAR super powerful on Supreme MAN!... is it thus when the coaches corrupt kinky pervy plan to convert the ULTIMATE MAN begins.. IT IS WHO who urges the principal to invite SUPREME MAN to give a speech at the all boys school about leadership, morality and ethical behavior.... In the end, Supreme man forever is captured, conquered and converted.. a secret young male lover who gives and receives and can't get enough, although he always struggles with this "wrong" behavior and never understands WHY he acts like this, clueless to the makeup of his own body... saving the world and flirting with the ladies, but always ALWAYS it's the young men he has no choice to go to and give him up his sexuality to.... The coach of course knows of the gay young men at the school and lets them in on his entire devious plan.. it's the ULTIMATE ROLE REVERSAL POWER TRIP FOR THE COACH AND THE YOUNG GAY MEN!....

Great story! Points for originality. hope it keeps going.

You are doing such a great job with this story, hope there is more to come

What about the baseball players? Whats going to happen to them? Cant wait till the next chapter

Wow, really HOT... I'm really liking this story! PLEASE keep it coming, I want to see the action of Dave and Hal

Loved the original so keep up the good work. I hope it spreads more and more. I always wanted to see a sequel to the original; more at the school, all those boys going home, college. <3

This is such a great series! thank you for posting

Hoottt, please make some humiliation in the next phases.

fuck I'm so glad you wrote another chapter. Can wait for the next. Thanks you so much for writing !

Excellent work